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Posted: 18 years ago
#41
omg omg.. omg..
dont stop there.
please continue...
i hope jai comes and helps bani out.
and hope that jai comes to his senses.. and.. actually.
tell bani..

continue soon
plewsss
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

Chap 9

ADULT CONTENT…UNDER 18 PLIZ DON'T READ

Ritesh started taking off his shirt….bani tried to escape but she couldn't….the only visible thing to her was Ritesh and the entrance door which Ritesh had locked. she ran for the door to give it a try…Ritesh grabbed her by her waist…Bani somhow escaped and hit Ritesh with a mop …

She ran to the corner where she had dropped her cell phone and quickly dialed jai's number..

Jai-"BANI!im sorry..kaha ho?"

Bani breathing hard and fast..-"jai help me!Ritesh …(crying) Janitors room.." but before she could complete her sentence she felt Ritesh's hands on her neck then it tightenedBani screamed..
Jai-"Bani …Bani!!
Ritesh threw Bani's cell away and made Bani face her.

Ritesh-"chalak ban rahi ho?"
Bani stammering- ."Let me go.."
Ritesh-"that's wat I cant do..i lov eu too much.."

Ritesh again kissed her. Roughly harder and harder………..Bani kicked him in his middle …he pushed Bani and Bani fell ….her forehead was bleeding

He came to her. Made her stand up and then he nailed her to the wall..

Bani crying-"pliz Ritesh…..
Ritesh touched her stomach….she held his hand to make him stop…..just then they heard knocking on the door and the knob been turned ..

He kissed her one more time
Jai-"BANI…BANI…." Knocking

Pia-"Bani!!

Ritesh –"DAMN." He ran away from the back door which was hidden in the darkness..

Bani couldn't stand now….she was crying she didn't have even the strength to open the door …Jai finally knocked the door open
They saw Bani hidden behind the trash can…sitting with kness close to her chest…crying….her forehead was bleeding ..her lips were swollen…and bruises on her neck…

Pia and Jai got the wrong idea..they though t that Ritesh had raped her ….Jai couldn't see Bani crying like that…
Pia went and hugged Bani..
Pia-"Bani..we are here..you are safe.."
Jai looked around for Ritesh but he was long gone..

Bani-" Ritesh…"
Pia-"he is not here…

Bani looked up to see Jai standing away from her….she could see his face ..he was helpless….she couldn't control herself and ran to jai and hugged him.. she didn't want to leave his arms…she felt warm …she stared feeling sleepy …
Jai made her lie on the bed and she knocked out…
Jai-"Pia …u sit with her I get the car.."
Pia-"par is halat mai ..ghar"
Jai-"yess….fine umm u go home tell Auntie that we are going for a field trip get her bags and we go somewhere else.."
Pia-"that will be better.."
Jai-"wait …I cal Bahbi …"

Jai called Rashi

Jai-"bhabhi…can u come here and pick Pia ..we have a problem
He told rashi wat happednd ..Rashi was shocked


Jai-"bhabhi u pick her and come and drop my bag and pia .."
Rashi came in 2o minutes and saw Bani lying on the bed…was depreesed bani was like a little sister she never had and she couldn't see Bani this way..shw took pia and went home and came back in 15 minutes…

she gave Jai his bag..and the farm house key he had asked for
Rashi-"tum kab tak aoge??'
Jai-'zakam sukne mai 5 din to lage ge.."
Rashi-„-I think I should check Bani if sh is hurt much ..Pia chalo…
Jai waited outside….10 miutes later they came out
Pia had been crying too.
Rshi-"Ritesh didn't get all the way.."
Pia and Jai were releved but that fact didn't help the emotional trauma she was going to face..
Rashi went
She couldn't control herself......jai wipes Pias tears-"chale?"
Pia nodded….
Jai carried Bani to the back seat and Pia sat beside her…."

