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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
AWESOOOOOOMME PART!!!! Hmm was the second slap form Bani or Jai!!! Please Please update soon, I really love this FF! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
Oh wow! I read the WHOLE right now and it's Awsomeee!!!!
Great job! 👏 You really got me hooked 😉
Wonder what's gonna happen now...? 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
Oh wow! I read the WHOLE update from the beginning to the last part right now and it's Awsomeee!!!!
Great job! 👏 You really got me hooked 😉
Wonder what's gonna happen now...? 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

SO im totally pissed off from todays episode now my story is totally gonna take a turn from where it was headed.... 😡


ch 30

THASH

bani turned and saw it was from jai

jai-pia just shut the hell up and get out of my face
how dare u try to attack on krishna

bani-pia i never thought u would go so low...if u wanted revenge then u couldve take it out on me...why my daughter

pia-why ur daughter..because she was going to ruin me but i have some news for u too di and mr. walia i wasnt the one who made the attack...my people didnt even get there

jigs-LIES LIES alll Lies...i heard it myself from ur mouth

pia-i know what i said but a while later those thugs called me and said they didnt make the attack

jai-if it wasnt u then who else could want to kill krishna

back in a hospital room

female voice-what the *ell do u mean it didnt work!

male voice- sorry swtheart its not how u planned it would happen

female voice is KRISHNA-ur telling me they arent arguing out there

male voice is her "fiance" shiv- nope i even saw them hugging

krishna-what the *ell...i thought after causing my own accident mom would hate him even more no worries we still have plan B let mr.walia have his bani for a while...when he finds out his own daughter destroyed him he wont even be able to show his face in public

shiv-yaar i cant believe it...u hate him this much i did not know

krishna-are u kidding i have hated him since i found out who he was when i saw him on tv 3 years ago... i made this plan to destroy him and his family i'll put them on the streets

shiv-well he loves u verrrrry much krishna or should i say kishu beti

both laugh(evil)

door opens bani and jai come in

krishna lies back down and starts acting

jai-how are u swty

krishna-pa..papa

jai-haan beta me papa and ur mom is here too

krishna-im better now that u 2 r here

shiv-umm i should go...krishna feel better jaan (kisses her forehead) i'll call u later

krishna smiles-okay

bani-so nice of shiv to come back from his trip to see u
he loves u alot beta

krishna-i know mama he is just too sweet

jai-hey hey what about me...future husband came and u forget ur papa

krishna-papa dont worry(gets up sitting position to hug her papa) i could never forget u i promise u that

scene stops on krishna's evil smirk


well i feel better letting out some steam....yes the track of my story has changed krishna is negative along with shiv(they are best friends who are putting up an act just so she and shiv can stay in WM and keep an eye out on the members of WM and crush jai walia)

ch 31

-next day krishna is out of the hospital and back at walia mansion to do some damage-

masi- krishna beti its sooo good to have u back

krishna-its good to be back masi

jai on phone-listen i want to find out who the hell wanted to harm my daughter and that too ASAP got it! (hangs up)

krishna-papa just let it go...im fine arent i

jai-yeah u r okay but what if....something else could have happened and u might not have been so lucky

krishna(thoughts)-mr. jai walia trust me nothing will happen to me but there will be many things that happen to you and u wont have any clue to whos doing it

jai-krishna krishna

krishna-oh sorry papa

jai-ur ok right?

krishna-im fine stop worrying

jai-i will if u take rest and dont forget ur medicines

krishna-ok fine

jai-good now im going to go and talk to ur mother

krishna-NO U CANT

jai-what?

krishna-i mean please stay with me papa...till i fall asleep

jai smiles-u dont even have to ask...scoot over

krishna lies down(in her mind)-no way mr. jai walia i wont let u get close to mom soo easily youve hurt her alot im not about to let it happen again...u will pay for ur sins mr. jai walia

Edited by johnslove - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
Fab part.
liked it.
Krishna is evil 😲 😲 😲....wants to destroy JW.
Suits him well according to todays epsiode 😡
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
i hope u guys still read my fic...i know changing my track was sudden but im sooooooooo angry about the current storyline in KS it could be waaaaaay better
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Hey, Krishu y? No, Jai is so nice n will prove himself!!! Anyways nice!!! Never knew that would have come!!! Cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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continue i am happy as because of present ks.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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pls continue soon..it is in a interesting point..
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Posted: 18 years ago
ch 32

krishna is out of the hospital and back at walia mansion and bani wants to stay close to her so she asks jai if it was ok to stay for a while to take care of krishna till shes fully ok

jai-bani u dont even have to ask this is still and will always be ur house

bani-no jai its ur and pia's home i am just a guest...anyways thank u (she walks away)

jai-bani i will tell u the truth ur soo close to me i wont let u get away this time

krishna who overheard everything says oh papa u have no idea what im about to do...ur own enemy is ur own daughter i will see how u get close to mom

krishna and shiv decide to meet privately at a hotel

shiv-kya baat hai baby akele in a hotel room just u and me....iraada kya hai

krishna-shut up shiv and quit the jokes we need to move on with our plan

shiv grabs her waist-whats the rush...in all this planning u 4got all about me (he starts placing kisses on her neck and shoulder)

krishna-sh shiv please stop

shiv-no i dont think u want me too...he turns her around so shes facing him and kisses her lips passionately and slowly pulls down the straps of her top

krishna begins to melt into his touch and slowly they begin walking towards the bed

what they both didnt realize was the person taking pictures of their romantic getaway

in the morning krishna wakes up first and turns to her right sees shiv sleeping peacefully she smiles and gets up taking the sheets with her to the bathroom

shiv gets up hears water running smirks and walks into the bathroom

after 2hours in the shower they come out and begin planning their next move on the walias



bani-krishna where were u last night do u know how worried i was how could u ur not even well yet

krishna-mom please im sorry i worried u but im okay

jai-but u might not have been ur mom is right u shouldve called or left a note anything

krishna-papa please i said sorry and i promise it wont happen again

bani&jai-it better not

they both look at each other

bani breaks the eye contact and tells krishna to come and eat breakfast and tell her about where she was

krishna- mom i went to meet shiv...he had a problem and he really needed me

bani-did u solve the problem

krishna looks down and says yes mom we solved it together

bani-listen krishna i dont mind u meeting him b4 marriage but staying out the whole night with him is what i dont approve of...atleast not yet

krishna-mom hes my fiancee

bani-i know but hes not ur husband yet...our society wouldnt approve of all this...promise me u wont do anything irrational b4 ur marriage

krishna-i i promise mama and im sorry

bani-ok now i have to change ur bandage...o and take this one off

krishna goes to the bathroom and cries...im sorry mom im sooooo sorry...hhow could i do this to u i wasnt thinking


jai starts seeing a mishap in his accounts and calls mr. mehra in his office

jai-mr mehra what is this there is 95 lakhs missing from the company

mr mehra-sir woh

jai-what

mr mehra-woh aapki beti ne yeh withdraw kiya hai

jai-krishna ne ...thank u u may go

jai ponders krishna took 95 lakhs from the company and didnt tell me...why would she need so much money

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