Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 5

Very interesting...Sheena, the description of a teenager struggling with his emotions, Uday aware of his shortcomings but unable or unwilling to do anyhthing about it ---wah wah, my heart went out to young Jai and BD. Looking forward to more updates - the trips, the growing years of Jai and BD..

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sheena,
g8 part yaar.
Jw reaction to barnali and nattu was quite normal, i wish he may have slapped UW irrespective of him being his father.

A very emotional and touchy also. both JB were sharing their pain and both r gonna face death of their mother. 😭 , but i must say jai should learn something from BD despite her young age BD is quite mature and she told jw about refraining from smoking and drinking as they r injurious to health was really great. so sweet and mature of bani who wants to take care of her father as well as sisters.

so when they r gonna meet each other? after 4 years or more. please continue soon, just want to know the reaction of JW when he will come to know about bani being a girl 😆.

swati

wow thats good 😊 but still no bani! 😕 i thought that BD would be bani!(bani dixit)oh well doesent matter
cant wait to see how u introduce bani to jai!

omg! omg! omg!!!! tht was like wowoowowoow!!!!!! wht an amazing part!!!! 👏 i cant believe jai still didnt find out abt BD 😆 😆 😆 cant wait to see his reaction!! 😆 😆 barnali and uday are sooooo 😡 😡 😡 ....i hope uday redeemed himself in the four yrs!!! pls pls pls update soooooonnn!!! can't wait for BD and jai to meet again!! it'll be worth it!! 😃

hey sheena,

Loved this update too...
Jai...aankhen hai yaah batate...cant u see it is a girl...
Sheena, it is a genious stroke to have that conversation betweend BD and Jai...When they meet after a few years, I am sure this connection that they just felt will help them come closer...
Why did u have Jai smoking and drinking...good that BD told him its a bad thing...I hope he does not smoke anymore..
I am loving this FF and am looking forward to the next update...please start soon...
Rivs

Fab part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.

Hey Sheena just read the last two parts….wowwwwwwwwww!!!👏 What an interesting start to the ff…I'm already hooked!!! The first part was really good😊…

Jai as a teen in 1987 and on a horse riding expedition with his father…whom is is not fond of at all…so Udai Walia is similar to the KS one has a mistress…barnali and a child! Don't blame Jai one bit for hating him….😡 But adored his grandfather…awww…and even resembles him…dadu sure must have been a hottie in his times!!! 😉 😉

U sure do know a lot about horses…loved reading all that in detail…learnt quite a lot from that…I knew very little before!!! Though I've always loved watching the Equestrian events during the Olympic games…those trained horses are amazing to watch!! So u taking any horse riding lessons Sheena??? And the BD's introduction as a boy!!!! 😆I'm sure this is Bani Dixit…very boyish looking I guess that know one can tell she's a girl!!! 😆

Now for the second part…so Mama walia is ill... poor thing…Jai very disturbed by this and then getting even more disturbed with barnali and Nattu's arrival…she sure isn't waiting for Krishna to say bye to this world!!! 😡Jai storming off…and then smoking and drinking under the tree!!! One question Sheena…what exactly was he drinking…I mean…Taz Mahal beers!!! 😆 😆 Is that really a name of a beer or is that a typing error…whatever it is…it just cracked me up!!! 🤣

Jai sat under the tree, leaning against the huge trunk, he had a cigarette in his hand and a bottle of beer in the other. He didn't have problems buying either, no one asked him what his age was when he bought the "India King" and the two large "Taz Mahal" Beers.

Then BD cutting in…awww…I'm sure him is "her"….they were getting along so cutely…for some reason I remembered that old Dilip Kumar movie Deedar… where childhood sweethearts Nargis and Dilip go horse riding together…then are separated!!!😭 Man Sheena Darlin….love this ff👏…can't wait to see what happens next…I imagine there are many leaps to come!! Can't wait for JB's next meeting!!
Keep it coming darling…its too good!!👏👏

ur pyaari billi….mioewwwwww….😉
Taz!!

aww.. another great part. u have me hooked on the story. i wonder how jai and bani will meet now.
poor jai still thinks BD is a boy. 😆 😆
hope u post a new part soooon.

