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Originally posted by: fsam

Sareeta you always do an brilliant job of bringing the emotions JW must be feeling to life. As usual greatly enjoyed reading your poem. I absolutely agree you are a gifted writer.

THank you so much Farah! It really humbles me that people enjoy my lines so much and relate to them so well! It leaves me totally speechless...😊

Originally posted by: sxcdevil

that was brilliant! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you soo soo very much! 😊

Hey Sareeta,
I would like to answer your poetry with a short poem of mine.
Here it goes:
A storm is brewing in my life,
Heading straight my way,
To take away all the happiness,
One mistake will cost me,
My life, my love the reason for my existence, my Bani,
Whichever way I look,
I see destruction heading my way,
What can I do to avert it,
I do not know,
A storm is brewing in my life,
Heading straight my way.

I want to restart my life,
Rediscover myself with my wife,
But everytime I try to forget that night,
She walks right in front of my eyes,
Who am I betraying I ask myself that,
Whichever way the wind finally blows,.
It will be me who will loose,
I cannot believe this is happening to me,
What can I do?
I do not know,
A storm is brewing in my life,
Heading straight my way.

I am sitting on a time bomb,
Waiting to explode,
Whichever way I look,
I think I am going to loose,
I am going to hurt the person,
Who loves me the most,
How will I face her,
Just looking into her eyes,
I find myself dying a thousand deaths,
Each passing day that I remain silent,
I am digging myself a shallow grave,
A storm is brewing in my life,
Heading straight my way.

This is also a delimma that Jai is facing being torn between Bani and Pia.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

Originally posted by: catcat

These lines epitomize a complete paralysis by guilt. Got goosebumps reading it .

Very well written,Sareeta

CAT

Thank you so much CAT. I am speechless now, I dont know what to say... People have related so well to the lines... It leaves me totally speechless and nevertheless humbled....😊

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

awwwww so sweet and touchy :) 😭 😳

Thank you so so very much! 😊

Nice poem , Manish...
Thank you for writing in! 😊

Sareeta

wow, that was beautiful written. I have to admit you are talented.

-Rimpy

Originally posted by: punjabi#1

wow, that was beautiful written. I have to admit you are talented.

-Rimpy

Thank you so much Rimpy!😊

jaanu as usual

Your words
Of Pain and Despair
Leave me... speechless


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Originally posted by: funky me !

yeah

Same here Sareeta!
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