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Posted: 18 years ago
huh now i m confused where did roshni come in the picture and that too with a baby u have to update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh no, wat happened, they got bak after such a long time...
Pia 😡 😡 😡
Roshni 😡 😡 😡
I feel so bad for bani 😭 😭 😭 , she always wanted this marriage to work but who knew about jai
continue soon!!!
👏 👏 👏

Nikita 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: TINK

first ....after a long time...will be bck

of i am bck....haila!! loka after soo much romance yeah kya hogya ...man i feel like killing roshini ...damn her.....uuuffff!!!


yaar plzz get them bck together ....she left ....she left!! .....i would neva do that ....hehe...ok..u know why!! ..jai jaanu is just to hot...to leave


great part yaar ....sorry for such a later reply ....been reading though and its going great!! .....keep it up!!


Thanks Tinku, welcome back yaar...I was wondering what happened to you..now A days...Hope you are fine 😃
yeah I will know why you won't leave your Jaanu....but you know I wanted a turing point in the story..since the title itself is Reluctant Mistress and Blackmailed wife..you will see...I wanted my FF to sort of follow EKTA's path...(see i would never thought i will say that in million years 😆 )
Thanks Tinku for the comments....

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Beautiful part ! Very well written and in a new style !
Yaar itna bara shock kyon ??
Poor jai and bani ! Roshni i hate u !!
Please continue ASAP, as u left our Jai crying !


Thanks hun....yeah this is not my style...I never let them separate in my stories so far...well not after they patch up...kind of....I wanted a new style that is why 😉
Roshini don't yell at her yet 😉

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.


Thanks Ridhi...update will be here in 1 hour latest 😉

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Nice one Loka!!!
What Bani left
Roshni..... 😡 😡
Poor Jai lost her again
Please update soon


Thanks hun 😳
I will update ....😉

Originally posted by: davia389

ye roshini kahan se tapak padi... phir see dont tell me she will return to him with his one more set of twinss that will be funny..pls continue..soon..
davia


Arrey yaar I will never do that 😆 or maybe I will...Update will be here in 45minutes to 1 hour 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

rite...wheres my broom?! first we get rifd fo both reptile and tarun and now comes roshni?! my poor laddoo she took his osns away form him! he must be so sad im gonna give a big hug!poor bani she thinks jai doesnt love her but he does...stupid pia is the reason prolly y he didnt believ in love till now!! that was a wicked update! but u betta update soon..u cant leave us for too long!


arrey first when you said broom I thought you are comeing after me for introducing a turning point ...then I am phew 😆 Ladoo says Thanks for the hug 😆 😆 😆 ..
Thanks hun 😳 making me blush 😳
Update will be here in 1 hour 😉

Originally posted by: amiee

huh now i m confused where did roshni come in the picture and that too with a baby u have to update soon


hey amiee...it will be cleared very soon...I think 😆

Originally posted by: InTheZone123

oh no, wat happened, they got bak after such a long time...
Pia
Roshni
I feel so bad for bani , she always wanted this marriage to work but who knew about jai
continue soon!!!


Nikita


Thanks hun for the comments....but don't worry they will be ok...JB all the way Since I am an ardent fan of JB 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Loka, sorry if u misunderstood 😳 , actually when i said "Yaar itna bara shock kyon ??", i was meaning that why did u separate bani and jai ! 😭
i like ur new style , no prob with it ! I have a prob with the separation of jai and bani ! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Hey Loka, sorry if u misunderstood 😳 , actually when i said "Yaar itna bara shock kyon ??", i was meaning that why did u separate bani and jai ! 😭
i like ur new style , no prob with it ! I have a prob with the separation of jai and bani ! 😉


