FF: Rain Maker (Epi & A/N - Pg 82) - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was a wonderful part pls cont soon bring jai back soon in bani's life
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Posted: 18 years ago
naa, aar shojo hoi naa...ami toh thomake pitathe aaschi... 😡 ki korcho...amaderke torture...uff...ami kinto kandbo... 😭 when will JB finally meet...i think i want to see them meet even more than they want to meet... 😳 ...lol...that pri and pushy scene was totally cute...you gp pushy...u marry pri so then the JB line will be totally clear...no kabab mein hadis... 😆 😆 😆 eh ki...jai aar crissy kothai jaache...or should i say 'aasche' 😉 😉 😉 ...lol...you know what is sad...we all know a rajon... ...there is alway that guy who thinks he is gods gift to woman kind... 🤢 ...he he he...

ok...aibaar sothi bolchi...i want JB meeting...ami chai chai chai!!!!!...if not...i will put such a twist on my ff...no one will be happy...shobay shudu kandbe 😈...boo boo...u say something naa... 😭 😭 😭
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
I like Shiv and Sahil, cute characters.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Bristy dear... you made me laugh with that 'adbhoot' song!! where did you get it??? it was hilarious and the best part. the second best thing was PP, by now you have realised that i love them in the ff. okay that history question!! that was a good tactic! and finally the classroom incident was so interesting! it happens specially at the back bench! so overall i loved this update! keep it up (don't show any mercy on AD, do whatever you like)
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Posted: 18 years ago


Swati



Thank you very much dear, will try to teach AD a lesson for being "A" man...😛




Sadaf



Aw, Pusky is never gonna give up on Pri, that's for sure...keep your fingers crossed...let's see what I can give to you..

Hmm, this two twins are enoough for AD, they are going to be the prolem creators for AD...



Humera


It's ok darling...Computer problem bothers all of us some way or other 😊


Thank you very much sweety..😳


Hmm, dekhte he Pri manjate hain ya nahi...


As for AD, I can't say yet if he falls for Bani or not...


wil try to cont soon..😊


Rama



Thank you very much dear...i tried hard to make this funny, now i'm relieved that you had that much laugh.....hehe you liked the song...😆😆😆


Rano n shihab are devils, well the other friends are devils as well, they all are waiting for chances...😉


Thank you once again dear, and J n c aren't coming to India...they are coming to BD yaar..😛



Tanu



Thank you Tanu dear...I'm a well known devil and I've got my dictionary for support...will find lots more words with A 😆😆😆



Yes, PUsky is quite determined to get Pri...


Hmm, it's tough to look after an autistic child, just wanted to show this point...

Thank you once again jaan, and it's long cause your one was long, you dare to decrease your one's length then you'll see what I do with my one....




Minu



Awww...thank you very much Sweety for this lovely comment...😳


Yes, Bani is indeed missing Jai...and I brought Pusky as everyone was at the verge of threatenign me...😆


You are welcome, I'm glad that you are not bored with the long long update....😛




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Posted: 18 years ago



Dammy


Thank you very much yaar...😃


Hm, I tried to make it enough funny...yes Pusk deffo wants to marry Pri..he's serious on her....

Thank you once again...and will try to cont soon

And, how many times I need to tell you don't thank me for PMs? 😆




Khushboo



Thank you very much dear...😊


Dictionary niye ghure na...dictionary'r pata chire chire pani diye gile khay....😃😃😃....


Don't worry..first he'll learn all the english words wiht A, then all the Hindi words, then all the bangla ones, then french, japaneses, italian and on and on....😆


The song was perfect...you don't know how pleased I'm with this complement as i myself wrote this song only for AD 😉


Twinkle



Thank you very much dear 😊


Yes, poor Bani is missing Jai..😔


Yeah, i'm with you..Go Puskar...let's see what happens next...will try to update soon...


Ash


Thank you very much darling.....😊😊




Jignu


Thank you sweet heart...😳


You meant to say you were not cracked up before....don't blame innocent Puskar jaan....😆😆😆


The twins are going to be fun...and I'm not updating somewhere in near future...I'm too lazy to write anything now...😃


Janu



Thank you very much darling, I'll try my best to update soon..😊



Amiee


Thank you soo much, will try to do as directed 😛



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Posted: 18 years ago


Jaz



Oma..kande na..kande na...I'm Sowwiieee...😭...mair ke ami boroi voy pai...so no mair...JB meeting at next part...100% confirmation..jao...


Aww...that's what we call as Pagol vokto...


Haha, I'll send your wishes to PP off course...Hmm every character of my FF is picked up from just beside us...I've not gone for some extra ordinary characters....that's why, there isn't even one character here who is totally positive or totally negative....😊



Naaaaaaa! don't you dare to do anything with your FF, I promised na that I'll let them meet on the next part...don't blackmail such a poor soul like me...😔😆😆



Sabye


Thank you very much darling...😊



Reeshi


Thank you very much dear...it has to be perfect cause I wrote it myself for AD 😆😆😆


thank you once again, will try to keep it up..



