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~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: cute1228
Hey, Hinna. Guess wat I love. Great Part.

Glad u liked it!! when u updating yours? lol

Originally posted by: xxainy
thanks for along update

You're very welcome

Originally posted by: davia389
pls continue sooonn..
davia

Will try and continue ASAP

Originally posted by: cheeze

Wow! that was a long part!! Does that mean we get to read longer ones now? 😉

Nice update, do continue soon...................yeah since you don't seem to have much to do these days and are almost always bored 😉

SHHH!!! stop giving ppl ideas!! this was only for Isha!! once ur birthday comes, u'll get one like this too, if my FF is still around!!! and i'm glad u liked it

Originally posted by: jnawaz
haila...long update...and very good update 👏 and i have just one thing to say...massi...we are all with u...we want to strangle pia to death every time we see her too 😡
JAZ

yupp, u shud be thanking Isha for the long update. lol, glad u liked it, will try and continue soon

Originally posted by: YOOUSHA
gr8 part

Thx, glad u liked it

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#192

Sorry for the boring part, but i'm having writers block, can't think of anything to write. I hope i don't kill you with boredome This part's for you again Isha, Happy Birthday!!! Although i'm sure this isn't the best b-day gift And plz do comment, it gives me incentive to continue!! otherwise i think no ones reading my ff and that there's no point in updating 😆 😆

Part 13:

Rano thought it was about time to go home. She had enough adventure for one day, and Maasi was also taking care of Varun, Krishna, and Atharva. She didn't want Maasi to be bothered by the kids any longer than she possibly had to. Once she got home, she noticed how silent the house was. She wasn't used to this much silence in the house, especially after the kids were born. While the kids were sleeping, silence usually permeated through the house, but this was an eerie silence. It felt as if something was out of place. "Tony!!!" she called out. Once Tony came down, she enquired about the whereabouts of everyone "Oh, Madame, voh Maasi bacho ko lekar bahar gaye hai. Aur Jai, Raveer, aur Aditya sir toh kaam pe gaye hai. Jigyasa, Karuna, aur Pia Madame to Kitty Party me gaye hai."

Rano then went upstairs to get some rest. She wasn't able to sleep properly the night before, and she thought she might as well get some sleep while the house was silent. The minute her head rested on the pillow, she heard the door slam shut, and a woman crying, as if in pain. She quickly got out of bed, and ran downstairs, where she was met with a surprising sight. Jai and Aditya had come home and Maasi was crying on Jai's shoulder. Rano noticed that the kids were nowhere to be seen. "Maasi, where are the kids? Didn't you take them out?" As soon as she heard this, Maasi started sobbing even harder. Rano wondered if it was something she had said. Aditya then told Rano what had happened, and she was shocked. She couldn't believe her luck. Right when things were getting better in the house, this catastrophe struck them.

Rano grabbed her car keys and rushed out of the house as if it was on fire, while Aditya ran after her. "Rano, where are you going?" "I have to go find them Aditya Uncle. If I don't do anything, I'll have let Bani di down. I can't do that again. And Varun, I can't live without him. He's Sahil's last, living, breathing, memory. If I don't have him, I won't be able to live. I have to find them, I just have to." And with that, the tears of sheer pain and agony that she was trying to hold back, fell. "Calm down Rano. Jai and I are doing everything humanly possible to find these kids. They mean just as much to us as they do to you. We'll find them, don't worry. If you want to go find them, I'll come with you. It's not right for you to go alone."

Aditya drove, as he thought Rano wasn't in any condition to do the driving. They drove all around Mumbai, until sundown. They went to every place that Maasi took the kids, and asked the shop owners if they had seen what had happened. The only thing they found out was that two women, one in her 20's and the other in her 40's, took the kids while Maasi was paying for her things. Rano had an idea of who those women could be. Rano was enraged. The audacity of them to kidnap those innocent children. How could they? Especially when Rano had come to them to clear the misunderstandings between them. Rano stormed out of the store in sheer frustration, ran to the car, and drove off, leaving poor Aditya to fend for himself.