Originally posted by: TINK

ha!!! first 😆 😆 will be bck....hahahahaha......... 😆 😆 😆


haila!!! sheena i am just commenting for the first part 😃 😃 .....hehehehe 😆 😆

Hi Tinks, Thanks yaar!!

...like i said before i lurrvv this jai 😳 ..cos he is a rebel 😳 😳 😳 ..though i feel soo bad for him yaar 😭 😭 😭 ....he is soo sad..at wht his dad is doing 😡 😡 ...uuuuffff .....why did he have to have an affair ....mere jai jaanu...ko upset kardiya 😭 😭 😭

HE reminds me Dean in the movie "Rebel without a cause", a wannabe baddie!! 😆😆😆

....and hey yaar.....do u have an intrest in horse riding 😃 😃 😃 ......cos man u know soo much 😃 😃 😃 .....tinku is impressed 😃 ......wow...i neva knew half of those things 😳 😳 😳 ....gots some xtra knowledge 😳 😳 😳 .....awesome 👏 ........

Yes, I do have interest, I took some horseback riding lessons a while ago, read a lot about them. Love paintings, photographs and movies of horses. Black Velvet was my favorite when I was little.

aur yaar...yeh BD kaun hai😛 ......khahin....naam suna hoya lagta hai......uuurrrrmmmm 🤔 ....do let me know 😉 😉 ......i get the feeling this "person" 😳 might be someone speacil 😳 😳 .....wht u think????🤔🤔🤔hahahaha 😆 😆 .....oh!! before i forget i also think this " kid" 😳 might not be a boy 😲 😆 ...hehehehe 😆 😆 😛 ......dekha tinku kitne innocent hai 🤓 .....BD kaun hai pata nahi hai 😆 😆 .....

Tinku, tum tho bahut bholi hai yaar, same as Jai Walia!! 😆😆😆

keep it up jaan 👍🏼 ....and keep it coming 😃 😃 😃 ...luv this new idea......

luv
tinku 😳

p.s got ur pm thanx.... 🤗

Thanks for your comments yaar!! you are soooooo sweeeettt!!

Luv,

Originally posted by: TINK

saving 😃 ......for this part...... 😃

sheena ...aweosme part again yaar 😳


wallllllllliiiaaa 😡 ....ki baache .....sheena..... tinku..does not like this dude 😆 ....he keeps being a meany to jai 😭 😭 😭 .....and barnali 😡 ..talk about wrong timing 😕 😕 ......just when father and son were gonna do some bonding sessions 😆 😆 😉 ....well i guess that was not gonna happen 😭 ...cos its to late ......udai walia...and his affiar 😡 😡 ....just a silly billy that man is 😆 😆 ......was soo trying not to use a different word 😆 😆 😆 ......hehehehehe 🤣

No wonder Jai turned out to be sooo screwed up, didn't want to get married until late in life and Bernali, uff!! She is truly a witch!! But on the other hand, Udai walia shouldn't have involved himself with her in the first place!!😡


....i feel soo bad 😭 😭 ....for jai...he is soo close to his mother 😭 😭 😭 ....yaars its really emotional.... and BD 😃 😃 ....wow....the kid is soo different 😃 😃 ....when they are in the same panga 😭 ......

I love your emoticon, so cute!! Yeah, they are more or less like each other!! She teaches him a few things about being practical and being there for the family, he teaches her how to ride!!

..i luved thet riding they did 😳 😳 😳 ....now that is wht i call bonding 🤣 .......

Yep, they do keep bonding!! Even if it is all innocent for now!! 😳😳

great part yaar 👏 ...plzz do cont soon 😃 😃 😃 ....

luv
tinku 😳

Thanks Tinku, sweetheart!!
Luv,