Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 24

Originally posted by: lonely14

Wow sangs that was beautiful!!!!

Thank you thank you

haha nice description of HIS girl😉

You bet HIS girl 😉

I loved it when bani was telling masi jai isn't too old and whatever not. 😛

Me too, good for Bani 😛

Sangs i think for me to be normal, i should just not read the way you describe him, because you know what happens to me after i read it. 😳

then you should see me when I describe him 😉

How about mayank magically disappears before reaching the dinner??? 😉😆(if you need help, i am here for that😃).

Ok i will call for your help if need arises

A song for the situation:

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai
ye pyar jo tum se karta hai - 2

par saamne jab tum aate ho, kuch bhi kehne se darta hai
o mere saajan, o mere saajan, saajan saajan, mere saajan

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

kitna isko samajhata hu, kitna isko behlata hu -2
naadaan hai kuch na samajhata hai, din raat ye aahen bharta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

har pal mujhko tadpata hai, mujhe saari raat jagata hai -2
is baat ki tumko khabar nahi, ye sirf tumhi pe marta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

As usual waiting for the next one!!!!!😳

Shina

Thanks for the song. How did you know its one of my fave songs? I just love it.

Will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Vedo

That was awesomee Sangs!
👏
Hailaa, kuch kuch hota hai when you describe him like that! 😳 😳 😳
Shina do you need help in making Mayank disappear? 😈
Please continue soon!

V. 😊

Thanks a lot Vedo 😊

So you are as affected as Shina by JW's decription? 😆😆😆

So will provide more descriptions for you guys. ok?

Originally posted by: hanaane

And I'll be waiting for your demand..... 😆 😆 😆

Part 6 was simply outstanding...😃 I loved his style of discribing his girl ... 😳...Sangi this guy is very charmig... He already got me hooked...and made me blush out of my.... 😳 😳 😳

Always luv

han

Han, you are right, this guy is an eternal charmer. Just wait and watch. really a guy after my own heart 😳

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thanks for the song. How did you know its one of my fave songs? I just love it.

Will try to update soon. 😊

I love most of the saajan songs, and plus my sallu is in it. I am glad you liked the song!!!!!

Waiting (im)patiently for the update.😃

Shina

Originally posted by: Cordelia

ok i know, i know, i have not commented on the last 3 parts! i just have not had the proper time to devote to your flawless masterpiece of a story - but tonight i finally got a chance to sit down with a cup of hot coffee and enjoy the story-telling of one of my favourite writers! 😃

Thank you but aint this too much 😕

ok, first thing's first, a big 🤗 for my JW - bechara, so in love, Bani is the last thing in his mind before he sleeps and the first thing in his mind when he wakes up but he can't tell her because of the inconvenient existence of this Mayank!!! 😭 😡

Yes, he's so in love. But lets see if he actually does anything about it?

my heart goes out to him Sangs, it really does, it's not a nice position to be in, believe me!

I know I know 😭

now Bani, aww she is so cute, trying to reassure him that he won't be losing his best friend - she feels the same way blatantly, but it's going to take something major for her to realise it isn't it?!! 😕

Maybe, gettign all the hints dear 😛

and then, JW in the shower!!! 😳 😳 😳 haiiiii Bani is soooo lucky and she doesn't even realise it?!!!!! koi baat nahin, i dont mind towelling him dry!!! 😃 (ok, dont raise my warning levels please, i'll stop i promise!! 😛 )

Ok I wont, but behave girl. 😆

LOVED the last part - him describing his perfect woman - PLEEEEEEEASE Bani take the hint yaar!!!!!!!! 😆

Lets see if she has indeed got the hint or what 😊

now since everyone is singing i will also add my two cents:-

ae kaash kahi aisa hota
ke do dil hote seene me

ae kaash kahin aisa hota
ke do dil hote seene me

ek toot bhi jaaye ishq me toh
taqleef na hoti jeene me
taqleef na hoti jeene me

Beautiful verses and so true ...

ab Sangs, jaldi jaldi update karo please!!! i am all on my own and my whole family is on holiday and i cant join them til Saturday 😭 , therefore i think you should update to cheer me up (dekha, emotional blackmail... 😈 😎 )

No EB , I will try to update soo. 😉

Originally posted by: kajolfan

Sangita,
After reading your fanfic "Farewell," I decided to boycott your fanfics... 😆 but something made me read this one. So I just finished reading all the parts thus far and do not think I would be making too big of an assumption by saying that this will have a happy ending. 😉 If this one doesn't end on a happy note, not only will I boycott your future masterpieces, but I will be inclined to give you a virtual black eye. 😛
On a more serious note, wonderfully penned. 👏 I especially loved the part when Bani entered his room and then their conversation at the breakfast table. Do you think the two duffers are starting to realize that they're more than just "friends" 😕 When can we expect them to have this epiphany?

Haila Rani, you decided to boycott my FFs? why yaar?

And a black eye in all probability?

😆 Thanks a lot dear.

I like this epiphany bit, let me see how soon I can do that.

Will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: lonely14

I love most of the saajan songs, and plus my sallu is in it. I am glad you liked the song!!!!!

Waiting (im)patiently for the update.😃

Shina

Same here. I also love the songs of Sajaan.

Am at work right now. Will try to update tonight. Ok? 😊

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Haila Rani, you decided to boycott my FFs? why yaar?

You see, I'm more of a 😃 😳 type of a person as opposed to a 😭

And thus far, all of your fanfics that I've read have induced 😭 kind of an emotion from me. So please, I will arti you if you make this one 😃

Originally posted by: kajolfan

😭

You see, I'm more of a 😃 😳 type of a person as opposed to a 😭

And thus far, all of your fanfics that I've read have induced 😭 kind of an emotion from me. So please, I will arti you if you make this one 😃

😆 Rani, you read Winter Blossoms - my 2nd FF. Its 😃

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Same here. I also love the songs of Sajaan.

Am at work right now. Will try to update tonight. Ok? 😊

I am thinking it's night there already???? 😉