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Posted: 18 years ago
PART X

The next two hours were spent in mild agitation in the Dixit residence as the family members hovered over an unconscious Bani, the family doctor having been summoned in by Papa Dixit who was as nervous as hell. Bani's Mother had not yet stopped crying, Jai noticed, since she started crying from the time when he had picked up Bani from the terrace floor and rushed towards her room. Mayank had gone pale in apprehension and outcome of the event and this irritated Jai to no ends.


By the time Bani was in her bed, the Doctor was on her way. Rakesh Dixit sat beside her daughter, holding her hand. Jai noticed that there seemed to be no injury, at least from the external front, but it was always good to have the Doctor check things. Rano was also sitting near Bani's feet while Arundhati Dixit was praying to God. Masi was inside trying to calm down Bani's Mom and her sister. Hearing the honking of a car, Jai hurried downstairs to usher in Dr. Shah, who also happened to be the Walia's family doctor. Jai showed Dr. Shah the way to Bani's room and soon the Doctor was at work, while all family members and friends waited with bated breath, outside the room. Only Arundhati Dixit remained inside the room.


After about half an hour, the Doctor came out and called for Rakesh Dixit who was marching in front of his daughter's room impatiently.


Mr. Shah : Mr. Dixit, I have checked Bani properly. You don't get tensed please. Bani's alright.


Rakesh Dixit : But Dr., why did she pass out? I am very worried. Are you sure that she isn't suffering from any internal bleeding or whatever?


Jai, who was till then standing beside the door, his back against the wall, eased himself from the position and walked towards the Doctor.


'Dr., do we need to get Bani hospitalized?' he asked.


'No no, not at all' Dr. Shah replied 'She's absolutely fine. She passed out due to the shock. Luckily the height had not been much; she got away with minor scraps here and there. There's absolutely nothing to worry about. She will do fine though she will hurting a few muscles here and there for a few days.


No, Mr. Dixit, she isn't suffering from any concussions or internal haemorrhage . I have given her a sedative; she will sleep like a baby now. I would advise you all not to disturb her now and let her rest. I have asked Mrs. Dixit to stay back with her tonight, she might need help.'


'Thank God' Rakesh Dixit said, looking heavenwards offering silent prayer to God for protecting his daughter from possible damage and pain. Jai escorted Dr. Shah out of the House and returned after a few minutes to find that the entire family had assembled in Bani's room.


Jai said 'Well I thought that the Dr. had mentioned that we shouldn't be disturbing Bani at all and let her get some sleep. I think its better of we call it a day today.'


Everybody nodded in consent and filed out of the room. Jai was the last one to walk out when he noticed Mayank standing outside Bani's room waiting for him. He came forward and embraced Jai.


'Thank you Jai. You saved Bani today. Don't know what would have happened?' Mayank said.


Jai freed himself from Mayank's embrace and held him by his shoulder 'Mayank, there's nothing to be worried about. Bani is alright. She just fainted cos of the shock. And why are you thanking me? Bani is my best friend first and your fianc later to me at least. I did what a friend would do under the given circumstance. In fact, I would appreciate if nobody thanks me. It was no goddamn duty or act of bravery, believe me. My best friend needed help so I offered my support. Anyway, I am headed towards home with Masi, I think you should also make way for the Dixits to turn in early for the night.'


With that, Jai skipped down the stairs and headed for the door, leaving a dumbfounded Mayank behind. Mayank looked at Jai's retracing back with a surprised expression. He couldn't understand Jai suddenly, something was definitely wrong with him today, but Bani's thought pervaded his senses and he let go off the thought for a while. He went inside to take leave of the Dixits and promised them that he would be back next day to check on Bani.


……….

The next morning …


Jai woke up early the next morning; in fact it would be better to say that he had hardly slept at all last night. Bani's frightened face, as she slipped down the stair onto the floor, haunted his senses and suddenly he realized what could have happened if he had not offered his hand to her at the right moment. Its true that Bani could not grasp onto his hand but at least the action reduced the momentum of her fall. He showered early and finished his other morning activities fast and then waited impatiently for the clock hands to reach a respectable timing.


As the clock hands inched towards the 9 a.m. mark, Jai hurriedly picked up his coat, car keys and headed towards the door.


'Jai where are you going?' Maasi's voice followed his steps down the hall. 'And that too without breakfast?'


Jai stood with his back facing Maasi, clicking his shoes impatiently as he answered 'Actually I have a very urgent meeting in Office today at 10.30 a.m., I want to check on Bani before going to work. Nothing more.'


Masi came and stood in front of him "Good thinking Jai. But I have been

thinking of something. I appreciate your concern for your friend …'



'Best friend', Jai chimed in.


'Ok ok, best friend. She will be married within a few months time and settle down in Chicago. We are all going to miss her terribly but you will take the hardest hit, I guess. Cos' of a number of reasons. I know how much this friendship means to you and I am so worried about you.'


'And you want me to stop meeting her and her family?' Jai said with an incredulous expression on his face 'Especially when she needs me now? Only a friend could see that spark of fear in her face when she fell down from the stairs.'


