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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry friends 😭 😭 , I had said that I'll be updating on Monday, First it was my cousin's wedding and then I got real sick with such cold weather of delhi. I am sorry once again.
Part-4

Bani is coming down the stairs and when she is just about to step out of the building she realises that she has left her cell phone in the class itself. She runss back to get her mobile.
Meanwhile Jai gets a call from his friends who call him to come back quickly to his room.
Jai leaves for the day thinking that he will meet the roadie definitely tomorrow…… 😃

NEXT DAY:

Bani is entering the university when someone comes up to her and asks her where are the first year classes going on. Bani was just going to point out when suddenly her eyes twinkle mischievously 😈 and there is a naughty smile playing on her lips as it is one of her evil ideas again.

Bani: Are you a fresher ?
Fresher: Yes.
Bani: Please start giving your introduction as I am your senior.
Fresher: Hi, I am Pushkar and starts giving his introduction.....

Bani sees Roshini coming and knows that Roshini has a habit of falling at every second step..
Bani: Okay, since you have given a decent introduction, now you have two choices either you go and ask that girl in blue as to what is her figure ( In india you really can't ask these type of questions) or do you want another option.

Pushkar (He is really sweating, as he knows that this will lead to good bashing and too in the morning): What is the other option Mam ?
Bani: If she falls down you have to go and kiss her and when I say Kiss her you have to really kiss her and not a peck on the cheek. But if she doesn't falls down you can go back to your class.

Pushkar (Thinks that the chances of her falling are very remote so it is the safest bet): I will take the other option Mam.
Bani: Sure it your wish or death (mutters under her breath)

Roshini is climbing up the stairs and she has almost reached the first floor. Bani is cursing her continuously under breath and here Pushkar has a smug smile on his face that now he is really going to go free.

Suddenly Roshini slips……. Pushkar face just goes pale and Bani has a triumphant look. She nudges Pushkar to go to Roshini.

Pushkar just walks confidently towards her and gives her his hand. Roshini responds back to pushkar thankfully when Pushkar kisses her.

Roshini suddenly gets stiff and Pushkar is just stammering that it is not his fault and it was a senior who had asked him to do this. Roshini looks around . She see no one (Bani is hiding behind a pillar).
Thaddddddddddaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk the sound a very hard slap is heard.

Bani suddenly comes out of no where.
Bani: What happened dear?
Roshini just goes and hugs Bani.
Roshini: he ….. He …… (sobs) he….
Bani: He… WHAT?
Roshini: He… just kissed me.
Thaddddddddddaaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkkk Bani slapped Pushkar. Bechara poor pushkar is shocked.
Bani: How dare you kiss her? These are the moral values you get from your parents. I shall report this to the authority.

Pushkar is stammering and says sorry to both Bani and Roshini and begs them not to report to the authority. He knows even if he says the truth no one is ever going to believe him.
He makes a quick exit.

Jai is rushing towards his class as once again he is almost late. Suddenly he stops, he feels as if time has stopped……… he hears a sound of twinkling laughter………, a laughter filled with a child like innocence………… which might even bring dead people back……….

Eventually Jai turns around and finds himself all alone in the corridor. There were 4 classes that were going on and he doesn't know where she went….

Jai is getting frustrated with himself with each passing moment. He thinks he will go insane if this hide and seek game continues for more………..

He thinks why I am feeling so strangely as if the same girl was laughing whom I has seen at the water tap and at the top of it; why can't I get that Roadie out of my mind. What has happened………. ?

Oh God! Please please I beg you…Can I meet her today pleaseee…

Pushkar is sitting in his class. He gets the shock of his life when he sees Bani entering the very same class laughing. He is shocked out of his wits. He thinks she is not even a senior and what will happen if people come to know that instead of being ragged by my seniors I was ragged by my class mate……..

….

Jai and Bani meeting for the first time officially….

Jai is rushing out of college as he was the only one left and there was news of riots happening near the highway and there is no way he would like to get caught between those ugly rioters…………..

Jai is zooming down the highway……… when he sees the same Ninja bike far off……….(What a sight dear) He races his bike towards the roadie to catch with him. The roadie for once isn't in a mood of fast driving.
He was just driving zigzag in a very relaxed manner as if has no worries of the world. It amused Jai too much.

