FF:Dil Ka Rishta FINAL PT Pg 39(01/12/07) - Page 25

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Posted: 19 years ago
well continue soon
tht was a great part
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey guys,

Here is the next part:--- its not too eventful... hope you dont get bored!

The car went along a path Bani was not familiar with. It stopped and a man opened the door for her. She walked into the room and it was pitching dark. Then the spotlight fell on her and she saw nothing around her except bright light. Another spotlight then shone on…Riya

Bani: Sweetie, what are you doing here?

Riya: Oh mommy, Jai uncle came and picked me and he told me that we surprise you and so I came here with him and we are here as a surprise to you.

Bani: Oh honey. That is so sweet. I thought you were going for a sleepover though…

Riya: They told me to do that.

Bani: Oh…

Just then the spotlight fell on a third thing, it was a huge cake and around it were flowers and balloons. A voice came from behind somewhere, Bani instantly knew the voice was of Jai Walia.

Jai: Happy Birthday to you. Happy birthday to you. Happy Birthday Dear Bani, happy birthday to you.

Bani: Oh my god, Mr. Walia… yeh sab karne ki ka jarrorat thi?

Jai: Bani, tumhare liye yeh to kuch bhi nahi hai.

Bani: Mr. Walia, aap… main to itni shocked hoon ki main kya bolo mujhe maloom hi nahin hai. Aap jab subhe aaye to mujhe laga tha ki aap bhul gaye ki aaj mera birthday hain. And Riya bhi yaha par hain.

Jai: Bani, I don't want to just spend time with you but I want to spend time with my family.

Bani: We are not a family Mr. Walia. Its been just me and Riya all these years, we are the family.

Jai: Bani, we are a family, you just don't want to admit it yet. But we wont ruin the night with that yet. I want to keep you happy, give you all that you deserve.

Riya was getting bored watching the two of them talk to each other.

Riya: Can we do the next part? I am excited! Can we Jai uncle??

It hurt both Jai and Bani to see Riya call Jai uncle instead of dad but there was nothing they could do about it. Riya was a kid and as soon as she is told about the truth she might spill it in front of Tarun's mom. They had to continue these facades for a while.

Jai: Okay beta, lets do it. Bani I want you to sit down on that sofa there.

Bani: What sofa? It is still dark in here except for us.

Jai: Oh right, lights!

The lights turn on and the entire room lights up. It is a Huge hall filled with a lot of balloons and decorations. Bani turned around and saw the couch that she was supposed to go sit on. She couldn't stop the tears of happiness forming in her eyes but she wouldn't allow them to fall down.

Riya: Mommy, are you ready?

Bani: For what?

Riya: Okay, uncle what do we do now?

Jai: This goes out for the most important person in my life, Bani Walia. You are the most important person in my life so here goes our present to you. Ready, Riya?

Riya and Jai lined up on the stage and out of nowhere the music started playing.

are gore gore mukhde, chand ke tukde
kaali kaali zulfein, neeli neeli aankhen
are gore gore mukhde (be my love), chand ke tukde (be my love)
kaali kaali zulfein (be my love), neeli neeli aankhen (be my love)
khwaab dikhaade raah bhula de, hosh uda de sab ke
chain mita de, tan sulga de, mann mein de masti ghol
rock and roll soniye, dole yeh man tere liye
rock and roll my darling, my heart dances for you
rock and roll soniye, kabhi tu bhi toh mere sang dol
rock and roll my darling, why don't you dance with me too

it was one of the cutest thing Bani had ever seen. Jai had Riya in his arms and he was dancing with her, trying to salsa and waltz with a small kid. Jai and Riya ended the dance by pulling Bani off her seat and getting her to dance. The night passed so quickly while the three of them enjoyed together.

Bani: Mr. Walia, you were right…

Jai: About?

Bani: It does feel like a family. Riya fell asleep, we should probably be getting back.

Jai: One last thing.

Bani: What?

Jai: Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho
Kya kehna hai, kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai, tumko pata hai
Samay ka yeh pal tham sa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho…. Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho.

Bani remained silent with tears forming in her eyes. She remembered the first time he had sung that song, the love that she had felt for him had started around that time, and it never stopped growing, now listening to it again.

