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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is a RLLY RLLY RLLY special part with one of my fav. songs--- the lyrics r just too beautiful! this part is DEDICATED TO MY JAAAAAAAAN----
guliiiiiiiiii!!!!! 🤗 wuv u di!!! 😛

part 6-

Bani Dixit continued decending the marble stairs as her eyes met with HIS… Her heart skipped a beat… was it really… HIM?

Pia: Bani!!!!
Suddenly, Bani's daze was broken as Pia grabbed her into a warm sisterly hug.
Bani: Hi di! Srry, tayaar hone ke liye itni der laga. I was so tired when Rano and I got here so I fell asleep.
Pia: Arre, koi baat nahin. You look GORGEOUS!
Bani: Di, aap kya baat kar re hain? AAP bohot bohot BOHOT khoobsurat lag rahen hein! Saab se achi!
Jai would beg to differ, but he was too busy gaping at his beautiful Bani.
Pia: arre, chodo! Aao, I want u to meet HIM. Your honewala jiju!
Bani slightly nodded and a slight smile played on her lips. Her di was truly truly lucky… and she was truly lucky to have sumone lyk Pia to give her luv and support during the most horrid times of her life.
Pia pulled Bani towards Jai.
Pia: Bani, meet the man of my dreams, my fiance, my jaan… MY Jai Walia.
Rano: Arre, kya di? Sirf aapki? Akhir… sali bhi to aadhi garwali hoti hain na? (ok… so my hindi is horrible! U noe wat I mean… just go along wit it!!)
Rano winked at Jai, who teared his eyes away from Bani unwillingly and smiled at Rano.
Jai (in a hushed, husky tone): Right.
Bani (with a slight giggle): Rano, bohot pyari lag rahi ho. Aur ha Rano, stop flirting with jiju!
Rano: Ish Bani di, app bhi!
Jai wore a sexii smile(haye… enuff said girls!)
Pia: Uff! Chup karo na! Jai darling, THIS is my sister-- Bani Dixit.
Jai extended his hand for a handsake, eyes back on Bani. She felt his intense gaze upon her as a slight blush crept to her cheeks. The same muddy brown eyes… the same killer smile… the same husky voice… She felt the heat of her cheeks rise as the blush deepened.
Bani put her hand into Jai's and a surge of electricity seemed to transpire between them… wanting to pull them closer and closer…
Jai's firm grip held Bani was he spoke slowly, his voice purposely oozing of sensuality.
Jai: Nice to meet you Bani.
Bani looked him in the eye, trying not to get lost in its depth.
Bani: Same here.
Hesitantly, their hands parted… slowly… savoring each touch, each moment in time.
Rano: Ummm… SOOOO pia di… how did our dashing mr. Walia propose?
Pia blushed.
Pia: Well, he propsed last night at a French restaurant during our candlelight dinner. Very romantic, right sweetie?
Jai was barely listening to Pia. It seemed as if Jai and Bani were having a staring contest… they were too lost in each other to pay attention to her world.
Jai: Uh huh…
Pia(excitedly): There were flowers, red roses Rano… u noe they r my fav.! And music.. Violins!!! It was rlly beautiful!! Right Jai?
Jai(looking at Bani with a teasing and subtle smile playing on his lips): Mhm… Simply beautiful.
Bani broke eye contact and the intensity was getting to be too much for her. Pia barely paid attention as she chatted away about Jai's propsal and how this function was organized as a last minute congratulation party by a very very jolly Massi.
Jai: Well Pia Madam… what about that dance?
Jai extended his arm once again and just as Pia was about to gladly accept, she saw sumone arrive at the party and screeched.
Pia: PUSHKAR!!! Oh jai, dekho na… pushkar aya hai! Tum… tum Bani ya rano ke saath dance karo… mein abhi aati hu.
With that, she gleefully moved out of the small circle and made her way to Pushkar. She was so happy to finally see him again… it rlly had been too long.

Meanwhile, Sahil came up to rano. He had been watching her for the past couple of minutes and was drawn to her beauty and vivaciousness. He luved the way her smile lit up her eyes as she chatted away mischievously. Sahil couldn't resist and hesitantly walked up to her.
Sahil: Hi, I'm Sahil Khanna, Jai's close friend.
Rano: Rano Dixit, Pia's younger sister.
Sahil: well, Ms. Dixit, would you lyk to dance?
Rano wanted to say "I'd thought you never ask" , but she decided to play it safe.
Rano: sure.
And with that, Sahil pulled her to the dance floor as the lights dimmed.

