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Sareeta,
You wrote the poem so beautifully that you can feel the pain and the saddness of Jai's heart. How he is feeling and is not able to say anything. It brought tears to my eyes. A person who can bring tears to someone's eyes ... and is able to write with such depth...what to say...you are gifted...Excellent 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: shahni4

Beautifully penned!!!
Very emotional and true of Jai's state!!!

Thank you so so very much! 😊

that was brilliant! 👏 👏 👏

Stormy skies ....
Closing darkness...
Impending doom,
I cannot escape...

Helpless, I stand ...
Chains around my heart...
Burdened by guilt...
The dark shadows...
Mocking me...

Struggling to break free..
From the ghosts ....I go on...
Seeking the light...

Conscience shrieking...
Blinded by shadows....
Fearing the doom...
I stumble further...

These lines epitomize a complete paralysis by guilt. Got goosebumps reading it .

Very well written,Sareeta

CAT

Originally posted by: Jaseeka

👏 very good!! 👏

so toching ans emotional 😊

Thank you so much Jaseeka!

awwwww so sweet and touchy :) 😭 😳

Originally posted by: sughra2

u r alwayz welcum sweety..!!...wud like to be frenndzz wid such a sweet gal like u!!

It would be a pleasure , and I would love to be friends with you too!

THank you!

Sareeta

Originally posted by: himali_kokate

di
wonderful..lines oops poem....
👏

THanks a lot Himu! 😊

Originally posted by: Nidhiii

Wow...that was truly amazing... 😛

It so apt for Jai's current state of mind..

How do you manage to allways do this.....it's really touching 👏

Thanks a lot Nidhii... I am really really humbled by your kind words! 😊

Originally posted by: sigrid

Sareeta,
You wrote the poem so beautifully that you can feel the pain and the saddness of Jai's heart. How he is feeling and is not able to say anything. It brought tears to my eyes. A person who can bring tears to someone's eyes ... and is able to write with such depth...what to say...you are gifted...Excellent 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so very much Usha Ji. You have left me speechless with your kind words! Am so deeply humbled! 😊

Thank you so much for relating to the lines penned and feeling the emotion I was trying to convey!

Best,
Sareeta