all right yaar...sorry yaar...about misunderstanding...my Hindi is very ....bad..I know only little😉
oo That ....you will see.... they will both be fine.....you will see😉
I want to make BAni stronger😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part –20
Jai sat there ...on his sofa…. this is happening again…. why dammad every time I fall in love with her…she leaves me …..She left when I wanted to tell her…I love her…in Toronto…now she leaves again when I wanted to tell her…I love her…Why ??? Jai sat there…….
Adi walked in…..
Adi: Jai…are you ok?
Jai: I am fine….
Adi felt the coldness in Jai's voice that was there before…Bani returned to his life…
Adi: where is Bani?
Jai: she left me once again…what else is new?(The voice was so cold Adi was sure that it is going to break the ice berg…)
Adi: Jai
Jai: Adi…I wanted Roshini to bring the child here….
Adi: but
Jai: there is no but I wanted.. 'it' to the office
Adi: Jai…
Jai: just bring her and the kid to the office and also I want you to send massi back to her house with Rano...I am leaving for Japan….I will be in the office
Adi: but
Jai: I don't need advice from anyone….I hired people to do what I want…not the other way around
Adi: yes sir
Jai: bring the two to my office….
Jai left Walia Mansion…to his office…Adi thought the same old Jai Walia is back…what did you do Bani?
Jai came to the office and fired the security for not opening the gate when his car came into the building
Jai: I pay u to be on time ….to open the bloody door not the other way around…. If you find this work too hard then…leave the bloody job….
Security guard stood their shocked…what happened to their boss..
Jai sat in the room…his office…. where he can control everything…who needs Bani to be happy in life…he told him self….from now on and there after there will be no women will rule his heart…and that is how Jai will function…there is no other…way….
Adi walked in with Roshini and the kid….
Jai: take the kid for ice cream Adi…
Adi: yes sir….
Jai looked at Roshini with all the hatred that is harbored in this world..: TELL ME who give you the bloody damn permission to come into my house?
Roshini was too scared to speak to the man …who married her sister, Pia
Jai: one tricked me into marrying her …thinking that child is mine
Roshini stood their shocked….
Jai: what are you looking at…your sister…lied to me telling that is my son..inturn he is Pushkar's….her lover….so called …
Roshini: I didn't
Jai: What don't tell me you sisters never share secrets…oh My did I break the good image you had about your sister….oh MY I feel sad…now
There was heartless mockery…in his statement
Roshini: Jiju
Jai snapped: don't call me that….we lived in pretense…there was marriage but name only…and I don't need to explain things further…to Ms Roshini.
Roshini: I will take him
Jai: to where?
Roshini: his father
Jai: o you mean where he is so….does that mean you are going to send him to hell?
Roshini: what do you mean?
Jai: he is dead…. that is why your sister married me…to give the child a father's name…
Roshini doesn't know her sister is capable of doing such a thing.
Jai: why did you come?
Roshini was still quiet
Jai: I don't have all day you know...to deal with useless people…
Roshini: I am married…and my husband is not fond..of
Jai: oo the kid…so you wanted to give it back to the right ful owner…
Roshini: well..
Jai: oo we don't want your family to break…right…because you can break mine…right
Roshini: look..
Jai: no need for saying SORRY…he is mine right I will look after him…I will not hold responsible for what your sister did…like a hooker…
The words spoken from Jai Walia hurtted her…very badly…but she deserved it…because of her sister…and she is in no position to explain her self to him….
Jai: if you want to say good bye to him…you can and then leave…and never set your foot in his life or this building…. where my empire is built
Jai tuned his chair…. and Roshini left….
Adi: Sir…your son
Jai gritted his teeth. It is not his son…. and no one will know that except Roshini, Pia and him….
Jai: you can leave Adi
Jai swirled around in his chair to look at his son after 5 years…Jai looked at him ..
Little boy: hi papa…(very lightly)
Jai remembered how…Abi had called him papa…without realization….he smiled…at the liitle boy…
Little boy: my name is Ram..
Jai: come here…
Ram came toward him….without hesitations….he sat on his lap…Jai hugged this little boy…
Ram: I miss you papa… massi told me…that you are working out of station…
Jai hugged his son…the person…who he only have …every one left him…. every one…except for Ram…….
Ram: I miss you papa…I love you
He hugged him rightly..

Jai was nothing but ruthless…except toward his son…. Ram…even if he is not his…. he became his life…only person who can control him…sort of…only person Jai Walia acted as if he is a human…

3 YEARS LEAP
WM
Ram: Papa…Papa
Jai: what betta…I am in the study room…
Ram: we have a parents meeting…do you remember?
Jai: yes I will be there at 2.00pm..ok
Ram: ok papa…did you have breakfast?
Jai: yes…I did
Ram: did you take your files?
Jai: yes I did…how about you?
Ram: I did papa….
Jai remembered ….. memories rushed back.....
Flashback
Bani: Jai do u remember to eat breakfast?
Jai: I did Bani
Bani: did you take the file you need to take?
Jai: I did Bani…
Bani: did you drink the milk I heated for you
Jai: yes I did…
Bani: did you wear the right tie….I put it on the bed?
Jai: I did…but I forget something…
Bani came running to the car: what?
Jai: my wife's kiss…on both my cheeks…
Bani: Jai behave (she playfully punched him)
Flash back ends
Ram: Papa..Papa..are u here?
Jai: yes betta..I am here…
Ram: lets' go….let's go…
Both Jai and Ram left……….Back in the office Jai was back to his cold self….

U.S.A
University of Harvard…
Dean: Good Morning Bani
Bani: Good Morning
Dean: Congratulation
Edited by loka - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

arrey Jaan😉 I am liking it 😃 waiting for the comments eagerly😉😉😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
what is this yaar????hamara purana jw ia bac wow i'm liking it vvmuch 😛 😆 😆 hmm...i wonder what bani did?? 😕 but it have 2 b really good, na???? 😃

well continue soon 😛 😃

minu 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: siumi

what is this yaar????hamara purana jw ia bac wow i'm liking it vvmuch 😛 😆 😆 hmm...i wonder what bani did?? 😕 but it have 2 b really good, na???? 😃

well continue soon 😛 😃

minu 😊


Thanks minu😳............See now you see why I have to introduce the truing point😳I want my RB back in action...we will see....😳
Bani ..she will be....u will see😉

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