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Posted: 18 years ago
You are too good. You portray the innerturmoil very nicely. It becomes all the more interesting because it is updated regularly and the excitement does not wane out.
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow Tin, That was beautiful....you bring both Jai and Bani together so seamlessly....they are meant to be together...and the subtle hints you give them are going to make them so much stronger in their feeling for each other.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great work 😛 .
Love all the FF you have done 😃 😊 😳 .
Please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
well well ...like always u made my day 😉 😉 😉 nice nice .... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
tin that was awesome
man these two are meant for each other
otherwise why else would the great jai walia have this sort of affect on him created by a girl
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haha Adi messing with jigs in teh last sentence...hehe
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Tiny
missed your updates over weekend.
fabalous part.great protrayal of Jai and Bani's turmoil abt there feeling for each other.loved it.hoping to see more of bani's pregenancy playing a big part in bring them closer and together.looking forward to the next part,cant wait. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 one more amazing part... patiently wait for ur updates each morning...contd soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aww....so sweet 😳so only a little bit of thunder was needed to get Jai and Bani in each others arm😆 and make love😳, what both were missing and was the reason to get them so absentminded and separate from each other.😃

Aww....and so sweet him getting dinner for Bani and himself,😳 loved the banter between him and Roshni, Adi and Jigs.😆

Cant wait for the next part from you soon.😃

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
Tin,

It was amezing part. you made my day. I Love this pair.. and their relationship !

Thanks Tin ... for giving us such a wonderful experiace thru your writting.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok Tinni i didn't comment on the last part
so i'll comment now
Both parts were great!
I can't believe Bani and Jai are back to their little loneliness
but thanks for this part, they are now talking.
I loved this part!
It was great!
So they are slowly realizing that what they are doing are like real husband and wife...Its great!
👏 👏 👏
Can't wait fro the next update
Rooj

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