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You made me cry today. I have never cried reading a fanfic. You are just fantastic. Hats of to you.

awww !! Aditee that was fab !! howw do u mangee to do that !!
ur fanfic is sooo amazingg !! and i jst lovee the storyy !!!!
itss likee puree adddiction !! amazingg !!!!!
pllzz pllzzzz updatee soon....!!! will be waitingg eagerlii !!!!! fanksx hunii !!
and i fink ani nneeds to clear her misunderstanding regearding jai ....!!!
fanksxx hunii ! will be waitingg egaleri ! 😃

Wow aditee, great again 👏 . I have got the whole thing saved, right from Part 1 to the latest. Now it's 335 pages on Word and I told my sis not to miss it coz it's like reading a romantic novel 😳
Please do continue 😉

Awww Adi...my heart totally went out to poor Bani in this part... To say that you have beautifully penned down the tumult of anger, despair and self-pity that B is going through would be an understatement!! 👏 👏

Especially fell in love with the line about her wanting to buy an AC for her dad...It was very subtle but fully managed to convey the aspiration of a child wanting to provide every imaginable comfort to her parent...I am proud of B!!! 👍🏼...although under these circumstances I would say he doesn't deserve even an iota of B's regard.

"JW: Lets bet on it! Baneeee(husky!) If the first one is like me, then there is always the second or third... (can't conceal his laughter) Goodnite......... sleep well.... 😳 😳
Click!".... 😆....
Love the way he riles her with his witty remarks..He has an extraordinary intuitive sense of stating what would take the wind out of B's sails! 😉 😆

thanx for the fabulous parts.loved the ending lines. 😳 😳 i think,it is going to be a great time,with their engagement and wedding next.o god,i am already getting excited for them. 😳 😳

Di,
Thanks, I woke up, logged on and found update and you made my day............Just read once and after I come back I am going to read it more than once again deff...

love it..love it.......and love it ....👏 👏 👏

waiting for 47(B) & moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee partssssssssss

Plz continue soon................
All the best,

Khusboo

fantastic aditee. Highlight of my day, 2 parts. absolutely riveting . emphatize with bani, everygirl has dreams and she is shattered. JW ko to thora sensitive hona chahiye na, aise kaise kaidiya (about her father)uske muh par. bad boy. mera dil bhi dukhaya. Bani ko ma ki yaad ayi, i really feel for her.
I look forward to what you have in store for us next. Good job
👏

I have never felt a lump in my throat let alone cry while reading FFs. But you managed to do that today...47 A was super emotionally charged....brought tears in my eyes.....
Love it ...love it....just love it....
Neena

I got to work turned the computer on and went to India Forums and what did I see, u had posted part 47A so what did I have to do even before my morning coffee was READ IT!!!!

What a part, so emoionally charged!!!
And the ending,leaves you wanting more and more....PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!!

Absolutely loved the telephone dialogue between the two...They know each other so well....Wow you definatelly have a way with words......Aaj subah ka addiction quota dene ke liye sukriya.... 👏 Can't wait to read more....