The Rain Must Fall (Last part Pg 47) - Page 32

Hi Bristy! 😊 .....awesome part though short.......loved it......waiting to see more JB moments......please continue soon whenever you can 😆

hehehehehehehhe!!!
😳
FAB update!
AWSOME!
BONITA! <<< lolz... dunt no why i said dat! but yea... too much spanish hw!
newayz!
OMG AWSOME UPDATE!
awww why jai snap lik dat? lolz!
but still he cute!
hehehe

continue soon
lookin foward to it

lots of love
maddi

I am late in posting my comment..Sowieee 😭.

Yaar, this part had me blushing. Jai's such a romantic and his soft words and kisses made me 😳. Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next in the bathroom 😳

A great part... 👏 Loved it... 😛 Wonder what's going to happen now... 😳 😉

haila...duita shower-er modhe bheje jaache... 😲 haila...i am totally still with the rain must fall...joldi joldi update koro...i cant wait
JAZ

Originally posted by: Neetusxm

gr8 part hun...
cont soon

neetu

thanks hun, will try to cont soon

Originally posted by: btkr

Uh-oh, they are in the shower together already?? I know, I know, accident ho gaya rabba rabba...
👏 👏 👏
bt

yaah, accident ho gaya hai, but he he 😳, itna to nehi hona chahiye tha nah? 😉

Originally posted by: InTheZone123

That was a great part
That was a hot part... 😳 😳 😳
Woah, in the shower already
continue soon!!!
Nikita

thanks Nikita, hmm, hot part, what to do? these new lovers are always like this, rushing to hthings,,😆 just kidding, will try to cont soon

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Bristy! 😊 .....awesome part though short.......loved it......waiting to see more JB moments......please continue soon whenever you can 😆

hi yaar Kh, thanks very much, but you know very well yaar why short...😆, hmm i'll cont ASAP, i also wait eagerly for updating my FF 😛

Originally posted by: loranlee4u

hehehehehehehhe!!!
😳
FAB update!
AWSOME! thanks yaar maddi
BONITA! <<< lolz... dunt no why i said dat! but yea... too much spanish hw! 😊
newayz!
OMG AWSOME UPDATE!
awww why jai snap lik dat? lolz! who knows? maybe he just planned it 😉
but still he cute! yeah, Jai is always cute *sigh*
hehehe

continue soon
lookin foward to it will try

lots of love same to you
maddi

Originally posted by: pooks

I am late in posting my comment..Sowieee 😭. dont' be jaan, you are one of the most regular reader of my story, kokhono kokhono deri to hotei pare 😊

Yaar, this part had me blushing. Jai's such a romantic and his soft words and kisses made me 😳.hmm, glad that it created the effect i wanted to create Can't wait to see what's gonna happen next in the bathroom 😳 i can't wait to write the next part as well 😳

Originally posted by: Twinkle20

A great part... 👏 Loved it... 😛 Wonder what's going to happen now... 😳 😉

thanks jaan very much, will try to update soon and put an end to your wondering 😊

Originally posted by: siumi

plzz continue soon 😃

thank you dear, will try to cont soon

Originally posted by: jnawaz

haila...duita shower-er modhe bheje jaache... 😲 ki korbo, na korlam koto shune na to 😛😆😆 haila...i am totally still with the rain must fall... i know you are with it, just a bit of confirmatin makes it feel good 😊joldi joldi update koro...i cant wait so cant' I, 😔, kintu ki korbo, shomoy i to pachchi na
JAZ

sorry im late...
love the part...
so the next scene might be something hot huh? 😉 😆
i hope so!
please continue soon
rooj

Bristy darling,

A lovely part dear but as you yourself said it dear, its too short dear. And you stopped at a bad time dear, when they were in the shower getting drenched.😆

Cant wait fro the next part from you soon dear, and make it longer dear.😛

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: rooj-i

sorry im late... don't bother, I'm more late 😛
love the part... thank you so much dear
so the next scene might be something hot huh? 😉 😆
i hope so! let's see what happens 😉
please continue soon will try to do it soon
rooj

Originally posted by: kubare

Bristy darling,

A lovely part dear but as you yourself said it dear, its too short dear. And you stopped at a bad time dear, when they were in the shower getting drenched. thanks Di, yes that was short and i know that was not a good place to stop but I swear that was not my planning or wish, have been very busy these days 😊

Cant wait fro the next part from you soon dear, and make it longer dear. i'll try my best to do it quickly and make it longer

Love

Krishna