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khushboo2006

@khushboo2006

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#101

Hi Simmi! 😊
Thanks for the great part dear 👏 👏 .......loved how Jai is taking care of Bani.....hope she would get well soon....liked the conversation between Bani and Krishna Walia.....hope Bani would accept Jai and tell her feelings as well......please update soon 😆

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Nikita

@InTheZone123

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#102

That was a great part Simmi

AWW, feel so bad for Bani Hope ahe gets better soon.. Jai is so sweet, he confessed his love for Bani, i hope Bani is able to do the same.

Jai's family is great and very supported. And Krishna is great to , Bani now has sort of a mother figure in her life.

Continue soon!!!
Nikita

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GoodGoneWrong

@GoodGoneWrong

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#103

brilliant part simmi...loved it....
makes me want more..
Rivs

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#104

Hey Sim!!!😊 😊

Awesome n lil sad n senty update 👏

oww bani was feeling alonly, crying, feel sad about 😭 😭 n in this situation she's thinking of jai 😳 😳

wow i was jumping with excitement when jai said I LOVE U to bani 😛 [:D/] [:D/] ❤️

krishna is shhoo nice n sweet woman 😊 😊 it was very nice part when she was explaining how bani's mom was

thx 4 updating👏 👏

plz continue soon 😛 😃 😃

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#105

Lovely part dear! 👏
We got to know a bit more about Bani's past...
Awww he took the chance and told her he loves her... 😳 😳
KW is sweet! 😉
Do continue soon.

V.

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@me_myself.&.i

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#106

nice update looking for ward to it...wow

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preet

@preet_2010

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#107

Hey Simmi

wonderful update,he finally told he loved her.beautifully written.KW is so sweet,loved how she understood Bani's inner turmoil.its so sweet to see Jai melting Bani.simply superb.looking forward to the next part. 😊

preet 😳

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#108

krishna is amazing
wow
Bani say i love you
if you don't i will do it for you

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ishita

@kool me

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#109

i read ur entire ff from de beginning n it is very beautifully penned 👏 👏 👏 ...luved de way u potray emotions 😃 ...de forthright JW n a laid back bani 😃 ....n de hardships bani had to face due to her parents its sad 😭 ....de way u described de date n de accident+injuries it was simply mind blowing 👏 ....luved every part of de ff 😊 ....pls continue soon