Ehsaas (End, Pg 79) - Page 3

Originally posted by: nikhat_niki

hi rivya
i just read ur story today its very nice do cont
when i read the first two parts i was very confused but the next two parts i guess i'll slowly get the link
so bani or i guess binita has lost her memory n that child is of jai but how did tarun n she came to gether n where is jai?
jane do u better cont

Thanks niki for your kind words and also letting me know about the first two parts...i was hoping to hide the link between B and binita...but apprently all ya JB lovers did not like it..

She is defintiely married to Tarun and he loves her a lot...infact they are going on their first date in the next part..

thanks once again

Originally posted by: AMAL722

Please don't stop - I really like his ff
I would love to see B fall for Tarun and then come face to face w/ Jai.

Amal

I would also love to get TB together but then i guess people in this forum will kill me if i do that....also B does not have any recollection of her life before Tarun...so it will interesting how things go when she first sees Jai...

Originally posted by: Treasures

No RIVYA, please dont stop writing. I could not read for last couple of days. But I love ur FF. Please cont. soon!

thanks Treasures....with friends like you i would definitely continue...not sure if I will have time today....but will aim for later today evening...

luv rivya

Originally posted by: luv2bluved

i just read all four parts and they were awesome
i really hope u cont
pls do i can't wait

thanks hon...m glad you like my attempt....i love ur nick...i felt like that yesterday...i needed to be loved...or rather my ff to be loved....but with your response....life is better again....

Thanks...

hey just finished reading the allthe parts of ff very good how about bani or binita for some reason in the back of her mind remembers some things that is why she named her baby krish and now is the time when tarun takes her out she bumps in to jai and .........

Originally posted by: amiee

hey just finished reading the allthe parts of ff very good how about bani or binita for some reason in the back of her mind remembers some things that is why she named her baby krish and now is the time when tarun takes her out she bumps in to jai and .........

She has to regain her memory since this is a JB story...but the process depends on Jai, Tarun and how they meet (circumstances) too...

Also, you will be surprised how the name Krish came in...was wait for the update

Hello all,

I know i had promised an update this morning...but unfortunately I have not started typing anything yet...mainly because I was very upset with Jai yesterday...he slept through Bani's worries...how could her...thankfully my FF starts before this episode so I wont have to bring this memory back into my FF...

My plan for the next part is to discuss the new KJ movie...the rest of TB date...but I have a few questions about how you want me to go about it...your responses will be useful in shaping the story further...

1. Should the date end on a happy note? Meaning should Tarun be enocuraged in his process of wooing Binita?
2. How soon should Jai come face to face with Binita?
3. Should this meeting be in US? or in Mt. Abu? I plan on taking them back to Mt. Abu since I have a great surprise planned for Binita there...plus the story started there...
4. What are we going to do with Pia?

Please let me know what you feel so it helps me with the next parts...tomorrow is Thanksgiving so I will be able to post more than a couple parts before the weekend...
Happy Turkey Day to you turkey lovers...

-Rivya

how about binita and tarun are watching the movie and one of the actors name is jai and for some reason she feels connected to that name she keeps on asking tarun about the name jai and if it had anything to do with her past to which he does not reply any thing but gets the picture that bani can never be his since she only loves jai even in her amnesia all she can think is of jai. then all of a sudden there is some legal problem in india to which tarun has to go and attend it immediately but Krish is not doing well and even the patels are not here to take care of bani and krish if he goes to india and this time he did not know how much time it would take for him to solve the problem so he decides to take bani and krish with him to india. they reach mt abu where it had all started so many years back ....... krish is still not feeling well his fever is not going away it has been so many days so they take him to the hospital and .........bani rememberes something not really but just some black and white shadows and some voice calling out to her she doesnt know what it is but it sounds familiar but she cannot put fingure on it ...... Dr tells tarun that krish has some medical prob and that he requires his parents blood tissues to fix the prob he tells tarun to go do the blood work and tells bani to do the same tarun is in the dellima since he is not the father and bani's blood is not a match he has no choice but to contact jai.........

how about binita and tarun are watching the movie and one of the actors name is jai and for some reason she feels connected to that name she keeps on asking tarun about the name jai and if it had anything to do with her past to which he does not reply any thing but gets the picture that bani can never be his since she only loves jai even in her amnesia all she can think is of jai. then all of a sudden there is some legal problem in india to which tarun has to go and attend it immediately but Krish is not doing well and even the patels are not here to take care of bani and krish if he goes to india and this time he did not know how much time it would take for him to solve the problem so he decides to take bani and krish with him to india. they reach mt abu where it had all started so many years back ....... krish is still not feeling well his fever is not going away it has been so many days so they take him to the hospital and .........bani rememberes something not really but just some black and white shadows and some voice calling out to her she doesnt know what it is but it sounds familiar but she cannot put fingure on it ...... Dr tells tarun that krish has some medical prob and that he requires his parents blood tissues to fix the prob he tells tarun to go do the blood work and tells bani to do the same tarun is in the dellima since he is not the father and bani's blood is not a match he has no choice but to contact jai.........

Originally posted by: amiee

how about binita and tarun are watching the movie and one of the actors name is jai and for some reason she feels connected to that name she keeps on asking tarun about the name jai and if it had anything to do with her past to which he does not reply any thing but gets the picture that bani can never be his since she only loves jai even in her amnesia all she can think is of jai. then all of a sudden there is some legal problem in india to which tarun has to go and attend it immediately but Krish is not doing well and even the patels are not here to take care of bani and krish if he goes to india and this time he did not know how much time it would take for him to solve the problem so he decides to take bani and krish with him to india. they reach mt abu where it had all started so many years back ....... krish is still not feeling well his fever is not going away it has been so many days so they take him to the hospital and .........bani rememberes something not really but just some black and white shadows and some voice calling out to her she doesnt know what it is but it sounds familiar but she cannot put fingure on it ...... Dr tells tarun that krish has some medical prob and that he requires his parents blood tissues to fix the prob he tells tarun to go do the blood work and tells bani to do the same tarun is in the dellima since he is not the father and bani's blood is not a match he has no choice but to contact jai.........

quite creative i must say...but i was hoping to not go the route where they have to face each other becoz of Krish...I wanted them to feel the connection "Ehsaas" before Binita even relaizes anything about her past...lets see how we can incorporate your ideas....thanks for the suggestions...

As far as what is planned by me so far...the movie is definitely going to play a part in triggering a chain of reactions...wait and watch...is all i can say...