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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 10

Bani(turning towards jay): "tum ab India mein hi rahoge?"
Jay: "dad insist kar rahe hai. Dekhte hai. Oh haan tumhare results kab out honge?"
Bani(screams): "results! Don't talk about it."
Jay: "why not?"
Bani: "kya hamare paas baat karne ke liye kuch aur nahi hai?"
Jay: "ok then tell me what did you do in these holidays?"
Bani: "see na most of my friends are out of station aur mujhe sardi ho gayi thi isliye no ghumna bas achchi bachhi ki tarah ghar mein baithna. Toh maine kuch latest computer games kharide aur all time busy in crossing the levels. Ruko tumhe kuch dikhati hoon" she went to her room and brought some letters and books.
Jay: "wow kitna achcha lagta hai purani yaadein taaza karna. All these letters and books. Great I feel like the same boy."
Bani: "hai na. mere letters aur gifts tumne sambhal ke rakhe hai?"
Jay: "why not? Am I that careless? Jab tum mumbai aaogi tab dikha doonga. Well tum log mumbai kab shift kar rahe ho?"
Bani: "papa keh rahe the kuch kaam baki hai phir hum log finally mumbai shift kar jayenge forever."
Jay: "that sounds great. (taking a letter in his hands and then reading first few lines) ye maine tab likha tha na jab main MBA padhne ke liye london gaya tha I mean wahan 1 mahina rehne ke baad. Sab kuch jaise aankhon ke saamne aa gaya hai. Zindagi mein kitna kuch badal jata hume pata bhi nahi lagta. Well bani mere letters se tumne meri kaisi image banayi thi?"
Bani: "look I was too small to understand most of the things. Your argument with classmates or victory in competitions or results ki jo feeling hai woh samajh mein aata tha but later on when I grew up then I realised their relevance. Par ek baat hai, waqt ke saath saath tumhare letters bahut serious ho gaye the and I was quite sure that you are a serious man and see I got it right."
Jay: "hmmm… ya actually pata nahi kyun I am just like that."
Bani: "woh isliye kyunki tum mujhse mile nahi the na I mean for a long time. Ab batao mere baare mein tumne kya socha tha?"
Jay: "is mein sochna kya hai? It's clear ki tum bahut zyada hi fun-loving ho or childish bhi."
Bani: "childish? Look I am 18."
Jay: "only by age"
Bani: "ok agar main childish hoon toh yahi sahi phir bhi tum se achchi hoon. Main apne letters mein school ki baatein, friends ki baatein, everything likhti thi aur tum toh rarely likhte the doston ke baare mein. Maximum time 'study seriously', etc. etc. etc. (looking at jay's wrist watch) by the way your watch looks great"
Jay: "really! (looks at it) oh it's already 11:10 I must leave now"
Bani: "oh no ye time itni jaldi kyun beet jata hai. Jay ek kaam karte hai kal shaam ko hum ghumne chalenge aur main tumhe apne kuch friends se bhi mila doongi."
Jay: "fine" he left bidding good bye to everyone.
Next day early morning:
Barkha: "chchoti didi aapke liye phone hai"
Bani(in a hurry to attend the call): "kiska hai? (takes the receiver)hello"
Jay(on the other side): "bani main mumbai wapas jaa raha hoon kuch urgent kaam hai pata nahi ab kab mulakat hogi. Stay fine aur ghar mein sabhi ko mere best wishes dena. Bye."
Bani(with the most saddened voice): "bye take care." She hanged the phone and went to sleep again with a huge disappointment written on her face!


