FF:The Foreign Self PartX - XIII - Page 2

aramana...another awesome update that brought a smile to my face...it was beatiful as usual....

I am glad that Jai is back...this will give him a chance to learn who Bani really is and maybe even realize that she is his angel...

cant wait for another the next one...I hope you update soon...
Rivs

yet another beautiful part
please cont soon........

Armana

just fabalous.beautifully written.everytime i read your updates i fall short of words to describe you and your writting.simply superb.jai finally came back,to where he belongs.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊

Absolutely beautiful Armana and as one reader has mentioned, here JnB connects at a very deep level, so unknown probably to both of them.

But I agree my JW is just being a duffer, he still hasnt realied the import of 'Bunny' and 'Bani' 😉

I am really interested in seeing what he feels and how he reacts when he finds out that His ANgel is actually Bani and that she also is Saraswati.

The locked room is probably the studio, I guess.

Lovely story, wish it could be transalted onscreen. Wow!

👏

You rock! 😊

oh wow armana great part!!!
i have to say i wasn't expecting Jai to return so quickly that was a good surprise for me...
wow that was just simply beautiful and simple and cute...
they behave like regular married couples...i really love it!!!
Please continue soon
Rooj

Maar daala....haii, kitni baar marogi aur maarti hi rahogi? Especially loved the closing line, Bani's dialog...

If u start writing for a weekly magazine, let me know where to subscribe...You are also doing the classics a favor, reminding us about works that have been gathering dust (at least in my mind).

👏
bt

great work, armana. For Bani, that night she could never forget. No doubt, it was a special night for him too but doesn't seem thus far that it had the same impact on him as it did for her. I am confused if he had not recognised her at all from her face (he may not have been able to discern her clearly that blackout night but he would have seen her face at the church lighted by candles albeit not clearly but he must have a face imprint to her name..Bunny), did he experience a feeling of familiarity. When they made love the second time around was there any nostalgic feeling on his part? Or did he just erase that night and meeting bec it caused him too much pain a sense of loss that he did not want to deal with and pushed to the dark recesses of his mind, a chapter closed never to be revived till the same feeling and ache resurfacing now causing him to thus act?
Love to read more

hey dickens dearest!! 😃 it's been a while i know, but i have been otherwise engaged and unable to succumb to my usual addiction (this forum!!) 😆

i caught up with the parts of your ff i had missed, and as usual you writing leaves me bereft of any anything coherent to say... so except a long ramble instead!! 😉 😛 😆

that flashback scene has got to go down as one of your most masterful writing achievements dear!! 👏 👏 👏 (although it still does not beat your handling of Pia's character in Bitter Harvest - i doubt anything ever will!! 😉 )

the loneliness and sorrow that both feel... the solace they seek in the chapel and then find in each other's arms... the way they don't even know each other's names, yet still their union and the way they have fallen in love with each other as a result... so real, so tangible, and so damn magnificently portrayed!!!! 👏 👏 👏

hats off to you dickens, this is why you are one of the best writers we have on this forum here, the pride of the KS FF stables!! 😉 🤗

and then his return to her... the way he wipes her tears and their comfortable lapse into sweet companionship... everything i would have hoped for and more!! 😉

now i may not be able to read as soon as i'd like, but i still hope you will update soon armana!

take care, lots of love,

Cordy xxx

Armana,

That was intense, tender and magical...You weave a great story and your writing does make us all wannabes but you are definitely of a different caliber...

Love,

Another wonderful update Armana...once I finally found it! Can't locate part IX C though so could you send me the link for that?
Will wait for the next part eagerly
Sims