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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Bristy, great update!!!!!
So the raaz if cissy is finally opened, poor Jai, wat a big responsibility on him...and the chat between Bani and Jai was so sad...hope Bani's dreams dont foreshadow wats coming up next
Pushkar is so cute, i want pushkar and pri to get together soon...
Ad in this to, his name sounds like a disease
Sahil and shiv are so cute and adorable, loved there little insight about Aparajet Deb
Continue soon!!!
Nikita
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: InTheZone123



Hey Bristy, great update!!!!! Thank you very much Nikita 😊


So the raaz if cissy is finally opened, poor Jai, wat a big responsibility on him...and the chat between Bani and Jai was so sad...hope Bani's dreams dont foreshadow wats coming up next Hmm, Jai has got some responsibilities now.....😊



Pushkar is so cute, i want pushkar and pri to get together soon... We'll see about that..😃


Ad in this to, his name sounds like a disease Aww..you've put it right, he sounds like a disease...
Sahil and shiv are so cute and adorable, loved there little insight about Aparajet Deb
Continue soon!!! will try to do so...

Nikita



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Posted: 18 years ago

Part Five

I'm singing in the rain, just singing in the rain; What a wonderful feeling, I'm happy again."


When Bani got up next morning, she was feeling a lot better. She decided to check her mail. As she saw, 4 waiting mails in her inbox from the same person, she couldn't help feeling guilty. It was a mere nightmare. And she bothered him that much. Moreover, she hasn't received any of his calls last 2 days. She felt bad for him.



I'm here with all my friends and family to support me and he's alone there. And stil…I acted like a stupid…she thought. A weak smile appeared in her face as she saw that two of the 4 mails were online greeting cards; one saying "I'm sorry for not being with you" and another said, "I love you."



Bani felt that honestly she should apologize to him. He had enough thought in his mind. She gave a quick reply to him saying Sorry. When she opened the fourth mail, she wanted to cry. There was a song attached to the mail. She slowly hit the play button…..


I cannot sleep tonight; I have you on my mind
Even the wind is calling your name
Though you are far away, I feel that you are near
Whispering words from over the sea
And if you wake in your night, remember that I will be here
And like the same sun, that's rising on the valley with the dawn
I will walk with your shadow and keep you warm
And like the same moon, that's shining through my window here tonight
I will watch in your darkness, and bring you safely to the morning light



She wanted to kick herself for making such a fuss. And she's not received his calls..Damn! How upset he'd be...she felt tears prickling her cheeks.


Where there is love like this, forever, for all time
I will be there, wherever you lie
And where there are hearts that live together in one soul
Nothing on earth will keep us apart
And if you're crying inside, remember that I will be here
And like the same sun that's rising on the valley with the dawn
I will walk with your shadow and keep you warm
And like the same moon that's shining through my window here tonight
I will watch in your darkness, and bring you safely to the morning light


Bani was practically howling now. she at once grabbed her phone and dialed Mon…the number you're dialing is currently unavailable, please try again later. Thank you.



I Love you, I love you, I love you
And if you're crying inside, remember that I will be here
And like the same sun, that's rising on the valley with the dawn
I will walk with your shadow and keep you warm
And like the same moon that's shining through my window here tonight
I will watch in your darkness and bring you safely to the morning light



The number you're dialing is currently unavailable, please try again later. Thank you.

Damn!

Same sun, same moon
Same sun, same moon
Same soul, same heart
Same World, same stars - you will be forever in my world
Same sun, same moon
Same sun, same moon
Same soul, same heart, oh, I love you I love you I love you
Same world, same stars - you will be forever in my heart


Bani threw her phone in frustration. Where the hell was he, why wasn't he picking up my calls. Suddenly a thought appeared in her mind, may be he's angry with me. He's just returning the favour. She started to pace around the house. The bell rang.



"M'aam you've got a parcel." Said the delivery boy of FedEx smiling. Bani was confused. Who'd send her a parcel? It was a quite big packet. She confusingly accepted it and opened it. Inside there was a perfect teddy bear which was wearing a red dress. A card was stuck with it's dress. The card was light pink and the writing was in golden calligraphy letters. It read…



It's not that I can't live without you
It's just that I don't even want to try
Every night I dream about you
Ever since the day we said goodbye
If I wasn't such a fool
Right now I'd be holding you
There's nothing that I wouldn't do
Baby if I only knew

The words to say
The road to take
To find a way back to your heart
What can I do
To get to you
And find a way back to your heart

I don't know how it got so crazy
But I'll do anything to set things right
Cause your love is so amazing
Baby you're the best thing in my life
Let me prove my love is real
And made you feel the way I feel
I promise I would give the world
If only you would tell me girl

The words to say
The road to take
To find a way back to your heart
What can I do
To get to you
And find a way back to your heart



I LoVe YoU…… Jai


{The teddy:
}


Bani didn't know what to do. She's surprised, delighted, enthralled; she's over the moon. Just the thought that Jai can go through this much just for her made her smile. She hugged the bear. God when did you make me so lucky…




Bani took the bear and happily went to her room to get ready for Uni. She was now humming. She put the card safely and kept the bear on her bed. She looked at it lovingly. The message tone of her mobile took her back from her dreamland. She grinned broadly to see the message was from the same person of whom she was thinking….


