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This content is removed as it is protected by copyrights and the published book of my poems will be released by Jan 2007.
Removed on the advise of my legal counsel and Publishers. Contact me for further details. Any plagiarism of this content will be subjected to legal stipulations.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Stormy skies ....
Closing darkness...
Impending doom,
I cannot escape...

Helpless, I stand ...
Chains around my heart...
Burdened by guilt...
The dark shadows...
Mocking me...

Struggling to break free..
From the ghosts ....I go on...
Seeking the light...

Conscience shrieking...
Blinded by shadows....
Fearing the doom...
I stumble further...

The light I see...
Bares the guilt... I hold...
Mocking conscience...
Baring the truth...
Enraged and helpless...
I seem to surrender...

Raging Storm...
Of Love and Guilt...
Leave me...Torn...

-Sareeta

-An attempt to pen Jai's current state , and frustration at his own self...

it's too touching..having tears in my eyes!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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yaar really nice words, really touching...mindblowing šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sughra2

it's too touching..having tears in my eyes!!

Thank you so much Sughra! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nancy_89

yaar really nice words, really touching...mindblowing šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Thanks a lot Nancy!! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Beautifully penned!!!
Very emotional and true of Jai's state!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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šŸ‘ very good!! šŸ‘

so toching ans emotional 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Thank you so much Sughra! 😊

u r alwayz welcum sweety..!!...wud like to be frenndzz wid such a sweet gal like u!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful..lines oops poem....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow...that was truly amazing... šŸ˜›

It so apt for Jai's current state of mind..

How do you manage to allways do this.....it's really touching šŸ‘

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