FF : 'AJNABI' : FINALE & AUTHOR'S NOTE! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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MT
That was the best!!
Loved your ff especially the fact that they got back together on her birthday and he proposed!!!
Roshni turned out to be alright after all!!!

I hope you write another fanfic soon.

Nina
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great end, MT!

Great authors note as well! Giving a special meaning; how we made you write more....

Yes, in this way, the Raaz was good, understandable, realistic, painful. We all could have accepted the raaz, had they followed your idea (in other words, you should have written it month's earlier, perhaps it would have helped to save our KS 😉 😆 )

Bani and Jai, you turned them into dignified and loveable persons.

A beautiful story, yet that first part will always remain something special...

Thanx Rekha!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mt that was so awesome 👏
U should definitely continue writing.
i read ur whole fanficition and and it felt do good.
a fanficiton that was filled with all the emotions
great job 👏
ratisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
wow, what an ending, this was really good, Thanks MT
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Abolsutelyy Breath Taking hun !! Thnskxxxx a tonne MT hun !!! simpllyy tremendous !! Lovedd every detail of it !!!!
I am ssooo glad u decided to end the ff...with a happyy nedingg !! infact something like such we would never get to watch in KS 😳 😳 😳 hun !!! overalll a greatt storyyline...with a perfect ending !! simplyyy toooo gooood !!! The ending just made me get soooo senti! 😭
Thnksx hun !
Shafaq ! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MT that was a magnificient ending........... gr8 one.....
thre cheers to ur fanfic 👏 👏 👏

Munni
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MT,
what a perfect, Romantic ending!
Absolutetly adorable.
And the last lines were simply too adorable......i was simultaneously laughing and going Aaaaawwwwww.
I even loved Roshni!What an unexpected cupid.
And the twist, KD's reason for dying, made so much more sense than KS.
And Jai recognised her from the photograph......the romantic in me is a fuzzy, warm puddle of contentment right now!

It has to be one of the best concluding paragraphs of all the ff's on the forum.

And the image of Bani flinging orange peels and Jai.....I still can't quite get over it!

I really hope that you will write another ff.
And soon!
How do i threaten you into doing that?

BTW, loved the authors note.
And yeah, whatever ks may have been reduced to now, or what it is going to be further reduced to in the future
(i so hope not!), we will always have the ks ss had created with the help of the actors. The one that made me roam aroun with a silly grin on my face.....
Thanks
Armana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was wonderful. I loved how you ended it. Mujhe toh lag raha tha jaise mein ko movie dekh rahi hoon. You did a superb job. Roshni surprised me I do have to say. It takes a big person to admit what she did about her and Jai.

Meri dil ke toh dhadkan rukh ja rahi thi when the knock on the door came. Mera dil keh raha tha ke Jai hoga, but you never know. Darwaze ke peeche khon hai.

Superb Job. I hope you decide to write another one. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MT,
WOW! 👏 Wonderfully penned MT!
I just loved the whole birthday dialogue..."I didn't let you spend your 16th birthday alone...why would I let you spend your 23rd birthday along?" 😳 😳 So so sweet!
You write very brilliantly (You must be on cloud nine 😃 ), I hope you continue writing such FF's. It surely is great entertainment! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MT.
The prefect end to a prefect story.just simply superb.very touching and romantic.loved it.Hope you write many more great stories like this one. 😊

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