Bas Ek Pal Note pg.61 [08/09] - Page 24

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Posted: 18 years ago
Well well an almost kiss, a button stiching and you had to stop just when the action was hotting up!! 😉 Well done, looking forward to the next update.
Somali
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Maro

yaar you have brought back some fabalous memories back,god i miss those days.that was fabalous,very romantic.nice to see both of them gettin comfortable with one another.Ranveer is too cute,and I hope Rano picks the phone up when he calls on the no she gave. 😆 😆 the endin was so intense,really excited abt the next part.cant wait,plz plz continue soon. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Maro, u brought back fond memories of KS. The button sewing scene...haiii...eyes locking and Jai so wanted to kiss Bani but that useless, GFN Tony had to come in at the wrong moment..arghhh 🤢

And Bani..don't worry ..Jai is soo bloody attracted to you..he just has to admit it to himself soon...men are dense in such matters the sparks of jealousy that Jai has felt on seeing men ogling at his beautiful wife is a good start.

Maro, the final sequence of our couple being stranded on the road in the rain, getting wet...yaar abh toh in dono ke beech kuch ho jana chahiye 😉 😳
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siumi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Maro, thx for a long update, it's very nice of you 😊 😊

I'm loving it, now I wonder what will happen next 😕 😉 😛

continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awwww 😳 Bani looking all sexy and now she is crying also, hope that car starts and they reach home and Jai makes up for snapping at Dear Bani Big time 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
lovely update.................
poor bani she was snapped by jai and now wats jai gonna do..............
keep updating
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part....pls update everyday with long long longggggggggggggg parts....cant wait to read more 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg

i luv this ff

where have i been ?

i havent read it in ages !!!!

but i just caught up from part 2-8 and it is great !!!

awwww they are getting more and more comfortable wit each other

so sweet !!!

aww poor ranveer, rano dnt like him
well maybe she does but she isnt amiting it

great parts
and ctn soon

dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey...i'm a silent reader so thought i'd comment. Loved the update!! Guess they're starting to comfy with each other...hope you continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Chapter Nine

Disclaimer: People under 18 and adults who don't like aheem aheem parts than it's better if you people stay away and not read this part.

Jai looked at Bani and felt bad for making her cry. It was raining so heavily and they were both drenched from head to toe. He peaked out the window and in the far distance he saw a light shining. He squinted his eyes to see more accurately and he saw a medium sized house.

He glanced at Bani who was now stifling her cries. "Bani I think I see a house, maybe they can help us," Jai said gently. She didn't say anything but nodded her head. Jai stepped out of the car and waited for Bani. The rain poured on them and Jai saw Bani shivering.

He took of his coat and hung it over her shoulders to give her some warmth and protection from the rain. The path was dark with no one in sight. Jai just followed the light trying to reach the house. He felt Bani's breathing become rapid and he knew she was scared.

He reassuringly held onto her hand and didn't let go since he didn't want her to get lost. Bani stayed close to him feeling safe and secure with his hand holding onto hers. Finally they reached the house and Jai rung the doorbell. Couple of minutes later an old man opened the door.

The old man peered out the window first to see who it was and when he saw a young couple he opened the door. He put his glasses on and rubbed his eyes. "Sorry for the trouble but our car has broken down and I was hoping if I could use your phone," Jai spoke.

"With this much rain the phone lines are down," the old man replied gently. "If you would like to you can stay in the outhouse for the night," the old man offered. "If you don't mind than that would be great," Jai smiled. "We usually use it as a guest house anyways so it doesn't matter," the old man said.

He led them to the outhouse and opened the door. "You two are drenched. I will tell my wife to bring you some dry clothes," he said kindly. "Thanks," Jai replied and with that the old man left. Jai sighed deeply thinking the old man was so kind and they were lucky to find a room to spend the night in.

They went inside the room and Jai saw a fireplace at the side so he lit it to make the room warmer. A couple minutes later a friendly old woman knocked on their door giving them towels and dry clothes. Bani had already gone to the bathroom when they first had come in so the only bathroom was occupied.

Jai knocked on the bathroom door lightly. Bani opened it a little bit to see what Jai wanted. "Here are some towels and dry clothes," he muttered. "Thanks," Bani took it and closed the door. She dried herself up taking off the wet saree that clung to her body.

She wore the big white shirt Jai had given her and looked at what else he gave her to wear. She saw white cotton shorts. She wore them and realized that they exposed most of her legs. Oh man how am I supposed to go out like this, she thought. She was uncomfortable wearing the small shorts and going out in front of Jai.

Outside in the room Jai unbuttoned his white shirt that was transparent now. He took off the rest of his clothing drying himself up with the towel. Than he wore his clothes and realized he took the white cotton pants and gave the shorts to Bani.