part11 coming....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part11

A month later in mumbai:
There was a small party in the walia mansion. Jay came back from England. He knew that there was a party at home. He quickly got fresh and joined everyone in the party. But as he was a serious person his topic of discussion quickly shifted to business. He was talking to aditya and they stood beside the bar. Jay asked for a glass of drink and placed it on the table.
Jay: "jijaji is deal mein profit zyada nahi hoga (he takes the glass and as he goes to drink he finds it empty)….." jay looked confused he was not sure whether he had the drink or not. Then he thought may be he didn't remember. He asked for one more glass.
Aditya: "jay you see this deal is vital for future developments"
Jay didn't drink and placed the glass on table.
Jay: "that's the main point (takes the glass and once more finds it empty)….." jay had a look on the glass then here and there. He became quite confused. He asked for one more glass. He saw aditya having drink but with the one he began with. Jay thought of asking aditya but in the next thought it seemed to him that it will sound foolish. He didn't ask aditya anything. This time when he had the glass he held it tight and before he could drink he again started discussing.
Jay: "we can do one thing." He took a file and showed some figures to aditya. As aditya was busy looking at the files jay turned and saw the glass EMPTY! He knew this time he didn't drink. He looked all around but couldn't clear his confusion. Then he saw a mischievious smile playing on aditya's face. Aditya looked at jay and tried to act innocent.
Aditya: "what happened jay? Any problem?"
Jay(understood that aditya is trying to fool him): "no nothing" and ordered one more glass.
Both jay and aditya were continuing their discussion but jay was concentrating more on the glass. He didn't drink but was constantly observing the glass. As he was busy talking with aditya he saw the glass being taken by someone behind him. Jay immediately places his hand on the person's hand and held it tight without giving the least chance of escaping from his grip. He looked sideways to see a girl's hand. He brought the person in front of him by turning his hand around his head. He saw her and got surprised.
Jay: "tum. tum kar rahi thi ye sab" he looked at aditya. Aditya was smiling and was about to say something when jay stopped him.
Jay: "jijaji stop aap sab dekh rahe the aur enjoy kar rahe the. Main yahaan confuse ho raha hoon uska kya?"
Aditya: "jay tum galat samajh rahe ho ye woh.."
Jay: "rehne dijiye jijaji mujhe maloom hai aapko mujhe chidhana achcha lagta hai. (then turning towards the girl) aur tum. What's all this?"
The girl: "jay I don't know what you are talking about."
Jay: "oh really?"


who is the girl? find in part 12 that's coming up......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow atlast u updated and Jai and Bani met and waiting for the next part so zaldi update karo 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 12

Aditya tried to make jay understand the situation but he wouldn't listen to anybody.
Jay: "roshni tumhe toh bada mazaa aa raha hoga na"
Roshni: "jay mera yakeen mano maine kuch nahi kiya. mujhe koi batayega ye ho kya raha hai?"
Jay took the glass in his hands and showed to roshni.
Jay: "tumne 3 baar mera glass chupke chupke khali kar diya aur phir wahin rakh diya. But not this time."
He looked at the glass and to his greatest surprise it was empty. He thought that he caught roshni so it can't be her misdeed. He looked at aditya who finally gave up. Aditya laughed to his fullest and after he finished he indicated jay to look behind. Jay turned and saw bani hiding behind masi. Jay left roshni's hand and rapidly moved towards masi.
Jay: "bani"
Masi: "munna ye bani kaun hai?"
Jay: "masi aap jise apne peeche chupa rahi hai. Bani come out."
Bani came in front and she tried hard to control her laughter.
Jay(in an angry tone): "why were you doing this?"
Masi: "chod na munna, bani mazak hi toh kar rahi thi"
Jay: "by the way masi aap bani se kab mili?"
Masi: "arey haan woh kya hua ke.."
Jay(interrupting her): "ek minute masi main woh baad mein sunoonga let bani answer me first."
Bani(her throat got dry on seeing anger on jay's face): "jay sorry I was joking.."
Jay: "why?"
Bani: "what why? Mann kiya isiliye."
Jay(lowering his tone and shaking his head): "you are such a kid. Ab batao yahaan kaise?"
Bani: " plane se, phir car se."
Jay : "matlab?"
Bani: "matlab ye ke hum log 10 din pehle Mumbai shift ho gaye hai"
Jay: "10 din? Now I know masi tumhe kaise janti hai. Mere absence mein masi ko pata liya! Tell me one thing maine jab tumhe call kiya tha tab toh tumne nahi bataya."
Bani: "surprise tha! Waise ek aur surprise hai tumhare liye. Maine Mumbai mein hi admission liya hai so agle char saal toh main tumhara peecha nahi chodungi."
Jay: "char saal? Oh haan engineering toh char saal ka hota hai. Which branch?"
Bani: "chemical engineering"
Jay: "chemical good good. Classes kab start honge?"
Bani: "kal se"
Jay: "kal se aur tum yahaan party kar rahi ho?"
Bani: "masi aisa kahaan likha hai ke class start hone se pehle party nahi kar sakte?"
Masi: "kahin nahi"
Jay: "ladies I meant tumhe ragging ka darr nahin?"
Bani: "ragging? Tum chaloge na mere saath. Koi fikar nahi."
Jay: "main? Mujhe ek meeting.."
Bani(interrupting): "forget that meeting maine uncle se permission le li hai"
Jay: "ok. (he turned to find aditya and roshni still standing there where he left them) bani tum roshni se mili ho?"
Bani: "roshni? That roshni you wrote about in your letter?"
Jay: "ya that roshni but don't say her about the letter. That's our lil' secret."
Jay and bani went towards aditya and roshni. Jay introduced bani and roshni to each other but none of them were much impressed with each other on the first meet. After a while Jay went to the dance floor with roshni leaving bani and aditya gossiping and making fun of jay and roshni after they left.


