FF : 'AJNABI' : FINALE & AUTHOR'S NOTE! - Page 4

MT Great end to a beautiful story.

cheers,
meghna

Originally posted by: mistletoe

Now i understand the phrase "Patience Always Pays"😉

"Jai wasn't drunk Bani…nor was he driving rashly, he never drives rashly…that accident could never have been avoided…We immediately called for Medical Attention and did everything we could to try and revive her…but it was too late, she collapsed after fighting with life for a few hours. I guess, It was only destiny that Jai became the cause of your Mother's death, though in no way was he the reason for it." I always wanted RC to be a positive character...i wish RC had mouthed this dialogues onscreen in KS

"When all usefulness is over, when one is assured of an unavoidable and imminent death, it is the simplest of human rights to choose a quick and easy death in place of a slow and horrible one. And so I leave this world, where the heart must either break or turn to lead. My husband feels no love for me, our Marriage is only in name…He lives with us only because of the children, my place in is his life is that of the Mother of his children, not that of a Wife. He loves someone else…but he is compelled to live with me. Hence, I am taking my life, to free my husband of the shackles of our Marriage, so that he can be free to lead his own life. I hold nobody responsible for my death. Please forgive me, my dear children, I couldn't fulfill my duties as a Mother…But I couldn't carry on anymore. May God bless you and may your life be a happy and complete one. Kiran S Dixit."I wish Ekta and her destructives hav thought of something on this lines to redeem Jai Walia from that PR incident rather than that tape

Jai was a whole World in his own….he was Bani's World.

This one line i dunno i loved it!!!!!It just puts their feelings in one sentence

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"Please smoke mat kijiye…Mujhe.." "Dhuen se allergy hai…Jaanta hoon. Sorry, I was just finishing it off."He never smoked in KS!!!wish he had this addiction rather than drinking...that horror ONS hav never taken place

"Last time, we had a stale Ladoo, this time we are having a borrowed Orange…Bani, I will make it for you next year, we will have the best bash in town for your Birthday…After all you will be Mrs. Jai Walia by then." Loved this b'day part!!!!better that thiose WM parties where some or other truth comes out in every party

"I didn't realize that you had proposed marriage…Did I agree to your proposal?"U never said NO and will never say NO

Bani, I don't have a lot to give you

What's in my heart is all that I can really give you

Loyalty, Understanding, Togetherness, Trust and Undying Love

Some wonderful years of living and loving one another, a family which will be our own, a part of each day spent laughing and crying together, discovering one another day by day, moment by moment, belonging to one another, mind, body and soul, sharing our worries, doubling our happiness, in smiles as in tears…

And all the strength you need

To make it through all your troubled times

I give all of myself to you

Only you…

I love you Bani.😳

Where did u get this one from????it was so .........Can i burrow those lines.😉

Lots of Love,

MT❤️

Eagerly waiting for ur next FF...hope u come up with a nice one on the lines of Post Leap!!!!

Archie😊

Thanks alot MT.....👏 👏


That was really beautiful peace of work... 👏


What love was that.... 😳

you're save from all of us for now..... 😆 😆 😆 😆

Fab ending.... 😛 😛 😳 😳 👏

Yaar do start something new, you are a good writer Rekha.... 😛



Salaam namaste.... 😉

han.....

i thank u to stop writing 👏 👏

Quite some time ago, not long after I joined the KS forum (and became hopelessly addicted to it!! 😕 ) I read a short story about a young girl spending her birthday alone, visited by a stranger on a dark and rainy night. That Jai and Bani had no sexual chemistry, no smouldering passion, just a simple connection that was so beautifully portrayed and masterfully created that it completely blew me away!!

It was the perfect prologue to the show itself which started at the end of this writer's story with Bani recognising her "Ajnabi".

And then, months (and months and months 😛 ) later the writer finally picked up her pen (or sat at her computer 😉 ) to continue. By this time I had already tried my hand at writing my own FF and I was absolutely over the moon that one of the people that inspired me to try writing myself, had decided to continue her best story!! 😃

And what a continuation!! 👏 Each character developed exactly as it should have been on screen - and if Sandip Sickand had stayed, maybe it would have been 😭 .

After 7 years the story comes full circle and so much has changed. The house, the darkness, the rain and the candles remain the same but the characters have evolved into something else altogether - this Jai and Bani have grown up into people that were made for each other, who are incomplete without each other, and have a chemistry that not even Kekta has managed to portray as well as this writer - and here we have the perfect ending. 👏

MT, I won't ask you to continue this story, because some things are just too perfect to be touched or played with!! I will just say that you are one of the best writers this forum has, and anyone who disagrees has obviously not read your stories. 🤢

Congratulations on the completion of a masterpiece. 👍🏼

Beautiful MT..............Now I get why you said full circle!!😛

Loved how prince charming came to her rescue😳, and no loose ends either!!

One FF I wouldn't mind reading over, and over!!👏👏👏

MT this story is lovely
i just read all the parts..its amazing

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MT,
Hats off to you sweetheart for reminding us what KS used to be and what we wanted it to be, there ould not have been a better ending to your FF.The only complaint,you made us wait too long for the updates but forgiven for that too cause the wait was always worth it.

God-How would I love to see RK saying these words on screen to Bani post leap"No one gets away from Jai Walia, especially not you Bani Dixit (or Walia)"

MT, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story.👏 Loved it a lot. Rekha you really are a wonderful writer and hope you do keep writing and keep us ingrossed and entertained with your wonderful fanfics😃🤗. I am still waiting for you to continue with "Saatiya", now that "Ajnabi" is finished.😃

Always loved reading everything you ever post, be they updates, musings, fnanfics or analysis.😃

Love

Krishna

👏 👏 Marvellous, fantastic, superb...one of the finest peices of literature i have come across although its not published MT it should be or directed into a film by you and Anu like she suggested. 😆 😆
MT i remember when you first wrote Ajnabi, it really created one of those magical places that you so want to be real, where you can escape to, It is and always will be my alltime favourite, whats even more amazing is the magical essence lasted till the very end....very beautifully written...This fanfic of yours was a true inspiration and portrayed your talent at its best.
Gawd its been ages since i have come to the forum, but reading your ff brought back the memories, aww i miss the old days!! one thing for sure is that KS has sure been a journey but along the way i have made some truly special and exceptional friends who will always remain close to my heart, and your one of them.
thank you for this journey, i enjoyed reading it soooooo much.
wishing you all the best
lots of love and hugs
an old friend
🤗Becky x x