Aj tomar mon kharap meye, tumi anmone boshe achho
Aakash pane dristy udash, ami tomar jonno
Ene dibo, megh theke bristir jhirijhiri hawa
She haway veshe jabe tumi….




(Translation: You're sad now girl, sitting alone
Looking at the sky all alone
I'll bring the gentleness of the breeze
Of the rain from the clouds for you
You'll be blown by that…)


Bani didn't know what to say or how to react. What to say, what to reply or what to do. She was so overwhelmed by the gesture. She wrote a reply, but soon delated it. For the first time she felt that she doesn't have the proper words to describe her feelings to Jai. Finally she's able to write it..


Every little thing that you have said and done
Feels like it's deep within me
Doesn't really matter if you're on the run
It seems like we're meant to be

I don't care who you are
Where you're from
What you did
As long as you love me
Who you are
Where you're from
Don't care what you did
As long as you love me




Satisfied, she started getting ready for BUET. She took out a pair of jeans and a casual tops, but for some reason, she put it back and took out a churidar set. The kameez was hot pink, sleeveless while both the churidar and the dupatta were white. The churidar has pink thread work on it. She didn't know why she chose it as she rarely wear salwar kameezes in class.




She finished getting dressed by wearing pink ear rings, her bracelet, payels and the light kohl border in her eyes. She kissed her new teddy one last time and went out. She was happy, happier than she has been for ages. She was little confused when she saw Ranveer approaching her. The Walias still lived in their previous house, opposite Bani's one.



Ranveer scratched his head and handed her a wrapped packet. "Erm..this is for you." He said. Ranveer was always shy in front of the girls. Bani took it and asked the obvious, "Who gave it?"




"Em..Er..Jai Bhaia gave me this and told me to give this to you." Ranveer tried to smile which seemed more like crying face to Bani. She smiled at him and ruffled his hair. Ther'e no point bothering him. She went ahead and get in her car. Then slowly she unwrapped the packet. She gasped at the sight of it. It was a chocolate box in heart shape. There was a chit attached which read…

You're the air that I breathe
Girl you're all that I need
And I wanna thank you, lady
You're the words that I read
You're the light that I see
And your love is all that I need


Bani, you're all that I need to live, nothing else matters to me except you, can't you see that? Bani I Love You more than you can think, more than I, myself can believe. I want you there for me always in my life, as a friend, as a companion, as a lover…will you…

{The chocolate box: }




Bani's heart started to beat fast. Did he really mean what she's thinking. Can it happen? She took a long breath and started to drive. All her way she was tensed and excited. She can't wait to call him and talk to him. She had no sense when she reached her destination. After parking her car, she stepped out when a small girl offered her a bunch of flowers. She said that "He" told to give her this. Confused to hell, Bani took it and pulled out the card out of the bunch. It read..


Just a look in your eyes again
Just to lay in your arms
Just to be the first one always there for you
Just to live in your laughter
Just to sing in your heart
Just to be everyone of your dreams come true

Just to sit by your window
Just to touch in the night
Just to offer a prayer each day for you
Just to long for your kisses
Just to dream of your sighs
Just to know that I'd give my life for you

For you, for the rest of my life
For you, all the best of my life
For you alone, only for you

Just to wake up each morning
Just to you by my side
Just to know that you're never really far away
Just a reason for living
Just to say I adore
Just to know that you're here in my heart to stay

For you, for the rest of my life
For you, all the best of my life
For you alone, only for you

Just the words of a love song
Just the beat of my heart
Just the pledge of my life, my love, for you



Will you make this poor man the happiest by agreeing to marry him? Will you marry me, my life? …Jai




Bani almost dropped it. She wanted to scream "yes" but before that she felt a hand touching her shoulder. She jerked and turned around. She couldn't believe her eyes. There he was standing right before her. She touched him slowly, he was real! And he was smiling. He touched her face with a single red rose and asked, "So, what do you think? Will you marry me?"




The answer need not to be listened as Bani threw herself in his arms and hugged him with all her might.






Here you go, Jai is finally there...JAZ, hope that satisfy you and you let go the idea of beating me...😊......let me know what do you felt, i tried to make this special and will be glad to know your opinion..

Edited by the_rain - 18 years ago

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