Rano pushed the brakes, slammed the car door, and rang the doorbell, all done in pure rage. The next minute, the door flew open, and Bani was seen at the door, as calm and composed as ever. "HOW COULD YOU?? And to think that you're my SISTER!! I never expected this from you di!!! The audacity of you to kidnap those kids. And to think I was searching for them like crazy because I thought that I had let YOU down, while in fact, YOU had let ME down!!!" And with that, Rano started crying. She walked past Bani, ran into the house, and starting searching the house like a crazy woman. "WHERE ARE THEY??" she screamed when she couldn't find them anywhere.

"Rano, I don't know who you're looking for, but the only people here are me and Dr. Kapoor. So, if you're looking for her, she's upstairs trying to get some sleep before dinnertime. I do hope you're quiet though. She has had quite a day and I'm sure she's tired."
Rano felt like strangling the woman in front of her. "You know exactly who I'm looking for. Bani di, please, do you want me to start begging. Just please tell me where they are, please" She said this with a hint of pleading and frustration in her voice. Bani just couldn't take this any more. "Rano, I truly don't know what you're talking about." "Di, the children were kidnapped. When I went to go find them, the shop owners told me that two women, one in her 20s and the other in her 40s, kidnapped the children. That's why I came here. I know how badly you want to be with your children, and you can probably do anything to get them."

Bani was shocked. Never in her life would she have thought that her children would have been kidnapped. "Rano, w-w-what did you say? The kids were kidnapped. T-this can't happen. Oh my god, but I just saw them yesterday. How did this happen?" "Di, I'm so sorry. I don't know how I accused you of such a horrid crime. I myself don't know that much about the kidnapping. All I know is that Maasi took the kids with her to the store for some errands. While she was paying the cashier for her things, two women kidnapped the kids. I've been going crazy ever since. I'm just praying for their safety. I can't believe anyone would do this to us."

With that, both Bani and Rano went to the Walia Mansion. Bani had some trouble re-entering the house she once called her own. It had been so long since she was here. She just had to see her children with her own eyes before she could be at peace. The first person she saw when she entered the house was Jai. She couldn't believe how different he looked. It looked as if he had aged over night. He had dark circles under his eyes from sleepless nights, and he looked thinner, probably from skipping breakfast. He always did have a tendency to skip breakfast while in a hurry. She couldn't imagine how much trouble the kids were giving to him.

Right at that moment, Pia walked in, along with Jigs and Karuna, all carrying shopping bags, walking as if they owned the place. They dropped the shopping bags on the floor the minute they entered and ordered Tony to carry them to their respective rooms. Pia's eyes popped out the minute she saw Bani sitting on the sofa. "Aren't you supposed to be in a mental asylum or something? What are you doing here?" And what a wonderful greeting it was. Bani remained quiet and just let Rano explain what happened. After Pia had learned about what happened, there was no sign of compassion on her face. All she said was, "well, you win some, you lose some. If you want kids so badly, go make some more." and ran upstairs to her room.

Rano was shocked out of wits and Bani just wasn't able to digest the fact that it was her blood sister who said that. Bani got up and was starting to walk out of the house, when she felt someone grab her hand. It was Jai. "Bani, I know you don't want to be in this house any longer than you must, but at least stay until we find the kids. I know how much the kids mean to you, and I don't want you to be worried any more than you are right now. Just sit tight until we find them." With that said, Bani just sat down and stared at the floor.

A few hours later, everyone was still worried as ever, yet no one said their fears out loud, thinking that maybe if they don't say their fears aloud, they wouldn't become reality. The next moment, the police barged in. "we're very sorry for intruding, but I think you would like to hear this news. The kids were found and we caught the kidnappers. It seems as though they were just about to call you for ransom, but we caught them just before that. They were two women, mother and daughter, who thought they could make some easy money by kidnapping the kids. Sorry for any inconveniences that may have been brought upon by our presence." Thus, the kids came back into the house, and the police took the kidnappers to jail.

