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Posted: 18 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

aww.. another great part. u have me hooked on the story. i wonder how jai and bani will meet now.
poor jai still thinks BD is a boy. 😆 😆
hope u post a new part soooon.



Thanks Bugs!! Some interesting moments coming up between the two!! Stay tuned!!

Luv,

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Posted: 18 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: AMAL722

Very nice & different



Hi Amal,

Thanks!! Yeah I am trying to make this different but the central theme will be J & B, most of the characters will remain the pretty much the same, except for the ages, the chronology and the places might change as needed!!

Luv,


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Posted: 18 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: nibbles

Sheena, that was definitely to short - it stopped only seconds after I had started it!!


Hi Nibbles, sorry yaar - It was five pages long, but I may have made the font larger!! 😆

Now, loved the silent comfort Jai and BD share😛.....it's sweet to see them with each other, horse riding every morning and sitting together - though how long does it take for a guy to work out the kid infront of you is a girl?😕

Hmm, has to do something with the loose fitting clothes that BD wears and the short, cropped boy cut!! She is only eight and small!! OK, enough of my excuses! He is a duffer, as you can tell!! 😆

My heart goes out to Jai - poor guy!!.....Hope Udai dies before we meet again and Barnali is somewhere far, far away!!😃

Yep, lot of unresolved issues, sounds like real KS - Na baba, I will try to close the loops for sure, if I don't, please straighten me out!!

All set for the four year leap!!😉

I have a day off today, so I will try to work on a one more update!!



LUV,
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row



Mieowwwww back to you!! I read about your PM about the billis crossing the street and getting scared of them!! That superstition runs in my family too!! I love dogs, horses but I am little bit wary about Billiyan!! 😆😆😆

Luv,



Mioewww...hehe 😆 ...yeah u liked that PM didn't u!!!! Lekin ab billiyan se wary hone ki koi zaroorat nahin...hum sab ussi beraadri ko belong karte hai!!! 🤣 🤣😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Taz234

Haila.........Man u serious!!!!! There is beer called Taz Mahal!!! 🤣 Crikey!!! Never knew my name could be so intoxicating!!!! 😆 U thought of me when ur friend ordered it...man thats funny!!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣 Jai drinking Taz beer!!! hahahahah....."putting his lips around the Taz beer bottle....haiiiii....sheena stop...plzzz 😳 😳 😳....stop...i'm dying!!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣


Yeah, I thought you would like that!! ROFL!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Mioewww...hehe 😆 ...yeah u liked that PM didn't u!!!! Lekin ab billiyan se wary hone ki koi zaroorat nahin...hum sab ussi beraadri ko belong karte hai!!! 🤣 🤣😉

You are right, but aadat abhi change ho gayi, now we should have smile on our face!!




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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am looking forward to reading the next update

Thanks

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row



Hi Amal,

Thanks!! Yeah I am trying to make this different but the central theme will be J & B, most of the characters will remain the pretty much the same, except for the ages, the chronology and the places might change as needed!!

Luv,


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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
wonderful part sheena since you are home can we have another update too a special request from a friend and its friendship month so please please with sugar and and cherry on top 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Sheena. I just caught up reading the last two parts. I haven't been online for a couple of days didn't realized you had started a new ff. I am excited and looking forward the the story unfolding.

I feel for Jai right now so young and going through with his mom dying. . . the nice part is he got to talk to BD and express is feelings...

Yeh Barnali, why can't she just leave Uday alone. I am starting to wonder how she is going through to each ff. 😆 We need to lock the door and throw away the key..

I am really looking forward to Jai seeing BD again and knocking is socks off. Please post soon yaar.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Sheena!!!

i finally caught up on your ff today! i love it! omg, i feel so sad for Jai and BD. both of them are so different from each other...yet they have so much in common. i love the way they became friends. holy crap! i thought jai was not gonna stop saying "kid" lol!

I feel for Bani too...poor girl is so worried about raising her sisters...and she's only 8. 😭

dude....can i kill barnali? how dare she interupt the father-son time alone? and what the hell? his wife isn't even dead and souten ghar a bhi gayee hai? yehi reh gaya tha Jai ko dekhne ke liye?

i hope barnali goes and drowns somewhere!

i can't wait to read more of this ff sheena. it's already addicting! i'm sorry it took me forever to catch on and comment. i'm really loving it. it was nice to read two chapters all together...killed a bit of the suspense lol!

update soon. really looking forward to read more of this. its gonna be very interesting! JB all the way!!!!

Anam
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
Sheena
that was just fabalous.the protrayal of jai's pain was just touching.love the relationship jai and BD developed over this small course of time.beautifully written,looking forward to the next part. 😊

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