Masi replied "I didn't tell you to stop meeting her or her family members. I just wanted you to think about this issue?. I love Bani a lot but I am very bothered about you also.'


Its ok Maasi', Jai said 'Anyway I will leave now otherwise I will be late on both counts.' With that he stepped out of the house. A few minutes later, Masi heard the sound of a car engine revving towards the main road.


……..


On reaching the Dixit residence, Jai found the others in the hall having breakfast. Arundhati Dixit asked him to join them for breakfast and informed that Bani was still feeling sleepy so she's still upstairs in her room.


Jai joined them for breakfast and helped himself to a light fare with two plain pieces of toast and a cup of black tea. After breakfast he sought permission of Rakesh Uncle to go and meet Bani before heading for his Office. Permission received, he sprinted towards her room, a pair of watchful eyes following him.


Jai knocked twice on the door and heard a feeble 'Come in' from Bani. He opened the door and stuck his head inside.



'Hi sleepyhead, how are you doing? For how long are you planning to sleep anyway? The whole day, I presume.'


He entered the room a little cautiously, since Bani was still in bed, yawning badly.


'Jai, you? Good Morning. Me, I think I am fine, just hurting a little bit, here and there', Bani replied.


Jai went and pulled a chair towards her bedside and sat down, depositing his coat on the arm rest. 'Here and there, exactly where Bani?' he asked with concern.


Bani blushed slightly and said 'Well why should I tell you? Are you my Doctor?'


Jai was now very interested 'No I am not your Doctor, but if you remember Madam, I was your knight in shining armour yesterday and not your weepy fianc.'


Bani was now completely flustered. 'There he goes again', she thought 'Whats wrong with him?'


He was on his way to office, she could see. Dressed impeccably as ever in black suit and trousers, coupled with a deep charcoal grey shirt, which seemed to reflect the colour from the irises of his eyes, his Oyster Perpetual Omega in place, and that maddening after shave. His hair, still wet from shower, was slightly curled around his nape. He looked extremely handsome, she noticed.


Jai noticed Bani checking him out, with a bemused expression. She was still dressed in her night dress, looking like a child, totally guileless and innocent. It made him want to reach out and hug her tightly. Keeping a check on himself, he said slowly


'So you like what you are seeing?'


That brought Bani back to her senses and her eyes jerked back to meet his, which were dancing in amusement. She tried to remain serious but the magic of the moment caught her, and the two of them ended up laughing hysterically.


After a while, once they have managed to catch their breath, Jai picked up his coat and fished out a small box out of his coat pocket. It looked like a jeweller's case to Bani.


Jai pulled the chair closer to the bed and looking straight into Bani's eyes, said 'Bani, I am sorry for everything that happened yesterday. If possible, please forgive me. I am sure you wouldn't have overlooked that loose rung if I had not been acting like a fool. I am really sorry. Here's something I got for you, my best friend, please take it and don't say No. Please let things be normal between us' .


Bani nodded her head in acceptance and took the offered case from his hand. She opened the case with trembling fingers and her eyes went wide in amazement and surprise when she registered the gift that was resting inside the deep blue velvety case. It was a Diamant Baume & Mercier watch, of rectangular shape, studded with small pieces of diamond all along the border and the hour figures were also marked with diamond orbs. It was sinfully expensive both in taste and price, Bani realized. It must have cost a lot, she thought. She looked up to Jai who said 'You promised not to say No. So do you like it?'


'Like it?' Bani squealed almost childlike 'I love it Jai. It's beautiful'. Pushing her bed covers away, she bent forward and threw her arms around Jai's neck and squuezed him with all her might.


'Whoa girl, take it easy. Ok, I take it that you loved your present. Well go easy on me, I have only one neck you see'. He wrapped his arms around Bani's slight frame and pulled her slightly towards him. Suddenly, it felt all right to him, this morning, this moment, this embrace. He could feel Bani tensing slightly and then relaxing again in his arms, her face buried on his shoulder. Her hands loosened themselves from their grasp around his neck and slid down his hands. Jai yelped all of a sudden and pulled back, clutching onto his left hand.


'What happened Jai?' Bani asked with a worried expression.


'Nothing Bani, it's just a bruise' said Jai, trying to circumvent the topic.


Bani pulled Jai's left hand towards her and said 'Well, I am not going to have any trash from you right now'. She deftly opened the cuff buttons and rolled the sleeve up, only to be greeted with angry, elongated welt marks on his hand, from the elbow down to the wrist. She looked at him in amazement. Jai was now looking at his hand with interest and avoiding meeting her eyes.


'Look up Jai' Bani said sternly 'I am sorry. I guess it happened when I tried to hold onto your hand. Why did you not apply anything? It must be painful Jai.'


Jai freed his hand from her and rolled down the sleeve and fastened the buttons once again. Without a word he stood up abruptly and collected his coat from the arm rest of the chair. He made his way towards the door, all the while aware of Bani's inquisitive eyes boring a hole on is back. Before pulling the door knob, he turned around abruptly and, with his eyes fixed on Bani's, said 'It doesn't hurt me at all. It will heal very soon but for time being, it's like an embellishment for my love for the person who matters the most to me in this world.'