that's it b4 new year. ab to agle saal update karoongi. tata
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
ohhh...this is an awesome ff....absolutely fun..until ofcourse Ms. Chopra showed up...ufff..kya hum isse bhaga nahi sakte....please do continue soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
oh man!
read the whole thing in one go!
that was awesome!
continue soon!
Happy New Year! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Love your comments. Thanks for reading.

Part13

Next day morning bani came to walia mansion and had breakfast with the family members.
Bani: "jay are we ready to go?"
Jay: "yea we are ready but main kyun uncle ko jana chahiye na!"
Bani: "papa ne kaha tha par maine mana kar diya. I am grown up mujhe apne friend ke saath jaana chahiye."
Jay(folding his hands): "ok meri ma ab chalo"
Bani bid goodbye to everybody and took her seat beside jay in his car.

After they reached college jay went with her to find her classroom and then surveyed the college building as they had time in hand. Bani was looking for someone so she excused herself for a while when jay bumped into saahil in the canteen.
Jay(surprised): "saa……hil, my champ! Aaj college ka rasta kaise bhool gaye?"
Saahil: "jay mama aap? Yahaan?"
Jay: "pehle mere sawaal ka jawaab do. Jijaji keh rahe the tum regularly classes nahi attend karte ho toh phir aaj kis khusi mein aaye ho?"
Saahil: "dad ko kuch nahi pata"
Jay(twisting saahil's ear): "achcha toh tere dad ko kuch nahi pata?"
Saahil: "ah!!! Arey mamaji kaan chodo, 1st year ki ladkiyon ke saamne kharab impression padega."
Jay: "toh ye baat hai? Jijaji ko nahi didi ko batana padega."
Saahil managed to free his ear from jay and ran away from there on seeing someone and went on pleading jay, not to tell jigyasa anything as he kept running. Jay was smiling and went out of the canteen where he met bani.
Bani: "na pia nahi mili waise tum has kyun rahe ho?"
Jay: "saahil mila tha. You remember saahil, jijaji ka nephew. Yun toh class nahi karta lekin tum 1st years ko dekhne ke liye aaj aa gaya hai. Keh raha tha ma I mean didi ko kuch na bataoon."
Bani: "ma?"
Jay: "haan uske mom dad ke divorce ke baad saahil aur ranveer jijaji ke saath rehne lage aur didi jijaji ko hi apna mummy papa mante hai."
Bani: "oh!! Waise saahil 2nd year mein hai na?"
Jay: "ya 2nd year of computer science. Pata nahi is ladke ka kya hoga? Ranveer aur is mein koi similarity hi nahi hai."
Bani(takes a look at her watch): "jay my classes will begin within 15 minutes. I'll have to go now."
Jay: "fine. Take care. Try to be friendly with everyone and obedient to professors. And before I forget, do you want me to pick you up after college hours?"
Bani: "no papa will be coming. Well bye!"
Jay: "bye and yes yes saahil tumhare class mein jaroor aayega. Just let him know who you are. Ok. Good luck."
As jay and bani were talking to each other hundreds of pairs of eyes were watching them from wherever they could. In the evening jay came from office and learned that his mother had gone to dixit house. He also went there and saw bani, kiran and Krishna having a chat.
Jay: "good evening everybody"
Krishna: "munna tum abhi yahaan?"
Jay: "haan wo main bani se poochne aaya tha ke 1st day class kaisa raha."
Bani: "it was good. No problem at all."
Jay: "and ragging?"
Bani: "hui bhi nahi aur hogi bhi nahi if..."
Jay : "if ?????"
Bani: "if you come tomorrow with me."
Jay: "for what?"
Bani indicated him to stop the discussion over there and went to bring tea for everyone. All of them had tea. Krishna and kiran started talking about the youngsters. Bani excused herself and mouthed from behind whatever kiran was saying. Like "aaj kal ke bachhe khane peene par bilkul dhyaan nahi dete. Apni bani ko hi le lijiye na. na thik se khana, na waqt pe sona. Mujhe to badi fikar rehti hai uski health ki par usey dekhiye koi fikar hi nahi!!" jay was observing this thing and found it quite amusing. He excused himself and joined bani.
Jay: "ye tum kya kar rahi ho?"
Bani: "mujhe maloom tha mummy yahi sab kahengi."
Jay: "well tumhari cousin pia mili?"
Bani: "nahi wo B.Sc final year ka class ek week baad start hoga so she is still out of station."
Jay: "ok. Now tell me tum mujhe kal fir tumhare college jaane ke liye kyun keh rahi thi?"
Bani: "waise to main sab handle kar leti but I think it's a better option if you agree."
Jay: "agree to what?"
Bani: "ummmm….."
Jay(confused): "I couldn't get it."
Bani(hesitantly): "wo kya hai na ke some seniors saw you in the college today and literally pleaded me to bring you tomorrow at college to meet all of them. You see they were all girls and were like awww…. after seeing you. As for the boys you are too famous for them to lay a hand on me."
Jay: "ok I will come with you."
Bani(jumped with joy): "thanks a lot."
Jay: "well bani the way you are jumping now I don't think they believed that you are 18!!!!"
Bani: "that you will get to know yourself that they believed it or not."

