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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

did jai say mashallah?? is he muslim?? lol anyway, i love ur FF!!! plz continue soon!!!

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Rachna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

THIS IS GOIN 2 BE AN AWESOME FAN FIC

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Ridhi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#23

Awesome part.
loved it.
Jai is so after Bani 😉 😆 😉
plz cont. soon

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Zaynah

@Zaynah

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Posted: 18 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sparkel786

Thanks babes for your comments, really appreciate..got a feeling your going to be my rock through out this.

Definately babe! Im always here for u! 😃

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Niroo

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Posted: 18 years ago

#25

hey Mwah ..
tahts was fantastic..
that is a wrong place to end u know that right??
u have to continue soon...
please please please
if this many please doesnt work..
i am sure
there are going to be more please.. coming from the readers soon.. 😆 😆

nirali❤️

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shagufta

@sparkel786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#26

All i want is one chance not to be with you but to get to know you just one chance could you give me that one chance?

At that moment bani didnt know what to say...before her mind could think properly her mouth already had spoken for her... ok fair enough there is no harm in gaining a new friend...Jai was over the moon he didnt know what to say or what to think...you wont regret this.

JUMPING A FEW 6 MONTHS NOW

It had been six months a jai and bani were getting on really well. They would speak first thing in the morning and last thing at night. Bani at this time started to like jai more then friends and jai was madly and deeply in love with her but he made sure he never showed her that side just in case he loses her.

Bani and jais mates all got togeather in an apartment one evening in manchester, to have a little party. Everyone was chatting and chilling some were gossiping and joking and the others were bitching about ex boyfriends and girlfriends... you know it is.

Saj: Hey bani you look amazing, it has been a while since i seen you..your a great girl only if there was someone like you out there for me.
bani: i'm sure she is, when the time is right she will be there with you.
saj: what if shes already here infront of me...
bani: well ask her, get to know her and i'm sure she will love you.
saj: could i have a quick chat with you personally, i think you could help me out in this one.

Jai had heard there conversation and he wanted to kill saj, how could his own mate flirt with the love of his life!! He watches bani and saj go into a room for their personal chat after 30min they both come out laughing there heads off and jai lost it.

Jai: Bani can i have a word? Bani: course, not knowing what was going to happen...they go into jais room. Jai slams the door and sits down on his bed. Jai: how could you bani, you dont even know saj and yet your flirting with him and now your planning on going out with him. Bani was about to say soemthing but before she could jai was on a role...
Jai: I have liked you from the day i met you, today i love you more than anything and i cant believe you did this to me. how could you hurt me. I respected you, we shared everything, not once did i try anything with you coz i didnt want to lose you but more importantly i respected you. A tear drops from his eyes..jai was not the type of guy to cry but today he did infront of the women he loved the most.

Bani looks at him and sits next to him, she wipes his tear...there is nothing going on between me and saj, he fancies my mate sarah and he wanted advise... there was silence for 5 mintues. Bani didnt know what to say but she was glad the guy loved her to bits.

Jai panicked.. i have f**ked everything up..bani i dont want to lose you, i didnt mean to be harsh. At that moment bani stood up and looked him into the eyes..I love you to jai.....
jai: you do..why? what the hell am i on about why...come here and give me a hug, with that joy he walked towards her....

Hope you guys like it

Sparkel

Edited by sparkel786 - 18 years ago

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shagufta

@sparkel786

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Posted: 18 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: usa30172
hey Mwah ..
tahts was fantastic..
that is a wrong place to end u know that right??
u have to continue soon...
please please please
if this many please doesnt work..
i am sure
there are going to be more please.. coming from the readers soon.. 😆 😆

nirali❤️

Thankyou hun for your comment, i will deffo continue with this work as it is based on a true story within my life.. hence 'my life'...lol💔