FF: Khamoshiya Last Part pg. 24

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

Nice update Pari, really liked it...fake marriage he he he..they can't stop falling for each other, liked bani's character very much here,

and thanks for hte pm, it really helps a lot..

do cont soon

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 18 years ago

#62

oh man that was awesome!

some sort of weird love connection! 😆 😆 😆

i loved it please cont soon!

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daviashree

@davia389

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

wow that was really nice and good. pls continue... roshini yahan bhii..
????
davia

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Rashi

@rashi85

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

thats nice..plz continue.... 👏

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Sheena

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

It was very sweet!

Bani is a good wife, very supportive... 👏

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

Pari darling,

Just got over reading both the parts that I missed and I have to say dear, wonderful, superb, lovely etc etc etc.👏

Fantastic part dear😃. Loved the way you went about describing their growing friendship and their grwoing closeness.😛😳😃

Loved it all. Can't wait fro the next partf rom you soon very very soon.😃

Love

Krishna.

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Riya

@khwaboon_mein

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

omg omg omg omg omg,

pari tune to mar dala, mein to ghayal ho gayi madhuri dixit ke jaise jab woh devdas mein thi.

😆

acha abhi mein dete hoon tumhari part 3 ki update.

omg omg omg omg, i think you've outdone yourself. the whole 5 questions thing that bani asked jai, i might try that myself. 😳

i thought it was sooooo funny, when bani got dissapointed after jai telling her that the whole wedding would be fake and the part where after bani rejected jai, jai rejected bani and bani was sad. it was funny.

and ok the ending, soo predictable. come on it's gonna be a dream. plzzzzz. who are you trying to fool 😉

hmmm.....i think it'll be like the movie Aaina <---have you seen this movie? it's an old movie with juhi chawla, jakie shroff and amrita singh. well, if you haven't watch it, i have a copy if u want. hehehe.

hmmm......hahah i don't have to wait for the next part since u already updated it. lolz. so let me find out what happend to them .lolz.

catch ya in a bit,

Riya 😃

Edited by khwaboon_mein - 18 years ago

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

wow awesome update 👏 u are very very good writer 👏
plz continue soon 😃

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Niroo

@Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

hey pari...
loved the part..
they are so comfortable with each other..
they both understand each other..tooo
heheh

continue ASAP
please

cheers
❤️Niralixxxx