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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Everyone,

sorry for the delayed update..but i'm having serious PC troubles, My RAM has been defected (In case, you also misunderstood RAM for RK like one of our dear RK despo did, RAM stands for Random Access Memory not our beloved Ram Kapoor 😉 ) and I's unable to buy a new one due to personal problems...now i've hijacked one from my uncle's PC but it is terribly slow and my uncle is gonna come with police force (My parents) to get it back soon...so dont' blame me for late late update...


Here goes the new update......



.....Jai tucked on loose strand of her hair behind her ears and whispered, "Do you know we're never going to reach the party?"

Bani shievered at the tone of his voice, "Why?" she asked also in a whisper.

"Don't blame me" was all he said as he pulled her in his arms...


Part 10 A



Bani was taken aback. "What are you doing, Jai?" she asked nervously.

"this." Whispered Jai as he lowered his mouth and kissed her left cheek softly.

Bani's whole body quivered. A blush creeped across her face. Jai looked at her face and said, "do you know you are beautiful?" Jai was amused to see her blush even more.

"Bani, look at me."

Bani shook her head in negative and placed her head in the opening of his shirt. Jai removed his hands from her waist and cupped her face and moved it upwards so that she was facing at him but her eyes were closed.

"may I ask you something, bani?" Bani nodded in agreement. Jai pressed his mouth on her forhead, "I've seen many people, praising you, flattering you but never saw you blushing. But when I just say beautiful, you blush like anything, why jaan?"

Bani smiled softly and went back in his arms, hugging him tight, "Because you are a great fool, stupid."

Jai chuckled and kissed the top of her head, "Your hair smells…"

Bani's head shot up from his chest, "W-hat? Smells? Smells like what? What do you mean, leave me…" she struggled to be out of his arms. But he was stronger.

He pulled her back where she was moments ago. "Relax, honey, it smells like,, uhhmm,,ahem..yes, it smells like your shampoo."

"How romantic," moaned Bani sarcastically.

Jai didn't reply, he was playing with her hair. Bani said softly, "we should get going."

"Why should we? Why do you want to go in a boring party?" demanded Jai as he looked at her.

"What will the others think?"

"Since when you do care of others Bani?"

Bani pressed her nose on his chest, "Jid mat karo, ab chalo bhi."

"Bani…?"

"Hmm?"

"I want to tell you something."

"Bolo?"

"I..um..I..I'll tell you later."

Bani looked up at him expectantly, "abhi bol do na.."

"Nah…" sighed Jai. Suddenly the lights went off due to load shedding , Bani moved hesitantly and dropped something and Jai screamed, "what are you doing."

The lights were back on in 10 seconds as the area generator began to run. Bani gasped as she saw that she has dropped a crystal show piece from a side table and it has been smashed into pieces. But what made the situation worse was this, a broken piece has been shot up and has hit his cheek to cause a minor cut.

"Oh Jai, I'm so sorry.. I didn't mean to .." Bani reached to touch his cheek but he shoved her off and went to the inner part of the house. He entered her bathroom leaving the door ajar and opened the medicine cabinet to find an antiseptic.

"let me see it Jai." Said Bani as she followed inside.

"there's no need" snapped Jai.

"Why are you behaving like this? Are you a kid? Do you seriously think I'll hurt you intentionally?" asked Bani angrily.

"have I blamed you? "retorted Jai as he let the basin tap on to wash his hands.

"you're acting like blaming me, you know you don't have to say I-Blame-You to blame someone."

"thank you for the advice teacher." Replied Jai sarcastically.

"You..you..you are so mean…"

"Am I Ms Dixit?" asked Jai slyly and he pulled her by her waist and pinned her to the wall and she hit the shower handle. Before they both could take a breath, heavy waterfall started to soak them…




Sorry, even i think it's short and it's not upto the mark but what to do, i've got so much in my head last days...my head is not working properly but it's what i wanted to do...i'll start writing part 10-b right away and will post it as soon as i finish..it could be today or tomorrow....

let me know if you are still with the rain must fall ....


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Posted: 18 years ago

Me First

*Oxygen*oxygen*oxygen*

Didi,this part is more breath snatching than the other

I hope you continue soon and give a detailed update of the bathroom scene

I am waiting for the next update,

With Love,

Shiya

Edited by ShiyaNasreen29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonderful part, but yeah short one ! 😭
that was really hot ! 😳
What will happen next ? i'm exited ! 😳
Please continue ASAP ! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful short part but cant wait to read what happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wow that was short but good!!! please continue soon

Ria xxx
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ShiyaNasreen29

Me First 😊 You definetely are jaan

*Oxygen*oxygen*oxygen* Dearest Shiya, i think I should take job in an oxygen producing factory for supplying you oxygen

Didi,this part is more breath snatching than the other thank you very much dear...

I hope you continue soon and give a detailed update of the bathroom scene he he , you bet 😉

I am waiting for the next update, will try to do it quickly

With Love, same to you dear

Shiya




Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Wonderful part, but yeah short one ! yeah, i agree and apologize, that was a short one, btw thank you very much for thinking it's wonderful

that was really hot ! glad that you thought it was hot just like i assumed 😳

What will happen next ? i'm exited ! hmm, may be something to be excited

Please continue ASAP ! will try to do so, hun





Originally posted by: amiee

wonderful short part but cant wait to read what happens next 😃




thank you jaan, will try to cont soon




thank you very much dear, will try ASAP


Originally posted by: soodr

Wow that was short but good!!! please continue soon

Ria xxx



thanks Ria darling, glad that you liked it all though it was short, will try to cont as soon as i finish writing the next part
Edited by the_rain - 18 years ago
siumi thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
loved it yaar, hot hot, are koi koi window kolo yaar 😳

why did u stop there, plzzzzz continuuueeeeeeeeeeee asap 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: siumi

loved it yaar, hot hot, are koi koi window kolo yaar 😳 thank you so much hun, glad that you liked it...hot? pls turn the AC on jaan...ab window kholegi to bahar ke log sab dekh lega nah? just kidding 😆

why did u stop there, plzzzzz continuuueeeeeeeeeeee asap will try to cont ASAP, and i stopped here cause i'm evil ha ha ah 😛




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Posted: 18 years ago
Uh-oh, they are in the shower together already?? I know, I know, accident ho gaya rabba rabba...
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was a great part
That was a hot part... 😳 😳 😳
Woah, in the shower already
continue soon!!!
Nikita

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