ff-kaha na pyar hai chap64 pg 45 6/12

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Posted: 18 years ago
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< just wana tell u that ff is something really close to my heart . i mean its got my story in it but with a twist... but ya its about me n... and once i started writing i could stop.. m in chap 42 now... bt typing it would take me time so bare with me.... and ya the 1st chap is nt that good bt hey ..its a start c wat u get ahead... hope u will like it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

It was first day of college and banis eyes were searching for her best friend and neighbour Jai.

He had come to the college early ,Bani had come from holidays in Sigapore last nite so she was sleeping when he had come to her place to pick her up as usual.

they were next door neighbours.

She looked around ……
then she found him….he was in the college canteen flirting with a girl …..as hunk he was Jai used it to his advantage.
Bani went up to him…-"jai"

Jai turned back –"ohh Bani, u here already?"
Bani- -"chale?"
Jai turned to the girl he was speaking to and excused himself'

Jai-"I came by to ur home but u were sleeping, so kaisa raha Sigapore!"

Bani and jai were friends for like since forever.. as kids as high scholl and now college..

but only Bani knew she wanted him to be more then just a friend….jai always teased her and flirted with her time to time but then again he did it with everyone….

Bani-"ohh Sigapore was a bomb… Shopping, my cousin n and me had so much fun!'

Jai-" aur mere liye kuch…ummm just asking?" Bani-"hmm hai par mera?????"

She put forward her hand and jai put a chocolate bar on her hand..she loved chocolate..and all thru the years it had been a everyday habit of them ….

Every morning jai would give Bani a chocolate bar…that's how it was ….it was their friendship….. Bani-"thank you!" She started to eat the chocolate.

Jai-"ahem ahem … "

Bani-"ohh ha.. tumhare liye yeh hai" She took out a cool ipod…..

Jai-"wow ..cool ..thanks"

Bani-"u welcum!,so did u miss me!"

Jai-"miss aur tumhe din bhar school main aur ghar ke bagal me rehti ho…. 2 mahine live was in peace!"

Bani –"uuuuu!!" She started hitting him ..Playing not literally.

Jai-"okkkk …I missed u .. a little" He started laughing Bani-"ha!!! Very funny!"

Bani-"ohh yaa my cousin and her family are coming back to india next week .

she gt admisson here already ..it s going to be such funnn!!!!

Jai-"is she hot"

Bani warned him-"jai….
She has neva been to India and ur gona frighten her away and give bad impressions of India"

Jai-"maybe I wnt!!" Bani-" chlao class start hone wala hai"
Jai didn't notice that she put the chocolate wrapper in her pocket……
Edited by sangeetarangdal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 that was a realli gd start cant wait for the rest of the chapters! awwwwwwww bless our bani has a secret crush on jai! well hu wuldn't! 😃 cant wait for the rest pls continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was great hun!!! 👏 great beginning! awww bani has a crush and that to our hunk Jai Walia! 😳 great job! please continue soon!

Love,
Godess
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o thts a gr8 college/teenager love story (as it seems now )

bani in love wid JW even before the ff started !!!!

plz continue cant wait to read more
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that's pretty good...can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool...update soon...great start...
👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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when ru gonna continue.....this is really good so far....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love your fanfic, especial since its based on a real life story.

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part 👏 ...please cont soon..........!!!!!!!!!

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