FF Part 13 pg 31 May 27 - Page 4

Originally posted by: vanshita_la

its wonderful
its Bani & Jai's first meeting
great part continue
👏

Thank vanshita.

I will post the next part tommorrow.😊

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

i loved it. thanks for coming up w/a different storyline and type of characters. pls update soon. 👏 👏 👏

Thanks a lot dear

Part-3

Thank you 😊 everyone a lot for your support. Please I request everyone to please comment and if it's that bad then please say so. I know it is all very boring and you all can just bash me up.

Jai was just walking towards the group……Bani is getting nervous with each passing moment, for the first time in her life her heart is speaking volumes.

Jai is just on the point of reaching the group when suddenly professor Dhano comes out of nowhere and calls Bani to come with her. 😛
Bani was for once relieved that she didn't had to face the seniors for the rest of the day at least. 😊
Jai: whats up yaar! Where is the trouble maker?
Ranveer: She left. Dhano caller her.

Jai feels as if he missed his life, as if…in one moment all his dreams and inspirations will come true. He himself is astonished with his feelings. He has never felt like this ? What happened, thinks Jai but he really can't answer any of his feelings. This makes him irritated at his own self so he asks angrily 😡.....

Jai: Can't you even handle one fresher. Here look I am handling the whole lot and that too without any difficulty. Its called charms buddy and you don't have any, admit it before its too late.

This left Ranveer both embarrassed and angry .

Jai is walking down the corridor and the corridor seems quite busy as it's almost time for the break to get over. When between the gaps he sees a really long tongue gently teasing the water at the water tap 😉 .
It's bani.....and she is drinking water at the water tap. Her lips are just teasing the water. She just loves playing with water. Jai sees lips red as red as rose are playing with water 😳 .
He is so mesmerized looking at the lips playing with water that his mind doesn't even looks at her face. He feels as if the droplets of water on her lips will just suck the life out of him, he just wants to go there and taste them and give them a taste of his…….. He thinks what would it feel to have those lips under his……..That tongue playing with his…...


He may have flirted with many girls but he has always waited for his soul mate. He has never felt such emotions.
People always call him Krishna Kanhiya as he is always surrounded by girls and his friends have made his reputation as a Casanova but in his heart he knows he is not. He knows that his heart is clear and doesn't care a damn about his reputation.
He is just closing in……….

Suddenly someone collides with him and when he looks back the stranger is gone.
Jai is like 😕 , "Shucks Man! What was I thinking; I didn't even get a look at her face. Where did she go dammit......
If you wouldn't have been busy staring at her lips (Mennn…. just always looking at the wrong things) you would have atleast recognized her among so many students. But NO…… Where will you look for her now?......... How come in one moment she was here and now she is gone…..

The college has ended for the day and Jai is one of the last students going back. He sees the same Ninja bike. He gets excited and thinks that he will now wait for the roadie and finish of his race. HE always says, " If anyone challenges me I feel as if my blood pressure goes at a double pace and I can't rest without the kill" 😉 .

He sits on his bike and starts waiting for the roadie.... 😃

Meanwhile, Bani was with Dhano doing her detention after the college had finished for being late. Soon dhano had dosed off…. Bani's mastermind started working on the prank. 😈

While dozing off, Dhano hears a voice "Mam, Mujhe Pyaas lag raha hain, …" Dhanno opens her eyes and look at Bani. Surprise! Bani was immersed in her work.
Dhanno gets a little scared if she had heard it right. She asked Bani whether she asked for something. Bani replied innocently that she hadn't asked for anything and she was working on her detention. Dhanno grew suspicious of Bani.
Thinking it to be her mind at work, she tried sleeping again, but kept an eye on Bani to see that she wasn't the one playing tricks when all of a sudden. "Mam, Mujhe Pyaas lag raha hain. Mereko Khoon chahiye" (transalation- I'm thirsty, I need blood). This time she heard it clearly and Bani was really immersed in her work. Not even her throat moved. So it was impossible for her to say anything and the voice was definitely a male voice.

She woke up with a start. Goes out to see if there was any zombie / vampire hiding in the corridor. Nobody. She checked the classroom. None. She even checked the closet and the ceiling twice. By this time, she was literally sweating… She goes back to bani and ask if she had heard anything. Bani says, No one said anything mam.

Dhanoo lets off Bani from the detention in mid-way and runss off from the room muttering under her breath , "She needs rest".

Bani calls up her friend Sameer who was hiding at the window sill. She gives him a high five 😃 . She had called him up instantly when dhano informed her that she will have to do a detention.

No one messes with Bani Dixit, 😈 she thinks evilly. Now she will always be out of my way. First day and one knock out, that's awesome Bani. You have set up yourself a record dear…

Mean while Jai is waiting for the Roadie. HE won't leave till he meets him and finish off his challenge.

Bani is coming down the stairs and when she is just about to step out of the building……..

Sorry guys, if it has disappointed you.I want Jai and Bani to meet at .....

PREIVIEW

Jai and Bani meet OFFICIALY amidst violence (How gruesome you will have to find out). But for that guys I need replies

😭 No one is replying, is it that bad. GUys I will have to STOP writing then.

oh...i really liked that...but u r so right...guys r always looking at the wrong thing...😡 its like dude my face is a few inches north of where u r looking...😉😉😉 chi...men i tell u...🤢🤢🤢
i can picture jai...walking the halls of the college staring at all the girls lips to try and find that special pair...😆...i think he would be labeled a perv and not casanova then...
cant wait for JANI's official introduction...update soon...👏👏👏
JAZ

Please I request the silent readers to reply. Because with such low response I will have to stop 😭

hey yaaar
I just read it..superb yaar the writting is awesome....so they will meet in next part huh
Keep up the good writting
continue ASAP

Awesome part.
Jai staring at her lips not even looked at her face. and thinking of kissing her that had me 😆
Bani Dixit se panga 😈 😈
Jai waiting for the Bani to...can't wait till they meet...when they meet...fight to hogi na...can't wait.
plz cont. soon.

Originally posted by: jnawaz

oh...i really liked that...but u r so right...guys r always looking at the wrong thing...😡 its like dude my face is a few inches north of where u r looking...😉😉😉 chi...men i tell u...🤢🤢🤢
i can picture jai...walking the halls of the college staring at all the girls lips to try and find that special pair...😆...i think he would be labeled a perv and not casanova then...
cant wait for JANI's official introduction...update soon...👏👏👏
JAZ

Thanx a lot Jaz.

Please I don't want jai to go looking for the special pair😉

I hope you like JANI's offical introduction

Originally posted by: kubare

Ah... so thats how the breath is sucked out of our Jai. Not bad not bad at all. If he looked at the face instead of her lips and tounge he would have recognized her as you wrote. 😆

And Bani....what can one say about her except she really is one cute girl. Calling up her friend Sameer to help he rout of detention. Cool. 😳

Now really cant wait for these two to meet. And you say they will meet in a gruesome fight situation. I really hope its not Jia and Bani who fight or being beaten up etc.

Cant wait fro the next update from you very soon. 😃
Love
Krishna

Thanx a lot krishna.

I knw you feel disappinted