A Poem 4 Bani....

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 19 years ago

ok so im in my sociology 260 class...bored off of my ass...i keep thinknig about KS...but then when am i not...anyway...im not paying to the professor...instead im writing a poem...it is for Bani...to some what describe how she is feeling now...thanks god my friend has a lap top w/ wireless connection...hope u all like...

Saab ko pyaar kar ke, pyaar milta hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, kysuiyaan milta hai
Tumse pyaar kar ke, mujhe gham mila hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, sahara milta hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, waffai milta hai
Tumse pyaar kar ke, mujne bewaffai mili hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, ek saati milta hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, koi aapna milta hai
Tumse pyaar kar ke, aapne bhi paraya hoga hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, ek sakoon milta hai
Saab ko pyaar kar ke, nayi zindagi milta hai
Tumse pyaar kar ke, mujhe MAUT mila hai

all feedback is welcome...the good the bad and the ugly...lolz...feel free...i would really like to see comments...
JAZ

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Pachu.P

@Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

hailaaa yaarrrr....tooo gooddddd 👏

that's exactly poor bani is feeling

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Rani

@kajolfan

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Posted: 19 years ago

I think that is beautifully penned. Thank you for sharing.

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Angelic

@Angelic_A

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 Thanks for sharing. 👏

Edited by aman123 - 19 years ago

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so nice

@solly21

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Posted: 19 years ago

👏 👏 👏 Poor bani. Thats really good.

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 19 years ago

yaar... this is what u go to skool for? 😆

its okay i do the same!!!!!! 😆

that was awesome neighbor!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

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Posted: 19 years ago

Beautiful penned Jaz
It sure do explain and reflect Bani's state of mind.
Thank for sharing.

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Azra

@ks4ever

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Posted: 19 years ago

it was beautiful i loved it. describes bani's condition perfectly and so simple. wonderful good job! 👏 👏

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 19 years ago

hai meri jazu, you're a chupi rustam!! wah wah!! 👏 *throws flowers*

beautiful hun!... PD is simply so vivid in her expressions... My Ladoo took the roof down with him today... 😳

Cheers,
dc

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shivani

@Miss.Colorfull

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Posted: 19 years ago

#10

great poem and it,s really for bani. poor bani 😭

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