Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 23

Originally posted by: btkr

Haiii, yeh Jai to bada hot hai- what the heck were u doing until now Bani?... Shaayad dinner pe notice karegi ke Jai ke liye jiya dhak-dhak hota hai, not Mayank!! 😡
Beautifully written... 👏 👏 👏 update soon....

bt

Haila BT, kya suggestion hai. And yes, Jai is tooooooo hot to handle. Poor Bani.

Will try to update soon. 😉

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

what a wonderful part. Just love it. I'm wonder wat will happen at their work if they are together blocked in the ascenseur sorry forget english name. Forget it. Your ff is amazing, just want where jai and bani bring us 😉

Thanks a lot Dear. I am so glad that you loved it.
But do send me the Eng word of that French word, i want to know 😉
Will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: jigna_07

Masi he is talking about Bani!!!!!
oh man these two are just too much in denial!
awesome job sangita!
continue soon!

Thank you Jigs, I also think Masi is the duffer over here. 😉

Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

that was beautiful part.loved JW description of his dream girl and she sitting infront him.lovely part.cant wait for the dinner.plz cont soon. 😊

Dinner will be a very simple affair, Mayank will be there na.

Love

Wow sangs that was beautiful!!!!

haha nice description of HIS girl😉

I loved it when bani was telling masi jai isn't too old and whatever not. 😛

Sangs i think for me to be normal, i should just not read the way you describe him, because you know what happens to me after i read it. 😳

How about mayank magically disappears before reaching the dinner??? 😉😆(if you need help, i am here for that😃).

A song for the situation:

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai
ye pyar jo tum se karta hai - 2

par saamne jab tum aate ho, kuch bhi kehne se darta hai
o mere saajan, o mere saajan, saajan saajan, mere saajan

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

kitna isko samajhata hu, kitna isko behlata hu -2
naadaan hai kuch na samajhata hai, din raat ye aahen bharta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

har pal mujhko tadpata hai, mujhe saari raat jagata hai -2
is baat ki tumko khabar nahi, ye sirf tumhi pe marta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

As usual waiting for the next one!!!!!😳

Shina

That was awesomee Sangs!
👏
Hailaa, kuch kuch hota hai when you describe him like that! 😳 😳 😳
Shina do you need help in making Mayank disappear? 😈
Please continue soon!

V. 😊

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Thanks a lot Han. 😊
That wiping off water droplets part was a last minute addition, just came to my mind while I was typing, but I am glad to see it worked. 😳

Dear, I will try to update soon. As for what you have to do to get regular updates, lets see - let me think about it and let you know.

Ok? 😆😆😆

And I'll be waiting for your demand..... 😆 😆 😆

Part 6 was simply outstanding...😃 I loved his style of discribing his girl ... 😳...Sangi this guy is very charmig... He already got me hooked...and made me blush out of my.... 😳 😳 😳

Always luv

han

Originally posted by: lonely14

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai
ye pyar jo tum se karta hai - 2

par saamne jab tum aate ho, kuch bhi kehne se darta hai
o mere saajan, o mere saajan, saajan saajan, mere saajan

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

kitna isko samajhata hu, kitna isko behlata hu -2
naadaan hai kuch na samajhata hai, din raat ye aahen bharta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

har pal mujhko tadpata hai, mujhe saari raat jagata hai -2
is baat ki tumko khabar nahi, ye sirf tumhi pe marta hai

mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai

Shina

Haila Shina.... yaar I love this song very very much... its one of my favourite song.... 😳

Thanks for reminding me I am goin to listen now... 😉 😆

Always luv

han

ok i know, i know, i have not commented on the last 3 parts! i just have not had the proper time to devote to your flawless masterpiece of a story - but tonight i finally got a chance to sit down with a cup of hot coffee and enjoy the story-telling of one of my favourite writers! 😃

ok, first thing's first, a big 🤗 for my JW - bechara, so in love, Bani is the last thing in his mind before he sleeps and the first thing in his mind when he wakes up but he can't tell her because of the inconvenient existence of this Mayank!!! 😭 😡

my heart goes out to him Sangs, it really does, it's not a nice position to be in, believe me!

now Bani, aww she is so cute, trying to reassure him that he won't be losing his best friend - she feels the same way blatantly, but it's going to take something major for her to realise it isn't it?!! 😕

and then, JW in the shower!!! 😳 😳 😳 haiiiii Bani is soooo lucky and she doesn't even realise it?!!!!! koi baat nahin, i dont mind towelling him dry!!! 😃 (ok, dont raise my warning levels please, i'll stop i promise!! 😛 )

LOVED the last part - him describing his perfect woman - PLEEEEEEEASE Bani take the hint yaar!!!!!!!! 😆

now since everyone is singing i will also add my two cents:-

ae kaash kahi aisa hota
ke do dil hote seene me

ae kaash kahin aisa hota
ke do dil hote seene me

ek toot bhi jaaye ishq me toh
taqleef na hoti jeene me
taqleef na hoti jeene me


ab Sangs, jaldi jaldi update karo please!!! i am all on my own and my whole family is on holiday and i cant join them til Saturday 😭 , therefore i think you should update to cheer me up (dekha, emotional blackmail... 😈 😎 )

Sangita,
After reading your fanfic "Farewell," I decided to boycott your fanfics... 😆 but something made me read this one. So I just finished reading all the parts thus far and do not think I would be making too big of an assumption by saying that this will have a happy ending. 😉 If this one doesn't end on a happy note, not only will I boycott your future masterpieces, but I will be inclined to give you a virtual black eye. 😛
On a more serious note, wonderfully penned. 👏 I especially loved the part when Bani entered his room and then their conversation at the breakfast table. Do you think the two duffers are starting to realize that they're more than just "friends" 😕 When can we expect them to have this epiphany?