FF: Rain Maker (Epi & A/N - Pg 82) - Page 63

Jai & Bani can't separate.Its not their fault that PRi fell in love with Jai. AJi isn't going to be with PRi so whats the point of Bani leavig Jai.

I can't see three people misrable for n reason.

Sorry I didn't like the part.

Its like an arty melodramaic movie where people separate just for hake of it.

i hope you don't get offended.

Had liked it so far but.....

aww bristy


great part !!!! 👏

omg it wss soo sad !!

aww poor jai
poor bani
poor pri

poor everying else !!!!!!

god i almost feel like crying
buh i wnt !! 😉

i want option a and b !!
can i choose two ?

ctn SOON !!!!

Hiya

Great part.....reality does hurt doesn't it.

I would love to see option B...a short leap and maybe a miracle like JB coming together 😉.

Please continue soon.

Nikita

Just continue writing - option a or b is fine...Enjoyed reading the Bengali lines and trying to figure out what they meant before reading the English ones...Nice to see a different ending once in a while..
👏 👏 👏

i think you should take a leap...cause i love the way you write stories...

or you can end this one with a epilogue and start a new one...

looking forward to your decision
ck

B
B
B
B
small leap 😛

Brishty..I am glad your three main protagonists of the story are moving on ahead with their lives. This is how things happen in real life. But still..I felt sad for Jai and Bani....I had initially thought that I'd come after you with jhootas and belans but then thought that you could probably move the story forward with a leap and then maybe JB could back together again. The moral of this story would be that true love does not fail 😊

Thanks ragamthalam , xindian_babyeex for the suggestion..




Taj


Thanks, okie, okie, no need to get hyper 😃...let's see what happens.....😆😆...thanks for your suggestion



Tanz


I knew you would choose C...😃.......ghar ki dushman zyada khatarnak hota hai, right? 😆😆



Short? It's not short....😕


Yep, they did....


My choice? If I was able to choose, should I've asked you? 😛




suwas


Well, look around yourself a bit. It's not like that it has to be someones fault, no one is blaming Jai and Bani......and just put yourself in one of their place. It's not easy to decide something like that.......and life is not like this that, he won't go to her, so why not I take her....there's something called emotion in this life



I don't get offended so easily, thanks for your point of view...



Dammy


Hi Jaan, don't cry....🤗


Ahem, both? how can that happen? 😆😆...may be I should choose C instead..😉



nikita


Thanks 😊, it does hurt...


Thanks for your opinions.....😃


Will try to continue soon



Bina


Thanks! Wow, you understand Bengali?




CK


Thanks dear, for the suggestion..it's great to know that you enjoy reading my stories....



Hm, let's see what others say and then I'll decide 😃



Sadaf


Thank you Sadaf, for being so supportive...😆


hey, I love your moral, may be just because of this I can get Jai and Bani back......😃😃

hey Bristy,

it was a nice part loved d conversation between Jai n Pri they din hav ne bitterness in them just wr sorry tht life played a cruel joke ..
if u ask me i think u should finish this 1 n start sumthin new coz if u continue this story it would feel like u r draggin it (just my frank opinion)

its ur decision whtever u do i m waitin to read
benazir

Epilogue



Heard the rhythm of the raindrops
Dripping to the ground.
Heard the rhythm of the raindrops
Dropping all around.
Heard the rhythm of the raindrops
Drumming on the rafter.
Heard the rhythm of the raindrops
Drowning out our laughter




Jai heard the song for sometime then unplugged the earphones from his ear. He was due to a meeting. Instructing his PA, he got out of his office. A limosine was waiting for him there. He got in and the car zoomed off.


Life has given him every success a man could think of. He has taken the company to such a state that it was an empire now. He's made success kiss his feet in a way that the word 'tycoon' is being with his name by all. His success was news, his each step was discussed, and his words were rule.




His family has moved to Canada with him and Cissy was better now. it's not like that she's completely normal, but at least she's bearable. Jai is seriously thinking of adopting a child, but his schedule is not letting him.


Right now, he's planning to spread his business in middle east. This scheme is demanding him to work harder than before. But he wishes to spread his business all through the world, he's no intention to stop any time soon.




.................




Bani Dixit beamed as the crowd clappend and cheered. She held the award high and smiled at the camera. while getting down from the stage, the reporters gathered round her to ask her some questions.




Though she worked as a computer engineer in a software firm, she has taken dancing as her real profession. It was her passion to dance. It is something she will never get tired of. She's opened a dance school for kids and enjoyed teaching there as well as she enjoyed doing stage performances.


She's done several dance shows, stage performances and has won a few awards. As she added the latest award in rack, a serious problem occurred to her. Her show case was over crowded. It's high time she makes another show case, just for the awards. The thought made her smile. One day, she will made that one over crowded, that was for sure..




As for marriage, she'll think of this later!



...............



Over the last four years, Priyanka Mehta achieved many things. She achieved her F.R.C.S degree, special degree on neurosurgery, trust and faith of hundreds of patient, honour and praise from fellow doctors and what not.




She's proved herself against all odd. And last month there was a feature on her in a weekly tabloid, where they mentioned her as "Someone born to be doctor."




Well, she thought they were exaggerating and she was still stupid and dumb. May be that's why she was unable to believe the offer she got from Bumrungrud Hospital, Bangkok to work there as a surgeon. After consulting with in with her parents and discussing it with her friends, she decided to take it.


By the warm welcome she got there, she knew that her whole life has been already dedicated to medicine.




..................




Puskar Shukla, tired of running behind Pri, gave her up and married Tanu two years back. They were happy with each other the last time I heard of them.


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And as for the others, really, who does care?

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The End