Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 6

Originally posted by: kinnu410

see i told u i knew tht these will be getting close
didnt jai still recognise tht bd is a girl????
well great bonding
anyway waiting for 4 years leap until they meet agn
nice part
continue soon
waiting for next parts

Originally posted by: kubare

Aww....Shoba,👏

Too good, really wonderful and fantastic stroy dear.👏😃

Krishna, thanks yaar!!

Poor Jai at a very young age he has to endure so much and be an adult.😭 He really such a darling, that I feel like going and hugging him.🤗

That he is, so is Bani, they are kindred spirits, both losing their mothers at a young age, both trying to live life without being trampled by circumstances!! 😊😊😊

So Barnali😡, had to came and ruin any chance of the father and son getting close, and at a time when his mother is on her death bed.

Bernali is a first rate witch, but she is trying to protect her own child, doesn't it sound familiar - Pia doing the same thing??

So he and BD become s close friends in a way but he still does not know that she is a little girl😉 and not a young boy.😛😆

Yeah, it's a well kept secret for now!! 😆

Cant wait fo the next update from you soon and BD and his meeting each other 4 years later. She'll be 12 and he will be 22 right.😛😉😃

Yes, will he know any better, I wonder??

Till the next update dear.😃

Love

Krishna

Originally posted by: baran

hmmmm ....interesting ff 😉 😉 con so0o0on 😊 👏 👏

Originally posted by: btkr

Very interesting...Sheena, the description of a teenager struggling with his emotions, Uday aware of his shortcomings but unable or unwilling to do anyhthing about it ---wah wah, my heart went out to young Jai and BD. Looking forward to more updates - the trips, the growing years of Jai and BD..

👏
bt

Originally posted by: swatinarang

sheena,
g8 part yaar.
Jw reaction to barnali and nattu was quite normal, i wish he may have slapped UW irrespective of him being his father.

Swati darling, control yaar - you know "Hum Desi Log hai"😆 Pitru Devobhava!! doesn't that mean treat you father like a God?😕


A very emotional and touchy also. both JB were sharing their pain and both r gonna face death of their mother. 😭 , but i must say jai should learn something from BD despite her young age BD is quite mature and she told jw about refraining from smoking and drinking as they r injurious to health was really great. so sweet and mature of bani who wants to take care of her father as well as sisters.

She has always been like a Rock in KS, trying to take care of her family, useless father and equally useless sister, Pia!! 😕😕😕

so when they r gonna meet each other? after 4 years or more. please continue soon, just want to know the reaction of JW when he will come to know about bani being a girl 😆.

Well, you will see, it's going to be interesting to say the least!! 😆😆😆


swati

Originally posted by: Rani Rx

wow thats good 😊 but still no bani! 😕 i thought that BD would be bani!(bani dixit)oh well doesent matter
cant wait to see how u introduce bani to jai!

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

omg! omg! omg!!!! tht was like wowoowowoow!!!!!! wht an amazing part!!!! 👏 i cant believe jai still didnt find out abt BD 😆 😆 😆 cant wait to see his reaction!! 😆 😆 barnali and uday are sooooo 😡 😡 😡 ....i hope uday redeemed himself in the four yrs!!! pls pls pls update soooooonnn!!! can't wait for BD and jai to meet again!! it'll be worth it!! 😃

Originally posted by: rivya

hey sheena,

Loved this update too...
Jai...aankhen hai yaah batate...cant u see it is a girl...

Rivs,

He needs glasses!! 😆😆😆I guess he is not expecting a girl to be a jockey, so it threw him off!!😕😕😕

Sheena, it is a genious stroke to have that conversation betweend BD and Jai...When they meet after a few years, I am sure this connection that they just felt will help them come closer...

They share a deep bonding, learning from each other - I just hope it lasts, but you never know!!

Why did u have Jai smoking and drinking...good that BD told him its a bad thing...I hope he does not smoke anymore..


Unfortunately for Jai, he will only get worse before he gets better!!

I am loving this FF and am looking forward to the next update...please start soon...

Rivs

Sheena, that was definitely to short - it stopped only seconds after I had started it!!

Now, loved the silent comfort Jai and BD share😛.....it's sweet to see them with each other, horse riding every morning and sitting together - though how long does it take for a guy to work out the kid infront of you is a girl?😕

My heart goes out to Jai - poor guy!!.....Hope Udai dies before we meet again and Barnali is somewhere far, far away!!😃

All set for the four year leap!!😉

Originally posted by: Taz234

Hey Sheena just read the last two parts….wowwwwwwwwww!!!👏 What an interesting start to the ff…I'm already hooked!!! The first part was really good😊…

Thanks Jaan, It's different from BB, hope you won't get bored with the serious theme!!

Jai as a teen in 1987 and on a horse riding expedition with his father…whom is is not fond of at all…so Udai Walia is similar to the KS one has a mistress…barnali and a child! Don't blame Jai one bit for hating him….😡

I tell you, how can parents be sooo stupid some times?😡😡😡

But adored his grandfather…awww…and even resembles him…dadu sure must have been a hottie in his times!!! 😉 😉

My Dadaji was like that, handsome, witty, loud and colorful to the boot!! I am sure Rajat had women drooling all over, just like Jai is getting the looks from the society ladies!! 😉

U sure do know a lot about horses…loved reading all that in detail…learnt quite a lot from that…I knew very little before!!! Though I've always loved watching the Equestrian events during the Olympic games…those trained horses are amazing to watch!! So u taking any horse riding lessons Sheena??? And the BD's introduction as a boy!!!! 😆I'm sure this is Bani Dixit…very boyish looking I guess that know one can tell she's a girl!!! 😆

Yes, I took some horseback riding lessons, they were amazing, don't go anymore!! BD as a trained Jockey!! ain't that fun!! 😆

Now for the second part…so Mama walia is ill... poor thing…Jai very disturbed by this and then getting even more disturbed with barnali and Nattu's arrival…she sure isn't waiting for Krishna to say bye to this world!!! 😡Jai storming off…and then smoking and drinking under the tree!!! One question Sheena…what exactly was he drinking…I mean…Taz Mahal beers!!! 😆 😆 Is that really a name of a beer or is that a typing error…whatever it is…it just cracked me up!!! 🤣

Ha Ha Ha, you know there is a "Taz Mahal" Brand beer, when my friend was ordering it in the Indian restaurant, I was thinking about you!! That's why I included it!! See Taz, I think about you all the time!! Jai drinking Taz beer!! 😳 Putting his lips around the Taz Beer Bottle!! Haila!!

Jai sat under the tree, leaning against the huge trunk, he had a cigarette in his hand and a bottle of beer in the other. He didn't have problems buying either, no one asked him what his age was when he bought the "India King" and the two large "Taz Mahal" Beers.

Then BD cutting in…awww…I'm sure him is "her"….they were getting along so cutely…for some reason I remembered that old Dilip Kumar movie Deedar… where childhood sweethearts Nargis and Dilip go horse riding together…then are separated!!!😭 Man Sheena Darlin….love this ff👏…can't wait to see what happens next…I imagine there are many leaps to come!! Can't wait for JB's next meeting!!

I didn't see Deedar yaar, so don't know about it!! But sounds like a good movie!! Yeah, this FF will be pretty eventful!! Many leaps, curves and interesting events!!

Keep it coming darling…its too good!!👏👏

Thanks Jaan, I will see you around!!

ur pyaari billi….mioewwwwww….😉
Taz!!