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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Ridhi,

Loved the update, I guess the truth comes into play, finally!! Please continue soon!!

- SR

I will try to update asap...Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hello friends...am back with the next part...thanks for all the love you have given me...🤗...love you all

I hope you like this part...and dont hate my Tarun as much as the skunk..😕 And as usual please leave your lovely comments here..

Thanks rooji for the help...and everyone else for giving me ideas...

Chapter 31:

"Tarun, why did you sacrifice your life for me? I do not understand how to thank you enough." Tarun's attention was caught by this faint and distant voice.

"What do you mean Binita? I do not understand what you mean." Tarun was surprised. Just a couple minutes ago, she wasn't even willing to look at him, let alone talk. And now, all of a sudden, she was thanking him.

There was no response, just some more stifled sobs. Instinctively, Tarun moved from where he was sitting, and crouched in front of Bani.

"Binita kya hua? Batao mujhe?" As if on a cue, Bani was no more holding back her tears.

"Tarun, please…do me a favor. Don't call me that. I know who I am or rather was." Bani managed to speak after almost fine minutes.

"You mean…you? But how? When?" Tarun was puzzled.

However, the only response he got was in the form of a shift of gaze. Bani was again looking back to the bookstand. There on the cover of a leading newspaper was Jai's picture.

Strange are the ways of life Tarun thought. Bani had lost her memory because of an accident that had happened at this exact spot, accident that was triggered by Jai's picture on the front page. And now, almost 2 years later, her memory is back, again same spot and the trigger is also identical. It was as if God was giving him a chance, a chance to complete his incomplete task from last time.

"Bani…do you remember all?" Tarun hesitated before he talked to her.

"Yes Tarun everything…the betrayal, the realization, the engagement announcement, my waking up in the hospital to find out I was pregnant, and then Krish's birth, including what happened earlier this week. Why Tarun? Why did this all happen to me? Isn't it strange how it was exactly this place where I decided to end my life and now I am alive again?" Bani looked at Tarun as she heard him heave a sigh of relief; the relief quite visible on his face.

"I am just happy that you remember all. Nothing else is important Bani. Remember all the time you spent trying to figure out your past…finally you know. Let me tell everyone about this good news. I am sure they will be very happy and may even want to celebrate."

"Nahi Tarun. Not yet…infact please don't tell them. I think things are better this way. I can move away from here and move on." Bani interrupted Tarun and held him back.

"What are you saying Bani? You've seen how everyone loves you and were grieving your loss. Didn't u notice how they missed you? The tears of joy they shed when they saw you. How can you be so cold hearted? I never knew you had this in you." Tarun surprised by Bani's request could not hold back his emotions at all.

"I don't know Tarun. I am just confused. This hasn't been the easiest few weeks I have spent since I came here. My whole life has gone topsy-turvy. I find out that I have family here in India who loves me, and then I find out that I was once married to another man, who fathered my son. And as if it was not enough I regain my memory only to remember the most disgusting fact of my life. The reason I left my husband, the man I loved with all my being, was my own sister. The two of them betrayed me in the worst possible way. I don't know what to think or say about all of this Tarun. Maybe I was better off not knowing my past. Tarun, can you do me another favor? Take me away from here. I think I need some time to come to terms with everything. Please" Her voice was pleading and her tears beseeching.

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Later that night –

"Bani, can I come in" Tarun decided that it was time to talk to Bani. He could not see her in pain all over again and wished to make sure that he was able to help her this time.

"Come in Tarun. I am doing much better now. In fact, I think I have made much progress since we got back" She was in fact smiling.

"So? Tell me?"

"I want to go back to US. Once there, we can work out a divorce. I mean, I have no right to let you ruin your life. After that, I will talk to mom and dad and see if they would be willing to give me a full time job." Noticing the frown on Tarun's face she stopped.

"I can't believe you Bani. Look at you, you still love him. You know you do, even when you did not know your relation with him, you were drawn to him. The two of you share a bond and you don't even want to give it a chance. How can you be so obstinate? You have seen the penance he has done for losing you. Don't even give me the look that you don't care about him, because I know otherwise. You were in love with him then, you are in love with him now and you were always in love with him even when you did not remember him. Why are you doing this to him and you? And what about the rest of the family? Don't you care about them? Does Krish not deserve to know his father? The rest of his family?" Tarun was almost yelling at this point.

Bani had never seen this side of Tarun. He had always been calm and composed, never losing his cool. She was not sure how to react. On one hand she was hurting, and the other she did not want to hurt this man who had been her pillar of strength for her during her hardest times.

"Then what do you want me to do Tarun? You know the facts, what do you suggest I do? I can't stay here given the conditions, neither can I forgive the sin he committed. And then what about Pia and her child?"