All comments, good or bad, are welcome 😛

Edited by ~Unforgettable~ - 18 years ago

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Loran Maddi Lee

@LoranMaddiLee

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Posted: 18 years ago

#193

AWSOME UPDATE!
yay! the kidz are found!
omg i htought it was pia!
and SPEAKING OF THAT BLOODY WITCH!
omg make sum more?
who the hell does she think rano and bani are? some ppolz lik her????
Gosh! dat pimple! 😡 😆 😳
But with out that!
OMG AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME UPDATE!
BORNING??? BORNING?
hun it wasnt even close to being borning! 😆
continue soon

maddi

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#194

awesome part atleast bani is at wm even if it is for kids sake now they can clear the misunderstanding too

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jigna_07

@jigna_07

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#195

oh man scared me there when you said the kids were kidnapped
but now they are found
ewww pia sickens me
please continue soon

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Maria Tariq

@M~A~R~I~A

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Posted: 18 years ago

#196

Omg, ITS ROCKING EVERYDAY CANT WAIT TO READ THE REST PLZUPDATE SOON 👏

MARIA

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cheeze

@cheeze

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#197

WOW, another long part [well at least longer than the usual ones 😉]

Poor Jai has lost weight...............awwwwww. Good that the kids have been found.

Great going, continue soon.

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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+ 6

Posted: 18 years ago

#198

pia needs to get ran over by a bus...a bus that is carrying lots of heavy luggage... 😡 'go make some' and then 'you win some you lose some' 😡 yeh toh aaj meri hatoon pitega 🤢 🤢 🤢 omg...bani back in walia house...for now...cant wiat for next udpate
JAZ

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~Unforgettable~

@~Unforgettable~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: loranlee4u
AWSOME UPDATE!
yay! the kidz are found!
omg i htought it was pia!
and SPEAKING OF THAT BLOODY WITCH!
omg make sum more?
who the hell does she think rano and bani are? some ppolz lik her????
Gosh! dat pimple! 😡 😆 😳
But with out that!
OMG AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME UPDATE!
BORNING??? BORNING?
hun it wasnt even close to being borning! 😆
continue soon

maddi

yup, ofcourse, i wouldn't let the kids be gone for too long. glad to know u hate pia, now i can truthfully say ur "normal" hehe. thx, glad u liked the update!! and glad u think it wasn't boring!! hehe

Originally posted by: amiee
awesome part atleast bani is at wm even if it is for kids sake now they can clear the misunderstanding too

Glad u liked it. Let's see what Bani does next 😉

Originally posted by: jigna_07
oh man scared me there when you said the kids were kidnapped
but now they are found
ewww pia sickens me
please continue soon

Glad to know that i got ur adrenaline running with this update!! lol, will continue ASAP

Originally posted by: M~A~R~I~A
Omg, ITS ROCKING EVERYDAY CANT WAIT TO READ THE REST PLZUPDATE SOON 👏

MARIA

Thank you very much, glad to know u liked it. will continue ASAP

Originally posted by: cheeze

WOW, another long part [well at least longer than the usual ones 😉]

Poor Jai has lost weight...............awwwwww. Good that the kids have been found.

Great going, continue soon.

shhhh, didn't i tell u not to put ideas into the readers heads!! This was only a once in a lifetime thing for ISHA!!! now that her b-day's gone, someone else's b-day has to come up in order for me to make a really long update!!! lol

Originally posted by: jnawaz
pia needs to get ran over by a bus...a bus that is carrying lots of heavy luggage... 😡 'go make some' and then 'you win some you lose some' 😡 yeh toh aaj meri hatoon pitega 🤢 🤢 🤢 omg...bani back in walia house...for now...cant wiat for next udpate
JAZ

yes, someone finally gets me!! pia really does need to get run over by a bus!!! i'm glad my update made u hate her some more!! that makes my day a whole lot better!!! lol

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Niroo

@Niroo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#200

hey hinu
that was just amazing
i dont know why u r were saying
that u r going to end this and whatever ...
as this is really good
just loved it
so glad that bani came to WM
as that is her house..
and not that pia's
anyways.. just loved it
and i totally agree with maddi
i thought pia did this

just loved it

continue asap
please

PS: u better update soon
as u dont have anything better to do..

love u

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