Jai: Well Bani, that leaves one only sis for me. Care to dance?
Bani: WELL, Mr. Jai Walia… not rlly. I dun dance.
She turned to leave. As much as she wanted to be with him, to feel his touch once again, to get lost in his eyes and loose herself to him and ONLY him, Bani knew this could never be and she harshly scolded herself for even thinking so about her sister's fianc. Her wonderful Pia di, whom she was forever indebted to.
Jai (in whiny, but sweet tone): Baniiiii!!!!
Bani turned around, heart beating fast.
Bani: Ha… jiju?
Jai walked up to her and whispered huskily in her ears.
Jai: It's just one dance SALI ji… I dun want to be lonely again…
Bani's eyes shot up at him.
Jai: On the dance floor I mean.
Her eyelids drooped down as Jai moved back a step. He held out his hand for her, only her. Reluctantly, Bani put her hand in his once again, feeling his warm touch, trying hard not to melt to it.
Jai pulled her close and put his hand on her bare waist. Bani shivered slightly from his touch and looked down. Jai was enjoying the effect he was having on her.
Announcer (use ur imagination yaar): Aaj ke shaam, pyaar karne waale ke naam!

The lights were dimmed once again as the song began to play.

Hey la la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
La la la la, la la la la, la la la la la la
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

Jai and Bani slowly swayed to the beautiful music, feeling the rhythm… the words beating inside them.

Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa, haan

Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai
Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

Bheegi bheegi alkon se, chori chori palkon se
Kyoon mera sapna churaaye
Jhunki jhunki ankhiyon se, dheere dheere batiyon se
Kyoon mujhe apna banaaye

Bani slowly looked up at Jai's passion filled eyes.

Meri nazron pe chhaaye, khushboo ke jaise aaye
Mera tan mann mahekaaye
Saanson mein yeh pal pal jaane kaise halchal
Kuch bhi samajh mein na aaye
Sharaarat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa


Sharaarat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

Bani tried to look away as Jai's grip just tightened. His hands slid further across her waist, sending a shiver down her back. Jai held her close and Bani couldn't bear to resist… not anymore

Meri hai yeh mushkil, ab to yeh mera dil
Bas mein huzoor nahin hai
Itna bataa de mujhe kaise samjhaaoon
Tujhe mera yeh kasoor nahin hai

Chaahe hum chaahe bhi to pehre lagaaye bhi to
Kaise din raat ko roke
Aag bina yeh jale, zor na koi chale
Kaise jazbaat ko roke
Yun chaahat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa, haan

Yun chaahat ho na jaaye, mohabbat ho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa
Dekha jo tumko, yeh dil ko kya hua hai

They were completely lost in each other.

Meri dhadkanon pe yeh chhaaya kya nasha hai, haan

Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa

Mohabbat ho na jaaye, deewana kho na jaaye
Sambhaaloon kaise isko, mujhe tu bataa
Both of them swayed in each others arms, as time, once again, came to a beautiful standstill.



Edited by angad4life - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
Oh man!!!! 👏

aww thanks sweety!!!!!! i love u too!!!!!!😳

that was sooo cute

dude forget pia and let jai and bani get married!!!!!!!!!!

plz cont soon!
Edited by Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
yaar, thank god you updated!!!! i've been waiting so long!!! LOL 😃 Haila, man you know how to make me blush! 😳 jai and bani were pretty much flirting! 😳 Loved it!!! 😉 please post the next part soon!!! can't wait to read the next part!!! 👏

Love,
Godess
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
hai..............so much passion......i hope pia doesnt turn negative when jai and bani become one forever.......

continue soon

CK❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

Oh man!!!! 👏

aww thanks sweety!!!!!! i love u too!!!!!!😳

that was sooo cute

dude forget pia and let jai and bani get married!!!!!!!!!!

plz cont soon!

thnx guli di. just watch wat pyari PIA does 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: indian_godess

yaar, thank god you updated!!!! i've been waiting so long!!! LOL 😃 Haila, man you know how to make me blush! 😳 jai and bani were pretty much flirting! 😳 Loved it!!! 😉 please post the next part soon!!! can't wait to read the next part!!! 👏

Love,
Godess

ur welcome! hope u lyked it! and yes, i was blushing while writing it as well 😳😆. chances r slim i'll update tom. tho😭

angad4life thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: canadiankudi

hai..............so much passion......i hope pia doesnt turn negative when jai and bani become one forever.......

continue soon

CK❤️

maybe... maybe not... haven't decided yet. OR jai and bani could never become one... MAYBE this is a JP (🤢) fanfic...

LOL😆 its JB dun worry😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
that was so sweet.really good.loved it.cant wait until jai and bani confront each other. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: angad4life

😃

thnx yaar! will take ur thoughts into consideration!

yaar! your FF is so damn good!!! just like Ziddi said, you should wait a while, it takes time to attract readers. keep going for us, your recent readers!!! 😃 this should definently be a Jai and Bani FF!!!

Godess

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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG...lil sis ...u rocked that...
👏
and once again i see..."my babii" yaar come on...
ok fine at least say "my and my Jaz di's babii"... 😉 😉 😉
great part as usuall...dont know why i missed the last 3 updates...its not like me...as gulli will tell u...i have a system..
😉 😉

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