Next day jay went with bani to her college as early as possible so that he doesn't have to meet many of them but the situation was pathetic for him. Somehow he managed to get rid of them and left after bidding all the girls a sweet GUD BYE. Bani didn't like it.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part14

Six months later:

Jay was talking to dadi in aditya's house when jigyasa came scolding saahil throughout the way. Jay looked up and saw saahil trying to pacify jigyasa by every means but failed miserably.

Jay: "didi what's the matter? You are scolding saahil like anything!"
Jigyasa(in a loud voice): "anything? You said anything?"
Dadi(whispering in jay's ears): "beta ab tumhe bhi daant padne wali hai!"
Jay: "didi aap mujh pe kyun gussa ho rahi hain?"
Jigyasa: "jay tumpe nahi saahil pe. Ye ladka bhi na. Semester ke exams kaise huye honge maloom hai mujhe. Abhi exams khatam huye hain aur janab ko mil gaya mauka party aur badmaashi karne ka."
Jay: "saahil aisa kya kiya tumne?"
Saahil: "mamaji kuch nahi....."
Jigyasa: "kuch nahi? Jay jaante ho kal bani ke ghar ek get together tha. Abhi bani ka phone aaya tha. Usne bataya ke saahil ne uske neighbours ke gaadi ke headlights tod diye."
Saahil: "ma galti se toote the. It was unintentional."
Jigyasa: "agar tumhe pata tha ke headlights toot gaye hain to apologise karna chahiye tha na. bhag kyun aaye?"
Saahil: "ma sorry."
Jigyasa: "mujhse nahi. Unke ghar jaake kaho."
Jay: "chalo saahil main bani se milne jaa hi raha tha."
Saahil: "chaliye. Bye dadi. Bye (lowering his voice in fear) ma."
Dadi: "jay beta aate rehna aur bani ko bhi meri taraf se aane ke liye kehna. Bahut pyari bachhi hai."
Jay bid them good bye and left with saahil for bani's house.

At bani's house:
Bani saw saahil at the entrance and her eyes got filled with mischief. She was about to say something and then saw jay coming. Her expressions changed but saahil couldn't read them.

Bani(in a serious voice): "saahil tumhare mamaji tumhe drop karne aaye the?"
Saahil: "tumse milne aaye hain."
Bani(mockingly): "kyun?"
Jay: "come on bani give me a hug!"
Bani hugged saahil instead and led them inside. Jay looked at her surprised and realized that she was still angry with him. As saahil and bani went on discussing on how to apologise to bani's neighbours jay read a magazine and was stealing glances of bani. Bani noticed it and turned her face away from him. Saahil went alone to apologise and bani stood up when jay held her chhoti and made her sit once more.

