Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 3

Originally posted by: jigna_07

yay!
you started a FF
awesome start
continue soon

Jigs, see I was so scared of you, I started the FF earlier than I promised.😆

Originally posted by: Je_aime

Wowww...your new ff...it's fantastic...

loved the relationship between Jai and his grandpa but his father..God he is so bad...he is pretending to be nice so that he can talk about his other son..god...i hate udai walia... 😆

And BD...i am sure it's a girl..haha...Jai come on see properly, it must be a girl. 😉 😆 😆

pls continue soon.

Thanks for the comments yaar, appreciate them very much.

Udai is a hateful father, I am sure he was switched at birth, I think Jigyasa was too!! 😆😆😆

Jai needs corrective lenses!! 😉

Luv,

Originally posted by: swatinarang

Sheena,
its so sweeeeeeeeeeeet that u have started a new ff my billi.
yaar kya character sketch banaya hai us dusht uday walia ka, i hope when he tells jai about barnali and nattu jai punch him and break all this 32 teeth. so JW is a shadow of rajat walia. i hate uday walia and wants him to suffer.
how krishna can be so insensitive, i think she should leave uday and should accompany jai.

Mieowww, Pyari Billi :-)

Jigyasa is just like Udai Walia, genes are powerful!! I wish Jai punched him too, but he has better manners than his grandfather did!!

what kind of father uday is who does not know anything about his son,his grade and what he is gonna do in future. i think its better to not have a father rather than having a father like uday walia. sheena billi please us ko kuch punch tum bhi kar dena. 😆. i think UW is going to be jealous of JW's personality.

UW dislike Jai too, because he thinks that Jai is too much like his father, Rajat. He is scared of his own son and his dark and powerful personality.


whether BD is kiran singhania's daughter and even Jagjith Singhania is not aware of this fact? and i know BD is bani only and hope she will make jw fall in love and he will give up his kasam of not marrying.

You are too smart for me, my story line is so predictable!! 😭😭
It will take Bani a really long time to make Jai see what he wants, he is a true duffer!!😆😆😆

so our hero saved heroine and now will be back after his studies to meet her and take her to their dreamland.

Hmms, I didn't realize - but yeah - you know how it is, saviors will get the damsels in distress!!


really nice story and very interesting one with lots of emotions, relationship troubles, and last but not least lovey dovey couple JB.

Thanks Yaar, see you around, it's 3am now in California - Got to hit the sack soon!!

please continue soon.

Will do!

swati

Luv,

hi
well a big and big... congrats for u for starting a new ff 😃
then wow wat a title....... very apt for the jai and bani 😳
then.... the feelings of jai very emotional and practical... 😊
then his stupid father he is not worth of a child like jai 😡 anyways since u wrote it ok carry on 😃
then i pity with jai's mothet. so sad 😭 😭
anyway then jai's grandfather wow even i have the one like jai had .... 😊

then hey is tht bd a girl or boy??? 😕
well if it is a girl and if she is bani so in this ff also their age difference is 10 years agn........well i wonder y everyone wants to have a gap of tht..... 😃 anyway since u wrote once agn i will accept this too
finally wonderful writing... 👏

y do i have a feeling tht before jai leaves for his university he and this bd r gng to come close 😳 ...y because i felt it from ur last line..... well let me see how good i am .... 😃
and haan i forgot the greatest thing... 😉 i never knew anything of horses... well now i learnt a lot.... wow i am even educated by u leaving apart entertaining... 😃 thanks for tht 😊
well continue soon( i hope this much is enough for the starting....part..... 😆 )
waiting for next parts.....

Yayy!!.....Love you for another great FF!!🤗

Sheena I know zilch about horses😕, so thanks for the information thrown in here and there!😛

The storyline already has me hooked!!👏👏.....Jai as a rebellious teenager (Loved the description!!😳) and BD (I know it's Bani😉) seems to be equally as adventorous!!

But did I read the date right?.....1987?😕

When are you planning to make them meet (again)?

that is good! 😊 i wonder how jai and bani meet? hmm!cant wait plz update soon!

tht was really great part!!! 👏 i am positive BD is bani...right??? 😉 i cant wait to read more........i cant wait to see how bani slowly melts jai!!! 😳 i feel so bad for jai!!! 😭 ur an amazing writer!!! pls pls update sooon

Originally posted by: kinnu410

hi
well a big and big... congrats for u for starting a new ff 😃
then wow wat a title....... very apt for the jai and bani 😳
then.... the feelings of jai very emotional and practical... 😊
then his stupid father he is not worth of a child like jai 😡 anyways since u wrote it ok carry on 😃
then i pity with jai's mothet. so sad 😭 😭
anyway then jai's grandfather wow even i have the one like jai had .... 😊

then hey is tht bd a girl or boy??? 😕
well if it is a girl and if she is bani so in this ff also their age difference is 10 years agn........well i wonder y everyone wants to have a gap of tht..... 😃 anyway since u wrote once agn i will accept this too
finally wonderful writing... 👏

y do i have a feeling tht before jai leaves for his university he and this bd r gng to come close 😳 ...y because i felt it from ur last line..... well let me see how good i am .... 😃
and haan i forgot the greatest thing... 😉 i never knew anything of horses... well now i learnt a lot.... wow i am even educated by u leaving apart entertaining... 😃 thanks for tht 😊
well continue soon( i hope this much is enough for the starting....part..... 😆 )
waiting for next parts.....

Kinnu,

Thanks for the comments, hope the momentum will continue - I took some horseback riding lessons sometime ago, and I love horses!!

Originally posted by: nibbles

Yayy!!.....Love you for another great FF!!🤗

Sheena I know zilch about horses😕, so thanks for the information thrown in here and there!😛

The storyline already has me hooked!!👏👏.....Jai as a rebellious teenager (Loved the description!!😳) and BD (I know it's Bani😉) seems to be equally as adventorous!!

But did I read the date right?.....1987?😕

When are you planning to make them meet (again)?

HI Nibbles,

The story spans from 1987, 1991, 1997 and present. So Jai will meet Bani at the age of 8, 12, 18 and 28. Jai and Bani have the age difference of 10 years. So he will be 38 in year 2007.

I love horses, took a few horseback riding lessons a long time ago and read a lot about it.

Glad you like it. Thanks for the comments hun,

wonderful start.. and i love ur title.
hope u continue soon.