Candle In the Wind; Note Pg160;New Thread - Page 109

Fab part.
loved it.
So both are the winner....liked it.
JB are engaged....loved it.
oh this is good now that the truth about Bani's mom death came out before marriage....hope she don't get to mad at him or take the things other way round.
plz cont. soon.

truly, i LOVE this ff
i have no idea why readers would like stop reading, coz i wait for every part(:

again a fab part 👏 👏
finally they r engaged 😃
bt gr8 twist 😭 😉
plzzzzzz cont soon

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

tht was wonderful!!!!! really loved the update!!! it was worth it!!! 👏 👏 👏 i am glad she won! 😆 😆

Hi Anshu,

Thanks for the comments,

I am glad you like the fact that Bani won!

Sheena
Loved the last part...so its out in the open that it was Jai's car that KD threw herself in front of!!
Wonder what will happen next!!!

Just hope she doesn't hold it agianst him when she knwos how weak her mom was!!!

Love your FF...always lookd forward to the updates!!
you bring out their emotions of need, protectivness etc so well!!!

Cant' wait for the next part!!!

Nina

😳

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Hi folks, I know that this is probably a little predictable story, but I can assure you this is not the twist in the story...

Thank god!😃 And I guessed that this could not be the twist. The Twist has to be somethng else altogether, maybe something to do with the return of Roshni maybe???? 😉😕Just guessing dear!!! 😃Am I right???😉😃

I guess, I lost a lot of readers in between with my last chapter, I don't know what I did wrong, would you please let me know if I missed something or you didn't like the way the story is going? Just leave a comment - fan fictions are hard to write, because they are on existing characters and story lines, and although lot of people encouraged this story line, I know this is far from the real KS, forgive me for letting my fantasy take your favorite characters on a horseback ride.

Please leave your comments...Thanks!

Shoba darling,

I really don't know about the rest, but I definitely love your fanfic dear, with your wonderful and sexy Jai,😉 his bikes😛, his nephew Ranveer😆, Adi, Massi, etc.😆

I love your Bani😛 , with her sister Rano😆, her horses😳, her being a jockey, etc😆.

Love Rano and Ranveer😆 alot and even Karan. 😛

I loved each and every ride that you described till now be it horse riding or bike, the archery, the country side, holi etc.👏

Your fanfic is wonderful dear and love it as it is, I am always waiting impatiently for the next update from you dear, as I can't wait to read what you have in store for us next.😃

You are a fantastic writer dear so don't let a few people dampen your mood or change your way of writing ever.

Loved that you used my suggestion and had a tie between them, the emotions between R and B beautifully described dear.👏

😆😆😆 And Jai vomitting because of his nervesnous was so cute, this showed us and also made him realize how much Bani means to him.😆

Aww.....loved the colour of her Saree, Gul Mohar is Flame of the Forest nah, my fav tree and in bloom its a wonderful sight.😃

The tension, the fustration in both of them to feel each other, to touch each other, to be alone togehter.....awww😳....beautrifully depicted dear.👏👏👏

But KD😡 had to put a spaner in it as usual, but loved the fact that she knows it was sucide. Once her emotions are under control and she thinks with her brains again things will be back on the right footing between them soon I hope. Or Rano can knock some sense into her.😆

Cant wait to read what happens next, dear , and soon.😃

Love

Krishna

Hey Sheena!

How are you? Sorry about not commenting on the last part. I did read it and loved it! I actually thought I'd left comments but then I just realized I hadn't lol! I'm really very sorry!

Moving on to this update, I absolutely loved it. I loved the fact that you potrayed Jai feeling weak even for a moment, it really showed that after all he also has weaknesses even if he doesn't show them or people assume otherwise. Totally loved that part.

I love the fact that he chose the colors of the sari himself, it makes it even more special. Of course, Bani was touched!

Alright, I know we talked about this before and you said that Bani's mothers' death won't be potrayed like it was in KS or any other ffs and you won't do anything to my JB. So please, please, please....let Bani listen to Jai. Let him explain the whole thing and show that he never meant for it to happen and that he didn't kill her mother on purpose.

Jai and Bani really have a special bond, they've always had it. Ever since they were little and I think Bani will truly understand Jai and the pain he's gone through. I seriously think they will both work it out and Bani will forgive Jai. Please don't let me down but I have put all my faith in you!

Another beautiful update, really looking forward to the next part. I really want to see how the "twist" will unfold. It's going to be quiet interesting!

Anam

Hey Sheena!!

Just read chapter 18 and it was awesome!!! 👏

You really write so well yaar!!

Love the way you desribe Jai and Bani and their feelings!!!! awwwww its just so sweeeet man!! 😳 😳

Oh no!! Jai told her the truth!!!! Oh pls pls let everything be okay between them!!! cant see them like the original one 😭 😭 !!

Do something yaar!! pls pls pls bring them back together!!!!! 😊

Update soon!!

Originally posted by: menal

hi great u updated had been checking the post for an update i just liked it...was wonderfulll
👏 👏 👏

Menal,
Thank you very much, appreciate your comments very much...

Originally posted by: divan

Hi Sheena:

There is nothing wrong with the storyline. Why would one want to read an ff with exactly the same storyline as KS. People are not happy with the way the KS has gone so far.

Divan, thanks dear, one PM about the story should revolve only around J&B upset me, but I am back to normal!

I like the fact that an ff writer takes the characters and develops a storyline that is different and interesting. If everyone wrote similar story than it would definitely be boring.

Thanks once again for encouraging me, some times I wondered if I was able to hold the interest because of the sports nature of this FF.

It's wonderful the way you describe the flowers and trees in the garden. In the old days in India every house had a jasmine, tulsi, mango, gauava and other flowers and fruit trees in the garden. Lot of new development, there is hardly any space to have a garden in the back yard.

Thanks, being in US - I miss the Plumerias (Don't know what they are called in different regions of India) but the make 'Lei's out of them in Hawaii and the Gul Mohar, my favorite tree, the flame of the forest. I loved the Champaks which you don't find here - well, I could go on and on, but I won't.😆😆😆

Please write your ff the way you visualize the story.

Thanks Divan, appreciate you taking the time to write.