Jay: "bani look at me. Please." The way jay pleaded that made bani turn towards him.
Bani: "jay you broke your promise. Mere class start huye nahi ke tum wapas England chale gaye and only few mails, no phone calls. Birthday par aane ka promise kiya tha na. you didn't turn up and sent an apology mail. It's not done."
Jay: "sorry bani. I know I didn't keep my promise, forgive me for that. Ab main finally India mein aur specially Mumbai mein rehnewala hoon. Wahan ka business ranveer dekhega. Well tumhara gift nahi chahiye?"
Bani(excited): "wow! finally tum yahaan rahoge? That will be fun. Mujhe aur koi gift nahi chahiye."
Saahil: "chahiye bhi hota to nahi milta kyunki mamaji ne abhi tak koi gift liya hi nahi."
Jay(smiling): "saahil I have her gift. Tum batao daant padi?"
Saahil(scratching his head): "(hesitantly) haan thodi"
Bani(laughing): "thodi ya bahut saari?"
Saahil: "ok I surrender! Hawa nikal di meri. Itna to kabhi college mein bhi nahi suna jitna inhone sunaya."

Bani laughed and jay smiled at it. They had coffee and jay gifted bani a wind chime. After having some chit chat which mainly bani and saahil did, jay and saahil left.


part 15 co...mi...ng...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey good atlast u updated and edit the title so every one will know that u have update and update the next part pls
waiting every time u update multiple parts right so waiting 👏
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Part15

Few days later:

It was a Sunday morning. Jay went to bani's house. On enquiring he came to know that bani was too busy to go and meet him downstairs. So he went to her room and found a completely rummaged room with bani struggling to get out of the heap of books and things. Her hairs resembled a bird's nest and her face looked pale.

Jay(surprised): "bani ye tumhara kamra hai ya kisi kabadi ka dukan?"
Bani(irritated): "is kabadi ke kamre mein aaj saaf safai ka kaam chal raha hai. Diwali mein exams ka excuse tha magar chuttiyon mein ek bhi nahi hai."
Jay(mockingly) : "poor child! I pity on you."
Bani was finally able to get out of the heap. She collected the broom lying on the floor and held it towards jay. Jay moved aside as he thought that bani was going to clean the floor. Bani again held the broom in jay's direction. Jay again moved and this continued for two more times. Finally jay burst out in irritation.
Jay: "bani what's the problem? Main jahaan bhi khada ho raha hoon wahin tum ye jhadu leke aa rahi ho!"
Bani(surprised): "oh! Tum samjhe nahi? Ye lo pakdo ise" and handed over the broom to jay. Jay took it with least interest and looked at bani as if asking "what's next?"
Bani(cleared her throat): "wo kya hai na jay, mummy ne mujhe ye saari saaf safai akele karne ke liye kaha hai aur tum to dekh rahe ho na meri halat! Is liye pleeeeeeeeeeease tum jara jhadu laga doge?"
Jay(raised his hand holding the broom): "main aur jhadu? Bani have you gone mad?"
Bani(turned away so that she doesn't face him and then in a serious tone): "jay tum apni dost ki help nahi karoge? Thik hai rehne do. Tum neeche jake tv dekho, dopahar ke 2-3 baje tak main sab kar loongi. Phir agar main zinda rahi to milenge."
She tried hard to suppress her smile. Her eyes got closed in anticipation that how jay looked like then? After much control she turned to face jay when she didn't get any response from him for a while. To her amazement she saw that jay had already started cleaning the floor with the broom. Bani felt bad. She went towards jay and snatched the broom from jay. Jay looked at her with surprise.
Jay: "kya hua bani?"
Bani: "jay rehne do. Main to bas yun hi keh gayi."
Jay (took the broom from bani's hand): "bani koi baat nahi. Hum friends hai na. tum aur main mil ke ye saari safai jald hi complete kar lenge."

Bani protested at first but on seeing how stubborn jay was she left the idea of protesting. For 2 and a 1/2 hours they continued organizing the cupboard, the shelves, etc. and finally at 12 o' clock the work was completely finished. Bani and jay sat on the bed and were breathing heavily. Bani then got up and took out a towel and a dress. She looked at jay who had finally fallen asleep. Bani came out of the bathroom after having a shower and found jay still asleep. She went to the mandir and returned to her room and saw jay snoring. She burst out in laughter. Her laughter made jay wake up and he jumped off the bed as initially he didn't realize where he was!


part 16 com....ing...

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