Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 110

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

Sheena, I love your fanfic and the storyline is wonderful. Though, I well admit, I didn't like this last part's ending much. How can Jai tell her right before he has to leave the country, who well make her understand that she should forgive him and that he didn't do anything wrong.

Hi Rimpy, thanks sweetie, don't worry, they will make up - Bani has a heart made of Butter!! 😆😆😆 It may melt at room temperature before he leaves.


I loved the fact that Bani tied with the old guy but I am a little taken back by Jai throwing up. And Jai's wish that Bani stop racing is a typical one but also good one.

You and I know how it is to wait for a loved one to do some thing dangerous, your heart is always in your throat until they come back safely, so he has good reason to be worried.

Overall I liked this last chapter.

Thanks Darling,

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part.
loved it.
So both are the winner....liked it.
JB are engaged....loved it.
oh this is good now that the truth about Bani's mom death came out before marriage....hope she don't get to mad at him or take the things other way round.
plz cont. soon.

Originally posted by: kav~

truly, i LOVE this ff
i have no idea why readers would like stop reading, coz i wait for every part(:

Originally posted by: amiee

it was a wonderful part
for a moment i was tnsed about who won the race
oh boy now are they gonna break up 😭
pls cont soon...........

Originally posted by: joa123

again a fab part 👏 👏
finally they r engaged 😃
bt gr8 twist 😭 😉
plzzzzzz cont soon

Originally posted by: shahni4

Sheena
Loved the last part...so its out in the open that it was Jai's car that KD threw herself in front of!!
Wonder what will happen next!!!

HI Nina, how are you?

Just hope she doesn't hold it agianst him when she knwos how weak her mom was!!!
I hope so too my dear! I hope so too!

Love your FF...always lookd forward to the updates!!
you bring out their emotions of need, protectivness etc so well!!!

Thank you sweetie, 😳

Cant' wait for the next part!!!

Nina

Originally posted by: kubare

😳

Shoba darling,

I really don't know about the rest, but I definitely love your fanfic dear, with your wonderful and sexy Jai,😉 his bikes😛, his nephew Ranveer😆, Adi, Massi, etc.😆

🤗Thanks Krishna!!

I love your Bani😛 , with her sister Rano😆, her horses😳, her being a jockey, etc😆.

Yep, Imagine Bani being a sports jock and a horse jockey at that!😆😆

Love Rano and Ranveer😆 alot and even Karan. 😛

Hmm, I got to get Karan back from some one's Mutti, 😆😆😆 I think she is going to hate me for this, shhhh, don't tell her what I plan to do with karan!

I loved each and every ride that you described till now be it horse riding or bike, the archery, the country side, holi etc.👏

Thanks sweetie, Kabaddi was my favorite! reminded me of growing up in India and playing with my cousins..

Your fanfic is wonderful dear and love it as it is, I am always waiting impatiently for the next update from you dear, as I can't wait to read what you have in store for us next.😃

Thanks sweetie, you are a true sweetheart!

You are a fantastic writer dear so don't let a few people dampen your mood or change your way of writing ever.

Just one person, don't worry, took your advice and over it now!

Loved that you used my suggestion and had a tie between them, the emotions between R and B beautifully described dear.👏

You are welcome dear, I think any sports person who plays fairly deserves to go with a respect, Roberto is one such character

😆😆😆 And Jai vomitting because of his nervesnous was so cute, this showed us and also made him realize how much Bani means to him.😆

Yeah, him being a macho macho man, but has deep feelings for her makes him a more humane character.

Aww.....loved the colour of her Saree, Gul Mohar is Flame of the Forest nah, my fav tree and in bloom its a wonderful sight.😃

🤗My favorite tree in the whole wide world, next to Banyan, tamarind and Neem trees (Don't ask why, just old memories)

The tension, the fustration in both of them to feel each other, to touch each other, to be alone togehter.....awww😳....beautrifully depicted dear.👏👏👏

🤗Thanks sweetie, 😳😳😳

But KD😡 had to put a spaner in it as usual, but loved the fact that she knows it was sucide. Once her emotions are under control and she thinks with her brains again things will be back on the right footing between them soon I hope. Or Rano can knock some sense into her.😆

Yeah, I left out Rano and Ran this time, so perhaps she will knock some sense into Bani! KD is a silly woman, and she ain't going to throw no spanner this time.

Cant wait to read what happens next, dear , and soon.😃

Love

Krishna

🤗Thank you, Krishna, you are so sweet!! 😛

mew mew billi,
just read the update, very nice part yaar.

thanx for making them share their trophy as i wanted them to do so. So just tell me yaar if some one shares trophy what happens to bet, whether JW lost or ?
i think jockeys life is very hard seeing bani's condition, but i know JW is taking great care of her 😉

JW gave bani that saree and relating that to nature, i just loved that fact as i think the person who adhores nature are great and nice people at heart too.(see tumhare JW to praise kar rahi hoo)

kya baat hai ur pia as a talent too 😡 abhi aati ho after u to show her to have some talent.

aaj toh u r after my BP now karan looking at that reptile and just noticing her beauty 😡

wow they exchanged their rings and so sweet of Mr. singhania that even if in last stages he accepted dixit's as his grandchildren, but what happened to his money whether they are gonna get great money after they will turn 25?

omg both love birds are so desparate to be alone i can see the fire after their marriage. 😉

i know u will do this and bring this twist when i read about that accident in one of the earlier parts and i am gussa u r creating drift b/w them, but does that mean karan and bani are gonna come near 😍

omg just hope that bani is able to forget all this as JW was not responsible for this and this was KD who was responsible for making his life hell by coming in front of his car. hope bani will understand this thing soon.

yaar last parts were also really good and i just loved them and i must say u r an excellent writer and i am happy that ur story has nothing to do with original crap KS and i love to see my JB in this different scenario.

please continue soon, i want to know her reaction and whether he is able to leave for his trip to scotland or not?

swati