Oh well he thought and took a blanket wrapping it around himself. He sat on the wooden floor near the fireplace and rubbed his hands together keeping warm. Time passed by but he still didn't see Bani come out. Finally he knocked on the door to check if she was okay.

"Bani are you okay in there?" Jai asked concerned. "Yeah I'm fine," Bani uttered. Jai went back and sat down near the fireplace. In the bathroom Bani was still thinking if she should go outside in the shorts. I can't sleep in here, she thought and with that she stepped outside cautiously.

Jai turned around to hear a click of the door and to see Bani come out. Her hair was still wet and the shirt she was wearing was big on her petite body coming off the shoulders a bit seductively. Thank god I gave her the cotton shorts Jai smiled.

Her long slender legs showed off her silky looking skin. Jai wanted to move his hand across her legs to feel that smooth soft skin. Bani looked uncomfortable and she made it obvious pulling down the shorts a bit wishing it would cover her legs.

Jai turned his head around feeling her shyness and she joined him at the fireplace wanting to get warm first before going off to bed. She sat down beside him and Jai shared the blanket with her so now they both were curled up together. He took quick peeks at her and saw the redness of her eyes.

That was due to the crying he figured guiltily and felt he needed to apologize for snapping at her. "Um Bani I'm sorry for yelling at you before in the car. I was getting frustrated and I took it out on you," he said apologizing. "It's alright," she mumbled hearing his genuine apology.

"Does that mean I'm forgiven," Jai asked. Bani nodded looking into his big muddy eyes. There was a big lightening sound all of a sudden and Bani hugged Jai with fear. As Jai felt her body pressed against his and her hands on his chest he felt his body tense up.

"It's only lightening," he whispered in her ear. She let go of him slowly and blushed at her action. Jai couldn't take it anymore and he cupped her face slowly bringing his face closer. Bani's heart began to race looking at his passion filled eyes that made her stomach do flips.

He finally closed his warm mouth over her soft lips. The feelings that overcame Bani were so new she just went everywhere Jai guided her. Jai's tongue urged her to open up and Bani let in after a while. He probed in her mouth and their tongues created magic as it slid beneath each other.

The fire in the fireplace was adding heat to the blazing fire that was ignited in both of their bodies. As the heat turned up Bani felt herself on the floor with Jai on top of her. She couldn't feel her lips after a while and she moaned as Jai's hands started to discover her.

He left her lips and went down to kiss her neck dropping heated kisses on the collar bone. He raised her shirt up to expose her flat soft stomach. Ever since he saw her in that pink saree showing off her stomach under the transparent material he wanted to kiss it and now it was a dream come true.

He lowered his head and placed butterfly kisses on it dipping his tongue in the navel. Her fingers entangled themselves with his thick black hair. He caressed the silkiness of her stomach and his hands moved up to her bra. He quickly unclipped it lifting her back off the floor a bit.

Taking the bra off than removing the shirt completely. His eyes filled with incontrollable passion his fingers moved on her br**sts moving closer onto her ni**les. She arched her back off the floor clutching the blanket with her hands. He moved his hands in expertise caressing her br**sts fondling them with such care and passion.

Later his mouth found his way and that's when Bani felt a burst of joy in her body. He covered the ni**le with his mouth and sucked making her wriggle underneath him. He gave her body parts all the attention until her body craved for Jai to make Bani his internally.

He didn't want to hurt her while they continued on the floor so he got up and Bani wondered if he didn't want to make love to her which brought tears to her eyes. Jai lifted her off the floor and laid her gently on the bed. He saw tears flowing down her face. "What happened did I hurt you?" Jai asked her in concerned voice. "No when you got up I thought you didn't want to…" she paused.

"Of course I want to make love to you Bani," he whispered holding her face. He kissed her tears away and held her firmly against his body. Than he discarded his clothes looking at her. Later when all clothes were off and they were skin to skin he glanced at her.

She did have a scared face but she was so aroused that it didn't really matter to her. As he made her his, she clutched his shoulders this time burying her head in his shoulder. She marked his back with her nails and he licked off the tears that spilled down her face.

Their bodies responded to each other throughout their sexual experience moving with the same rhythm and compatibility. Jai drowned Bani's high-pitched moans in his mouth as she neared climax. Her hands made wonders on his body and a shudder took over him.

At the wee of hours of night when both were exhausted and deadly tired they fell into each others arms. Jai took a look at Bani's peaceful face that had a smile playing across it. He held her tighter to himself and kissed her lightly on the lips as she laid on his chest. She moved a little than kissed his chest and fell into deep slumber.

Hey guys, sorry if the part was too explicit or not what you had been expecting. Thanks for the comments, loved reading them and gave me a boost of energy to write more. Hope you guys liked it and please leave comments.

Maro😛

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