With that he turned on his heels and left the room, shutting the door on the bewildered face of Bani Dixit.

………..

Edited by sangitadas - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 Finally yaar i was waiting 😳
👏Nice update, you always do have a way with words...i like it!
I always love reading your work...sorry for the no comments from me for a long time, but as you know i was away😆!
Now i am curious to know what will happen next?
btw where did J get those marked? did you mention it, if so then prehaps i missed it😕.
Please do continue soon!
Luv
Sweetu.
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangs darling,

It was just fantastic, wonderful part to read. T\You definitely haven't lost any touch at all. Who were you trying to kid with that line??? 😉 !!!!

It looks like massi and Bani's father seem to notice Jais feelings and emotions even though he is hiding them. 😉 😃

Ah....lucky bani to have someone like that in her life, and what a gift. 😳 😛 😃

Now the hug was something wasn't it. And hope a kiss is not far away. 😆

Cant wait for the next part from you and hopefully it will be a lot sooner, then part 10.

Love
Krishna
Edited by kubare - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fantastic part... 👏

'It doesn't hurt me at all. It will heal very soon but for time being, it's like an embellishment for my love for the person who matters the most to me in this world.'
This was sooo good...I don't think I'll be able to praise enough... 👏 👏 👏

Hope we get another update soooooooooon

Poo
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetu144

😆 😆 Finally yaar i was waiting 😳
👏Nice update, you always do have a way with words...i like it!
I always love reading your work...sorry for the no comments from me for a long time, but as you know i was away😆!
Now i am curious to know what will happen next?
btw where did J get those marked? did you mention it, if so then prehaps i missed it😕.
Please do continue soon!
Luv
Sweetu.



Hi Sweetdish
Nice to hear from you. And please no sorry between friends, I am happy if people read it and I understand that sometimes it seems very difficult to comment.
As for what happens next, I myself dont know 😉 and I am not kidding dear.

I did mention the cuts are on his left hand. Naughty girl 😉

Will try to update soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: kubare

Sangs darling, 😊

It was just fantastic, wonderful part to read. T\You definitely haven't lost any touch at all. Who were you trying to kid with that line??? 😉 !!!!
Nope, I wasnt tryign to kid anyway. I have written after quite a long time, what with our Ph. D. Sessions so I wasnt thinking straight. I am so happy 😃 that you liked it.

It looks like massi and Bani's father seem to notice Jais feelings and emotions even though he is hiding them. 😉 😃

Well you are in for a surprise here and I am not helping 😉

Ah....lucky bani to have someone like that in her life, and what a gift. 😳 😛 😃
I know, she's a blessed soul. Ok, I wanted soemone to gift me that watch but unfortunately ... 😭. So I got Jai gift it to Bani instead. 😃

Now the hug was something wasn't it. And hope a kiss is not far away. 😆

Well your desponess is showing again. Lets wait for the others to read and comment 😳. As for the kiss, should I oblige or should I not??? You see a tug of war between a devil and an angel 😆😆😆

Cant wait for the next part from you and hopefully it will be a lot sooner, then part 10.

I hope so too 😛

Love
Krishna



Thanks dear
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: btkr2

Okayyyyyyyyy, Bani is definitely going to have to face facts now....Jai knows what he wants, Bani is getting there...

Beautiful part, eagerly awaited. 👏 👏 👏
bt



Thanks dear. And I aplaud you for your kind words and patience 👏👏👏

Will try to update soon.

And yes, Bani's defo going there, steadily but slowly.
😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Fantastic part... 👏

You are welcome Poo. Hope you had a great Birthday yesterday. 😃

'It doesn't hurt me at all. It will heal very soon but for time being, it's like an embellishment for my love for the person who matters the most to me in this world.'
This was sooo good...I don't think I'll be able to praise enough... 👏 👏 👏

I dont know what to say 😳. The dialogue just came to my mind. What say, I apply as a Creative for KS??? 😆😆😆

Hope we get another update soooooooooon

Will defo try to update sooner, but being lazy ...

Poo

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Posted: 18 years ago
sangs

Finally Fianally u remembered ur FF and all of us who hav been patiently and eagerly waiting for ur update.

well,it was a fantasctic part... 👏 👏 👏
The lesser the mayan,the better. 😡 I just dont like him.U know the reasons,maybe i will come up with another hate club.
JW i just wish at least in this FF he will tell her his feelings for her maybe he will repeat like a parrot to bani abt what he feels for her 😉 .
So maasi knows abt Jai's problem
The Final dialogue hailla i just wish that it hits bani properly.

Waiting for next part. 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

'It doesn't hurt me at all. It will heal very soon but for time being, it's like an embellishment for my love for the person who matters the most to me in this world.'
He said everthing in this one line....wow....

Hopefully Massi or R Dixit realize what the duffers mean to each other....... So glad that one duffer knows whats going on with him....One down one to go😉😆

Mayank....😡. Loved the fact that Bani holds Jai's hand and not his....

Looking forward to the next part.....

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