Suddenly Jai notices the roadie has stopped. He is being surrounded by many people with knives, sticks and other weapons. A nauseous feeling surrounds him; he immediately understands these were the people who were causing all those riots…….and the roadie was their next target……….

Jai brakes instantly………. HE accelerates his bike in that position only and zoooooomzzzzzzzz offff……… in speed. He moves his bike in high speed dragging it in a semi bending position around the roadie so that the area gets clear of all those people and it will help him to leave the bike and escape……….

Suddenly Jai realises that one of them is going towards the roadie with a sword and is striking on the head. He immediately gets off from his bike and notices that the helmet of the roadie in all this had got loose. He immediately lifts up his helmet so that the sword connects with the helmet instead of crashing with the roadies head……

Jai is so busy looking out that he still has not registered that the Roadie is a girl and not a man. Bani looks up and sees a stranger……..Greek God………her rescuer….

Jai is wearing a see through white shirt and has a very metro sexual look. His chest is clean shavened of all the chest hairs and with his well defined muscles it looks he spends a lot of time at gym. The white shirt is hugging him like a T and she can feel the strong arms just above her head protecting her from the world.
A drop of tear appears in Bani's eyes from the gesture of this stranger…….

But there was no time to dwell on these things now as Bani suddenly clutched Jai's shirt tightly and drags him off from her side as she sees another man coming behind Jai……..

Due to bani's dragging jaiz shirt has ripped off and her hand is now partly under his shirt. As if thousands of watt electricity passed and in order to remove the numbness that had come over bani kicks off the assaulter with a little more force than she intended to use……She catches jaiz wrist and starts running towards a more secure area.

Sudden warmth that engulfed him made him realise the soft warm hand holding his wrists. The hold had a possessiveness of its own…..as if destined to be together. He just follows her in a trance.

Jai still has seen the face of the roadie……..

Bani is running along with jai suddenly jai pulls her up to another side towards a downhill area., they didn't knew that Jaiz watch and the religious thread around Bani's wrist had got entangled……as if even the were fated to love........bani finds herself on top of him and both go rolling down the hill..... Jai's hand immediately go around her waist protectively. Baani suddenly sees a dead body which had been badly mutilated lying there..............

But before she can scream jai cups the mouth of the beautiful stranger..............He drags her towards a wall with the stranger leaning towards the wall......

He is leaning on her so that people trying to look from above aren't able to find them there. Her eyes are shut out of fear or because of the pure torture she was under going because of Jaiz hold. She couldn't decipher……. Slowly she opens up her eyes to see her………. stranger.

Here jai sees the most beautiful eyes in the world. Aankhen jinke ek jhalak aapke saare khwaab, saare khahisheein sab zinda ho jaaye…….

What was in those eyes of this stranger that had captivated him the moment he had seen her. Both just kept staring at each other with jaiz hand still on bani's mouth.

Jai: Yeh katil nighaaein.............

Friends, My power of expressing is very weak, and I don't know even if I could make something out of it. Please do leave your comments in the end ....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
wow jai our hero rescues his princess from the rioters now only if they could fall in love
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
Shveta darling how are you feeling first of all?? Hope much better and really hope you get well soon. 😃

Aww...loved Bani playing that prank with Pushkar. Poor Pushkar fell for her trick and ended getting slapped twice. 😆

Ah...what a way to meet for Jai and Bani. Loved it a lot. 😆

Do not worry about romantic expression 😳 at all, write what you feel comfortable with. 😉 😛 😃

Till the next update.
Take care.
Love
Krishna
Edited by kubare - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
Awesome updates,
loved it.
Pushy ragged by Bani 😆...bechara two slaps
Jai saves Bani...love at first sight...loved it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: amiee

wow jai our hero rescues his princess from the rioters now only if they could fall in love

Thanks amiee. It is easy to fall in love but very difficult to retain it.😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
very intresting fan fiction & very different u must continue it !!!! update soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: kubare

Shveta darling how are you feeling first of all?? Hope much better and really hope you get well soon. 😃 I am just recovering yaar. My voice was all chocked yesterday but now its much better.

Aww...loved Bani playing that prank with Pushkar. Poor Pushkar fell for her trick and ended getting slapped twice. 😆

Ah...what a way to meet for Jai and Bani. Loved it a lot. 😆 The meeting isn't over yet 😉

Do not worry about romantic expression 😳 at all, write what you feel comfortable with. 😉 😛 😃
I really don't know whether I shoould continue with such lousy expression.