"Bani, did you see Pia here? Did you hear anyone mention her and her child? Did you see Jai have eyes for anyone but you? Listen to me Bani, give him a chance, and let him explain himself. Remember this evening you said you didn't know how to thank me. Don't, just do me one tiny favor. Last time I believed what my eyes saw and did not trust my friend. But give me a chance to make things right between us, please for my sake." Tarun was really hoping that this emotional blackmail would work.

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What should Jai's explanation be if Bani wants to give him a chance? What happened to Pia and the child?

And dont forget the comments...

Rivs

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Posted: 18 years ago
OK me first!!! 😆 😆
Happy Commenting to you rivs!! 😆 😆
Thanks for the dedication but i think this month is for me then coz more than 2 dedications already 😆 😆 😆
anyways...
I love it i have to say i wasn't expecting how she regained her memory...that was so cool and original...
I have more suggestions regarding next part...
she should discover the room or go in that room of pics of her again set up by Jai...
and she should observe a little more about Jai once he get back and should pretend to be Binita...for a while...as Tarun's suggestion...those are my ideas along with that other idea i gave on Krishna...
ok now to this part: Tarun did an amazing Job so don't hate him at all 👏
i love it no jharoo needed now... 😆 😃
anyways...as for what Bani should say...lets see hmm...you know what 😛
well love it again!!!
please update soon warna Jharoo!!!
Rooj
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Posted: 18 years ago
Fab part.
loved it.
Awesome......ok I did not expected that her memory will come back like this. 😆
oh what a relief her memory is back .....relief short livedd.
ohhhhhhhh she is so stubborn(proved that she is wife of JW in every sense) and air head(another point proved that she is Dixit) can't believe 😡.....feel like smacking her to bring her to her senses.
Yes Tarun you are not done.......plz try to make that stupid woman understand, emotional blackmail or anything else that work just do it so she will give Jai a second chance or let just hear him out first and Jai will handle everything by himself. 😉
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rooj-i

OK me first!!! 😆 😆 Yay...
Happy Commenting to you rivs!! 😆 😆 The comments better make me happy...
Thanks for the dedication but i think this month is for me then coz more than 2 dedications already 😆 😆 😆 Seems like it...lol...but what can I do...you give me such lovely ideas...I cant help it
anyways... anyways...

I love it i have to say i wasn't expecting how she regained her memory...that was so cool and original... Thanks...same frame of mind, similar hurt, same location, what more does one need for a stimulus...plus am not a very dramatic person myself...😕
I have more suggestions regarding next part...cool
she should discover the room or go in that room of pics of her again set up by Jai... will try to incorporate that...
and she should observe a little more about Jai once he get back and should pretend to be Binita...for a while...as Tarun's suggestion...those are my ideas along with that other idea i gave on Krishna...love this one...will definitely try to use this...
ok now to this part: Tarun did an amazing Job so don't hate him at all 👏 finally mission accomplished...
i love it no jharoo needed now... 😆 😃 lol thank God
anyways...as for what Bani should say...lets see hmm...you know what 😛
well love it again!!! I dont think her response matters...its pretty implicit...
please update soon warna Jharoo!!! mostly tomorrow night..
Rooj

Rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab part. thanks...
loved it. That was what I was hoping for...
Awesome......ok I did not expected that her memory will come back like this. 😆 did u like it??? or was something lacking??
oh what a relief her memory is back .....relief short livedd. I think her memory is back full time...releif depends on how good a job JW does.
ohhhhhhhh she is so stubborn(proved that she is wife of JW in every sense) and air head(another point proved that she is Dixit) can't believe 😡.....feel like smacking her to bring her to her senses. Bechari...i dont understand u people....JW being stubborn is all awww...😳...and Bani is like..😡...lol
Yes Tarun you are not done.......plz try to make that stupid woman understand, emotional blackmail or anything else that work just do it so she will give Jai a second chance or let just hear him out first and Jai will handle everything by himself. 😉 U like tarun??yay..thanks...I am sure Jai wont let her go...so relax...
plz cont. soon.

will do that soon...rivs
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Posted: 18 years ago
Give jai a chance
i cant believe i am saying this
but listen to tarun
just give jai a chance
he loves you
oh man and her memmory is back
awesome job rivs
seee i still dont get pms
but i still read
even though no pms 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow....very nicely written.
So Jai & Bani conversation/confrontation soon!!!!

Waiting for the next update.....

Preeti.
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahhh rivya.....wats this hppnin.......tranky is playin gd...........errr hate 2 confss d fct.......bt thnks tranky.........n where is Jai
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Posted: 18 years ago
rivya,
i was sure that she is gonna get her memory back as she was in the similar circumstances which lead to loss of her memory. so great that she has got all her memory back, but now i want her to listen to JW and also listen what type of sister pia was and JW was not at all at fault and it was pia who has made this plan along with jigs and i want her to give a second chance to JW.

ur tarun is so great that i cannot think of hating him at all. he is so sweet and he is a true friend who has taken care of bani at the time of her sorrow and when she was completely vulnerable.

please update soon.

swati

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