Jai: Bani, why are you so silent, say something.

Bani: What am I supposed to say? You told me "kuch na kaho"… I am trying to follow that.

Jai: I love you Bani.

Bani: I know you do. I am not sure if I am ready just yet to say it back to you again.

Jai: You will, I will wait for that day.

Hope you didnt fall asleep! Please leave comments and suggestions!

-Pari
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Posted: 19 years ago
simply superb
waiting for next parts.......
update it soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was so sweet...just loved the picture of Jai waltzing with Riya...
Find myself totally rooting for their little family to become one in fact..
mandu
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was so sweet and cute.loved it.simply superb.cant wait to read more.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hi guys,

I am so sorry! I have been really busy as I was moving from a house to another and it took a lot of time and energy but now that I have settled back into my house, I plan on updating more often, possibly every other day!

Here is today's update! It is a little short... but I hope you like it nonetheless!

Jai: I love you Bani.

Bani: I know you do. I am not sure if I am ready just yet to say it back to you again.

Jai: You will, I will wait for that day.

Bani and Riya got into the car along with Jai heading home when Bani's cell phone started ringing.

Bani looks at the phone and the caller is "Mom" (Tarun's mom).

Bani: Mom, how are you?

Mom: Beta, where are you? Why are you not home? I am worried sick here, is everything okay?

Bani: Are you at home? What happened to going to Tirupati?

Mom: Oh beta, we were on our way going there but there was an accident on the highway and we missed our flight, so we decided to spend the day at my friend's house and we just got home and its 11 at night and neither you nor Riya are at home!

Bani: Oh…

Bani was lost. She didn't have a respond to give to Mom and she didn't want to lie either but there was no way around it.

Bani: Maasi, where is Tarun?

Mom: Wait one second.

Tarun: Bani! I tried calling your cell phone over 10 times but you didn't pick up.

Bani: Oh, I left it in the car when I went in. But now what do I tell Mom?

Tarun tried to pretend a conversation with Bani as he thought of a plan: Okay Bani, I will come pick you up at Natasha's house.

Bani understood what he was trying to say and quickly said bye. She told Jai about Maasi having never gone to Tirupati.

Bani: Jai, I need you to drop me at Natasha's house. I will just say that I had gone over there for Riya and Payal to hang out but when my car broke down so I couldn't come back and had decided to spend the night.

Jai: Bani, I don't want to leave you standing out there all alone.

Bani: Jai, mom cant know the truth. At least not yet. We will think of a better way to tell her the truth, just not now.

Jai: Okay, I will drop you there.

Bani got out of the car and took the sleeping Riya in her arms. Jai went and parked on the side and sat in there until he was sure Tarun had come and picked up Bani. He made sure Mom was not in the car and came out to talk to Tarun.

Tarun: I am so sorry Jai. I didn't plan this.

Jai: No, we should have probably checked and made sure you got there allright. Well all is good that ends well.

Jai leaned over and kissed Riya good night and bid his farewell to Tarun and Bani. Bani got into the car and the three of them drove off while Jai stood there thinking about how Tarun was in his place.

Tarun: Bani, did you enjoy today?

Bani: I don't think I have been so happy since a long time.

Tarun: Bani, I don't want to ruin your day but there was a letter in the mail today and it disturbed me. Maybe it was just someone's rude joke but I don't want to disregard it.

Bani,
You seem to be enjoying your life… well be careful as there is someone
Watching you at all times… hating you… despising you…
Someone who you think is dead… might not be… someone like Pia.
-Your well wisher

Bani: That can't be true! Jai said that Pushkar and Pia got into an accident! How can she be alive? Did Jai lie?

Bani dialed Jai's number but the line came out as busy. She tried to call his house number and after 4 dial tones someone finally picked up the phone. It was a girl… a girl who sounded too much like… Pia.

-Pari
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Posted: 19 years ago
Haila ...ab yeh kya?.....yeh Pia kahan se aa tapki?
now have to know where you are taking us now pari.....this short update was dhamakedaar..

mandu
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Posted: 19 years ago
very interesting twist.loved it.superb part.congrats on your home.cant wait to read more.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh god what know poor jai just when everythings going okay
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Posted: 19 years ago
Oh God!
pia cant be alive!!!!

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