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wow Aditee I'm soo addicted!!
fantabulous! 👏
I lovvveee this JW n Bani 😉
plzz continue soon!

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Originally posted by: aditee

Both are highly intelligent accomplished individuals
Let the sparks fly!

Its the engagement next, followed by a wedding!

At this rate the flashback is never going to end.......... 😆

Ya aditee, keep the sparks flying..........😉😳😉.............as it is Diwali is round the corner........we dont mind extra firecrackers😆. And adi, dont worry about it going too long, we will celebrate 1000th episode with a big bash.....and will wish you luck for more episodes to come.

( what better opportunity to post my 500th post😉).

Thanks once again aditee for the lovely FF.

Originally posted by: aditee

Thanks all of you!Its wonderful to read each and every one of your responses. Saniya I love your reviews dont stop!
THANK YOU FOR LOVING THIS GUY.
A FIGMENT OF MY SAKHIS' IMAGINATION 😉



She is too forgiving where her family is concerened, overlooks sins AND crimes (Papa's). He is too arrogant and short-tempered to behave consistently all the time.

I avoid making them both overly sentimental, emotional, mature or rational. I try and make it as close to real life as possible, as far as the impulse and spontaneity goes, coz thats how we are as humans.........


Both are highly intelligent accomplished individuals
Let the sparks fly!

Its the engagement next, followed by a wedding!

At this rate the flashback is never going to end.......... 😆

Dear Aditee,

We all could not be pleased more, than if the flashback would never end and thereafter their coming together would never end (KS forum continuing for years, just because of the updates of Aditee's, with hundreds of members yearning...😉😆 )

When Bani will finally accept the truth about her family, it will be a huge blow, enough to give her a mental breakdown, I guess. So perhaps she's better off, forgiving them. But deep inside, it should be gnawing at her.

Jai and Bani are consistent in their inconsistency. Their characters obviously deeply understood and felt by you.

We love those sparks!

How will she react at the engagement and the wedding? One can imagine she'll fight even more at those days, trying to avoid anyone other than Jai noticing.

Thanx, Aditee!

Maria

Originally posted by: aditee

Both are highly intelligent accomplished individuals
Let the sparks fly!

Its the engagement next, followed by a wedding!

At this rate the flashback is never going to end.......... 😆

Thanks again

TC

A

Thank u, Thank u, Thank u.😃😃😃
I love this rate of flashback.I feel the whole story is awsome but the flashbacks r mesmorizing.😛
Haila! everyone is more intrested in ur story more.👏

U know Ekta is stealing ur ideas.😭
See the list.Including look of the JW's character(it will be another list)
1 Tarun
2 Bani's plane fright
3 Ganna stall -Tea stall
4 Yesterday Bani said 'Poha'.Then I explain how ur JB eats 'POHA' to my family.OMG! my younger brother smiled & blushed (it was priceless)so cutely after hearing 'How JW eats the cashews cause Bani does not like the Cashews."😉
5 Tarun-Bani track.😡I do not know why they r following this now.

U know but they fail to achieve 'The magic' u create.😆I would suggest Mai's creatives that instead of stealing ideas start working hard 😡 or better start paying the original writer.

Plzzzzzzzz, Adi think seriously.We all want to see it as a 'Published Novel'.😃

That a man & woman of such disparate cultivation & distinctive dispositions could come together and share such a unique affinity seems outrageous , but that very premise is the allure of this story combined with the artistry of the author. Bravo Adi. U never cease to amaze.

J & B both are such bundles of contradictions. B wishes JW away but she demands his undivided attention. JW wants B in his life so fervently , but he manages to alienate her with his scathing (though provoked) responses. B asserts her independence but she enjoys JW's indulgence. JW is overpowering, overbearing but he concedes to B's chutzpah. She adores her father in spite of all but she questions JW unquestionable persuasion of her heart. JW admires her indomitability but wants to conquer. There is undeniable deep fascination but only way they articulate their passion is physically Their heads & hearts are 2 un co-operating entities. But at the brass-tacks of it all is they want to & do belong to each other.

And that was a scintillating ring selection section. Their repartees thruout the entire section were priceless.

Thanx again and may we continue to be treated to this feast for the eyes & the heart.

CAT

Haila Aditee......how does Jai manage to win every single time?!😉😆

Loved this part..........the way to described how Bani was feeling was excellent!👏👏

dear Aditee,

I was crying today after reading part 47 A.Tears were just flown from my eyes. I felt very bad for Bani today.My God how you can think so deeply. Awesome. Please continue soon.

omg omg omg
I had tears in my eyes when I was reading about Bani in 47A...it was so touching
exactly something a girl would go through and buddy mind you thats not normally wat I go through when I read your FF.
Like said earlier, I HAVE THIS HUGE GRIN ON MY FACE when I see a new part and then I slowly scroll down to see how long it is...the longer it is the bigger the grin gets 😃
I can picture the whole thing in my head...now I cannot wait to go to their engagement party
Oh and I know I am asking for a lot but umm can you do outfits with like pics, like you did at Banis friends wedding with the saari and all OHHHH and make it sweet and hot as hell
well who I am to tell you this, you know wat to doo.

LOVE the characterization, Bani is such a girl and hes such a typical man...gets worried when he thinks shes crying
tears the weapon, lol
much love
take care

Aditee 👏

Thanks so much for this lovely part. And I agree with Rupy, whenever I see you have posted a new part, I have the biggest grin on my face and it keeps on ever-increasing.

I am not being very expressive, but simple words like THANK YOU fail to even comprehend the appreciation for your writing skill and this fanfic.

And i agree, Jai and Bani over here are highly intelligent people. And yes, the truth is definitely that even with all sorts of issues between them, their constant feeling for each other is the ultimate constancy in their world.

I was so sad today when I read about Bani missing her mother. In this super-busy world, every day is like a challenge, sometimes we dont even have time to stand back and think about the loss of our near and dear ones, who otherwiseare in our hearts all the while. But it definitely takes a special occasion to make us regret that loss or regret our very existence. This part just touched a chord of my heart today and ...

Thank you once again for delving so deeply in human characters 👏 👏 👏

omg di..

it was fantabolous!!

bravo!

plz do continue!!

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