Till the next update.
Take care.
Love
Krishna

Will update the next part soon . Thankss a million for your support😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Awesome updates,
loved it.
Pushy ragged by Bani 😆...bechara two slaps
Jai saves Bani...love at first sight...loved it.
plz cont. soon

Thanks a lott ridhijai.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: luciola

very intresting fan fiction & very different u must continue it !!!! update soon 👏 👏

Thanks so much luciola

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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Please I request everyone to leave a comment - good or bad it your wish pleaseee.
Part 5 :

Jai and Bani are starring at each other with jaiz hand on Bani's mouth and his body gently pressed against hers. They have forgotten the conditions in which they have met......

At this particular moment it is all about them and no one else. Both of them are just trying to drink as much of the other as if there won't be another moment in their life to savour it.

A slight moment of the leaves is enough for bani to cover the little tiny miny bit of distance that was there between them.

She hugs him tightly as if there life depended on that one hug.

Electricity seemed to have passed grounding them for the rest of the time. Bani's one hand in on Jai's exposed chest and with the other she is holding him too tightly. Bani's heart was racing uncontrollably.

Here Jai has one hand on her waist and the other hand on the back as though he is trying to relax her. His hold on her was so protective as if; if he loosens his hold she just might crumble. He inhales her smell as she smelt heavenly.

After eternity both loosen the hold but the magic of the moment is still there. They both had started a staring competition of their own. Both are breathless as if they have been running for miles. The quick rising and falling of their chest isn't missed by both of them.

Bani's hand still felt the heartbeat of jai, his masculine smell was attracting her towards him like anything.

Here jai just wanted to feel her hands on his chest again, stop the quivering of the now slightly red lips with hissss…………

He just checks her out from head to toe. He slowly traces her features with his finger from her forehead to her tip of nose, to her lips. He rubbed his thumb on Bani's lip so sensuously that she felt as if she was in a sweet pain, a pain so sweet that she had never felt before………

Suddenly, jai felt her retreat and the next moment she pushed him and started leaving. Jai caught her wrist…….and pulls her back and holds her wrist.

Jai: Hey, stranger at least tell me your name ……….
Bani: You said it yourself, stranger that's all you are getting.

Jai: I think we need to thank the person who just saves your life.
Bani: I don't think I ever asked you to jump in between. It was you who wanted to play a superhero. Neither I asked for your help nor I am going to say thankyou……..
Jai: I don't think you were so sure when you were hugging me ……anyways the pleasure was all mine.....

Bani is embarrassed to core, she tries to shrugs him off but jai pulls her even closer and..........gently brushes his lips with hers 😳 ………

Bani suddenly felt dizzy as if she was lost in a different world. Her legs had gone numb.
Slowly, she comes back to her senses and tries to run away from him.
Jai holds her wrist and kisses her wrist and turns her hand and gently leaves it. His palm caressed the back of her hand as she tried to run away from him.

Bani reaches her room and just falls on the bed. Her face is flushed, and for the first time in her life she is happy that someone just cared for her and was not there to 'use' her.

She remembers how at the age of 10 years she had to start taking care of all of the household because of the constant sickness of her mother, how she has been handling the Dixit Business for the past 8 years, how her elder bother – Aditya always came to her after creating trouble.

She was sick and tired of doing things for everyone. Everyone expected her to be just perfect in everything, that she should be knowing what they require and when.

Because of this attitude, Bani had become a loner, she could hardly express her feelings as she had to always do things for everybody and not for herself. Even the friends she made eventually used her and then left her.

She hated being touched because she didn't feel any love for anyone but with this stranger's one touch and she was a goner…….

Bani spent her whole night just rolling over the bed and falls asleep after a long time.

Jai too was on cloud nine after his first encounter with his soul mate, he had decided there and then that she is going to be his….and he won't be sharing her with anyone. If her innocence had hooked him, it was her arrogant attitude that had booked him for life. He had always wanted someone simple but not a meek girl. He loved that wild cat......

UFf! Shit I love her man! As he threw the pillows one by one on the floor…..

Plwease I request the silent readers to leave a comment and if it is that bad then please you can say so.....
If you have any ideas you can pm me....

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