Bas Ek Pal Note pg.61 [08/09] - Page 23

Fab updates
loved it.
plz cont. soon.

wow great part 😉
what are they going to do now? 😉 😉 😉

Taj

omg!!..JB stuck in their car in such a romantic weather!! 😳 😳 😉 ..hehe..wats gonna happen NOW!! 😉 ....Jaiz jealous!! 😉 😳 ...yaar it was tooo short!! 😕 😉 ..waitin eagerly for the next update! 😃

Hi Maro,

omg.....omg.....omg.....omg Jai and Bani stuck in a car drenched....whats gonna happen next 😉.

You have to continue soon.....pretty please 😛 .

Nikita

Oy hoy....

2 people..

stranded in the middle of the road

car is broken down

u have a crying gal....😭

a confused guy!! 😕

And its raining 😳 ....

lets see wat happens!!!


and this part was short!!!.. write a more longer one!!

plz!! 😳

so jai is feeling something for bani i fnot for that interuption i m sure he would have kissed bani and one thing would have lead to another ahem ahem and now he is feeling jealous of other man looking at bani and talking about her o boy o boy whats gonna happen next pls cont soon maybe another update tonight would be great if not then tommorrow sounds good too.............please please

OMGGGGGGG Maro that was a JDD moment the button sewing scene 😍 haila...puraane din yaad aagayi... 😭 😭 😭 Jai is falling, no... HAS now fallen for Bani 😃 ...was about to kiss...when kambakht Tony aa mara!!! 😡😆

Jai and Bani at the party...haila....Jai getting jealous at all the other men drooling over his wife 😆 ..oooohhhh...tabiyat toh kharaab honi hi thi!!! 😉

And the last par oh my god 😲...the car has broken down 😲 😲...both are drenched 😲 😲 😲...sun saan raasta 😉...ok let me shut up bahut filmi ho raha tha!!! 😳 😆 😆

And Marooooooooooo u ended it there 😡 😡 ...thoda aur lamba karde deti...i like reading long updates...now tell me when u posting the next part!!!! I demand an update!
Pweeeeesssseeee....😊

Fantastic update Maro...loved reading it! 😃
Tazo!! 🤗

oo jelaousy! 😉 nice!
nice part loves rano's - 1-800- nto interested(or soemthing like that) 😆

loved the length! 😉

another great update maro! totally loved it.

Yeh Tony bhi na, hamesha wrong time par hi kyun har jagga aata hai? couldn't he have waited couple of more minutes before interupting! 😡

I hope JB will open up a bit more and get close soon!

Omg, 1800-not interested was really cute! Rano is really a hard chick to get, eh? I can't wait to see how Ranveer will woo the Princess lol!

great update again! continue soon!

Anam

thanks .....it was a very nice update..
cont.soon