FF: Khamoshiya Last Part pg. 24 - Page 18

oh wow!!!

that was sooo good!!!

Well now jai knows..

he's the father!!!!!!!!!!

oh man!! please cont soon!!!!!

Grreat update Pari....please update soon ...we are waiting eagerly....

Wow Pari... 😛 Loved it... 😃 Finally Pushkar cleared the misunderstanding... 😊 So glad... 😃 Can't wait... 😉 You're going to finish this story soon... 😭 I have read this FF from the beginning and I loved it from then... 😛 Really waiting for the next part... 😛 Where did Bani go? 😕 Hope she's okay... 😕 😭 Please please continue soon... 😛 And again, an excellent job... 😛

so atlast jai rememebered it but where is bani... mein roh padoongii 😭 😭 😭
pls continue sooon..
davia

Way to go Rano!!! 👏 👏 👏 Jai deserves this slap..Oh God, how embarrassing its for Pushy to tell JW that his wife loves him n that the kid is his!!!
Finally he atleast had a brain to think abt everything..
But now Bani si no where??? Hope she has not run away from him..Kya yaar tum bhi leap lene wali ho???
Pls no, find Bani n let Jai ask his forgiveness now n Roshini ko ek acha tamacha dena...

Hi guys,

Here is the last part to the Fanfic, thanks for all the comments and suggestions, it has been a pleasure!!

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He went outside and watched the marriage between Rano and Pushkar take place. Bani was no where to be found, he searched the entire house but there was nothing. Nothing… it was as if his heart had been ripped apart into millions of pieces.

Bani had walked out the house even before Jai had gotten there. She had just gone to a nearby store to pick up some pooja stuff that the Pundit had told her to bring. As she was coming back, Bani's head felt and dizzy and she was on the floor in the matter of seconds. People rushed to get her and took her to the hospital. She had no ID on her and so it was unclear who she was.

The doctors figured out she was pregnant, but extremely weak and her body did not have enough nutrients needed. Just then a hidden cell phone in her pocket rang and the doctor picked it.

Doctor: Hello?

Rano: Hi, who is this?

Doctor: Hi, I am Dr. Singh.

Rano: Doctor? Wait, what happened to my Di?

Doctor: She fainted and was brought to the hospital. She is very weak right now, which is dangerous for her and her child.

Rano: Oh my God.

Doctor: I will need your sister's name.

Rano: Bani Walia. I am coming there right now. What hospital?

Doctor: Life Care Hospital.

Rano hung up and looked for Jai to let him know about Bani and her condition.

Rano: Mr. Walia, I have some bad news.

Jai: What is it?

Rano: Di… she is in the hospital.

Jai: What? What hospital? Is she fine? Is the baby fine?

Rano: I don't know. We should probably go there.

Jai: Let's go.

Jai was already running out to the hospital. As soon as they got there, Rano asked the nurse for Bani's whereabouts.

Rano: Where is Mrs. Bani Walia in?

Nurse: The third door to your right, but only family members will be allowed inside.

Jai: I am her husband, goddammit is… is she okay?

Nurse: I don't know, you will have to talk to the doctor at the area.

Jai was really annoyed at the nurse, how could she not know, isn't that her job? He ran towards the room and asked the doctor there for more details.

Doctor: I can only tell any information to a relative.

Jai: Yes, yes I know. I am her husband.

Doctor: I see… well Mr. Walia, your wife is very weak physically right now and that is affecting not only her but also the baby. She needs to start eating nutritional food and she needs to take a lot of rest with no stress.

Jai: Okay. Is she fine now?

Doctor: Yah, we have hooked her up to some sugar and other nutrients. I would like to ask you, is your wife going through a really hard time right now? At work? At home?

Jai: Yah but she won't be anymore. I will make sure she will be fine.

Doctor: Good, you can go inside and see her.

Jai sat next to the bed and took Bani's hands into his. Bani slowly opened her eyes and for a second smiled before realizing everything that had happened in the past few weeks. A tear fell down her chin.

Jai: Don't cry Bani. I am so sorry for everything, you have no idea.

Bani: I do know how sorry you are.

Jai: Please forgive me.

Bani: There is nothing to forgive, as a husband you had every right to question whose baby I was carrying. But don't worry Mr. Walia the baby was yours but you will not have to take on any burden.

Jai: What are you talking about?

Bani: I know this was a contract marriage and that you want out of this so I won't put any pressure on you to support the baby or me, we will be fine.

Jai: Shut up.

Bani: What??

Jai: Shut Up. I love you Mrs. Bani Walia. Why do you think I was acting the way I was? Because I was hurt, I fell in love with you and when I thought that you were with someone else, it ripped me apart. I couldn't even stand the thought of losing you for a second.

Bani: Oh.

Jai: Is that all you have to say? Oh? I am sitting here telling you I love you and all you say is Oh.

Bani: What do you want me to say?

Jai: That you love me too would be nice.

Bani: Oh, I already said that.

Jai: What are you talking about?

Bani: That night. (Blushingly)

Jai: Oh.

Bani: And you said it, too.

Jai: Doesn't matter. I plan on saying it everyday for the next hundred years of my life and I want to hear it all that time as well.

Bani: Well, in that case, find some other girl. I am not going to say it everyday.

Jai: Bani

Bani: Mr. Walia.

Jai: I love you.

Bani: I love you too.

Jai: So, if the baby is a girl we will name her Krishna.

Bani: Krishna?

Jai: It was my mother's name.

Bani: Oh. I like that name. What if it's a boy?

Jai: Do you have a name in mind?

Bani: Atharva?

Jai: Why that name?

Bani: I used to have a boyfriend by that name.

Jai: Seriously? We are not keeping that name. Are you kidding me?

Bani: Yes, yes calm down. I am kidding. I just like the name.

Jai: Oh, in that case, I like that name too.

Bani: Were you jealous?

Jai: Of course not…

Bani: Really?

Jai: No, I was jealous. Now let's get out of here. I have to do so many things.

Bani: Like?

Jai: Like get the house ready for a new kid. It won't just be the two of us from now on, it will be three.

Bani: Let's go.

Jai picked Bani up in his arms and took her out of the hospital and into a world of their own.

-The End.

Thanks guys for reading this story and to everyone who has encouraged me to continue, here is a big hug for you all. 🤗 There were times when I was out of ideas to bother continuing but all the PMs really forced me to write and I am thankful for that. I plan on writing another fanfic sometime soon but that will most likely be my last one before college starts next year.

-Pari

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Hi Pari!😊

You ended the FF😲.......but what a lovely ending to a wonderful ff👏👏.......loved the last part😊.......hope you would come up with a new ff soon😆

Nice ending, good job Pari.... 👏 👏 👏

Great job Pari!
Would i b reading another ff from you??? 😉
would really love too!!! lolz!
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-maddi

that was a great ending
would love to read another one of ur ff really sooooooon 😉

Taj