The journey was about 2 hours…Jai stopped on the way to get stock of snacks and refreshments

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
chp 10

When they reached the farm house..Pia tried to get up and her movments made Bani wake up…

Bani climbed out of the car …jai was getting the bags out the car trunk
She ran to him….and hugged him-"im sorry jai I should have listen to u…Ritesh was not a good guy.."

Jai-"its not ur fault Bnai ..i ,made u angry …I shudnt have been so.."

Bani-"thanks for coming in time.."

Jai and pia couldn't reply to that…..
Bani-"hum yaha?"
Pia-"we couldnt take u home in this condition so we came here "
Bani-"mummy?
Pia-"they think we are on field trip/..
"
Jai-chalo undar…..

The go inside....Jai leads them upstairs and puts Banis bags in a room..
Jai-"Bani ..this is u room…tum fresh ho jaoo…"
Bani-"school day main holiday..im going to enjoy this.."
Jai and Pia looked at Bani…Bani was smiling and everything…Jia thought its better that way..they wouldn't be able to see her crying and upset…
Jai smiled-"tum nahi sudrogi.."
Bani-"wateva.."
Jai-"pia tumhara kamara is opposite Banis'here(he pointed .ok…I will be in my room bagal wala kamra ..ok.."
Pia nodded ,,jai went to his room

The girls lay on Bni's bed
Pia-"I got really scared when I saw u …lcrying..n messed up.."
Bani-"it was very bad …I tried to scream but my voice …I wasn't able to…but he was drunk I couldn't blame him for all u
know…its just his love made him do that.."

Pia knew that Bani was shaking to death inside but was trying to show strength ouside…
Pia-"u are crazy u no that!!"

Bani-"I know…
Bani got the flashback of what happende and her face fell..
Pia-"u shouldn't think about it …just rest ok…I go get fresh too."

Pia left
Bnai looked outside the window…trees sawaying…then she saw her reflection the window and then she saw someone behind her..
She scream,ed –" go away ..leave me !!

She didn't realize she was just imagining it..it all seemed so real to her jai and pia heard her and came running to her..bani-"Ritesh Iishere.."

Jai held her to his chest..she felt her head aching
Jai-"there's no one her..Bani..ur just imagining it..we are far from collebge he doenst know where we are.."

Pia-"pliz Bani cam down…u r going to be fine.."
Bani-"dnt lwave me u 2.."
Pia-"bahi hum nahi jayge ..ok...

Jai-" ha"
Jai winked at Pia but Bani didnt see it


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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
hey just finished reading all the parts loved the friendship of jai and bani's and somehow i think that jai also loves bani but is afraid to tell her what if she does not like him and he will loose her friendship same thing what bani is thinking
poor bani she had to sufferr such a trauma of nearly having being forced upon i hope jai will help her come out of her state
can you please update soon i cant wait to read more
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
great part!!!!

thank god Ritesh did not go all the way!!!

please make jai and bani confess their love soon!!

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

please cont soon
thanks
sunju


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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
OMG nice
stupid ritesh 😡 😭 grr i want to smack him so hard
LOL
😡
Jai to the rescue !!1 😃
Nice update 👏 👏
update soon
- rav
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
Great part.
liked it.
good that Jai reach there on time...and save Bani for that stupid Ritesh 😡
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48
hhahaah
thanks for loving jai and hating Ritesh ut dont hate him 2 mich he is mine
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Posted: 18 years ago
#49
hey sangeeta ........................

awesome part...............

jai is so caring towards bani...seems like he loves her too but is not ready to accept.....................

ritesh did so mad with bani but thankfully jai and pia came on time.....................

no place to end ..........update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
Hi

Loved this fanfic. read the parts together. Liked the friendship between Jai and Bani. So will we get to see some romance between them or is Pia going to make an entry into their life. don't tell me if its going in the track of kuch kuhc hota hai(Hope you know what I mean). I always love to see Jai and Bani together.
And that Ritesh Jai should have given him good
So the next update?.....
Bye

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