Painful Solitude - Epilogue pg206 - 30/03 - Page 158

Originally posted by: Taz234

Cordy hun....Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...that last part was simply beautiful!!! 👏 Mere toh khushi ke ansoo nikal gayi 😭 😭 ...the family is now renunited!!! 😃 😃

thanks Taz! ab aansoon ponchdo!! smile please! 😊

What a fab ending... 👏 👏 👏 Jai, decorated Krishu room..awww...and when krishu arrived...and kicked him in the shin 😕 😆 ...haila...that was so funny and cute 😊 ...but the sweet kiss that followed was the icing on the cake!!! Jai has his life back!! 👏 👏

absolutely!! it's all the poor guy ever wanted! and now he's got it! 😃 krishu is a real madam - nakhre just like her dad and mom!! 😆

Can't tell u how much i have enjoyed this ff cordy...it was simpy super!!! 👏

and i cant tell you how much i enjoyed reading your comments! thanks taz! 😉

Taz!

Originally posted by: jeenal20

gr8 ending dear
a gr8 family ending
that was really cute
krishna she is so sweeeeeeeetttttttttt
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Originally posted by: btkr

As usual, beautiful update Cordy...Loved the photos all around the room, bechara Jai is finally happy (I know, I know, Bani bhi) This was a very special Krishna too.
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bt

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

that was a beautful part!!anad krishna was soo happy. i want to live in krishna's room!!! 😆 😆

thank Tanu! 😆 😆 😆 well you have the idea now, apna room bhi waise decorate karlo!! 😉

u're ending this FF??? 😭 😭 well can't wait for the epilogue and hopefully you'll start a new one soon!

well it had to end sometime na?! i didnt want it to drag so decided to end it on a high note! 😊

Tanu

Originally posted by: davia389

sweet ending..
davia

Originally posted by: ShiyaNasreen29

Wonderful!!! I am damn sure the guy who made dictionary forgot to add a word for your FF.
I really LOVED it.
With Lots & lots Of Love,
Shiya

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Beautifully penned ......
What a nice ending to a wonderful story!!! 😃 😃 On the one hand it made us cry on the other hand it made us laugh esp. Krishu's interaction with Mr. Dost as well as Mr. Papa 😊 😊 😊
I loved the story a lot
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue. 😃 😃 😃
Thanks for writing such a touchy and wonderful story
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thank you so much for the compliments dear, i'm touched to know that my words affected you! 😳 the epilogue will be updated in a few hours! 😉

Now my one and only one question is when you are going to start with another one??? 😉 😊 😃

😆 i do plan on continuing one of my FF competition entries in a couple of weeks time! dont worry, you cant get rid of me that easily!! 😉 😆

Originally posted by: rivya

Cordy....why are u ending this so soon...there is so much that can be done...anyways as long as u promise a new one soon...how about the christmas story???

soon?! this was supposed to be a little 10-part short story originally, i dragged it to 22 parts yaar!! 😕 😆

i will continue one of the competition ff's but haven't decided between the xmas one or the valentine one yet!! 😕

anyways...this one was beautiful...loved the reunion...I want room like krishna's...lol....so cute...
Oh cant wait for the eplogue and the new ff...
Rivs

thanks rivu!! 😃 epilogue is coming up soon!! 😉

Originally posted by: simz99

Great work, Cordy...from the first word to the last...exceptional 👏

thanks simi!! and thanks for the encouragement you've given me in your comments from start to finish!! 🤗

Now that this one's ended....how about expanding on 'Accidental Valentine'? I really loved that short ff and would love to see you develop it into a full fledged story!

😆 half of you are asking me to continue that, the other half are asking me to continue "New Beginnings", the xmas one - eventually i will probably continue both!! 😕 😆

Originally posted by: bkeero

I can't believe its over just like that.

just like that?! yaar, its 22 parts long!! 😆

I am so glad that they are together again. I am so glad that Krishu reacted the way she did. I wasn't sure if she was going to be really confused or not, but I guess she is too young and innocent for that.

well thats what i figured! and considering how much she loved him as her friend i couldnt see any possible reason why she would reject him as her father! 😊

Jai is funny doing all those things for Bani and his daughter even getting a gift for Rano. That was cute.

he is cute! 😳

Everyone did good planning on surprising Jai and Krishu was so cute when she grabbed his tie to bring him to eye level.. lol

i giggled while writing that too! 😆

Very nice description of the room, I could totally picture everything.

Great job Cords.

Looking forward to the last part.

thanks keero! i'm so happy you enjoyed it! last part will be posted later today! 😉