Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178

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Pooja

@kripa0521

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Posted: 18 years ago

#381

Hey Raaina,
lovely parts...cant wait for Jai and Bani to meet... and confess their love! Please update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😳

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Raania

@Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: kripa0521
Hey Raaina,
lovely parts...cant wait for Jai and Bani to meet... and confess their love! Please update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn 😳

thanks hun.......update...tomrw...heheheheh😆

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Pooja

@kripa0521

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Posted: 18 years ago

#383

ok if i survive till then... if not KS gang will be after you with belans..... 😉

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preet

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Posted: 18 years ago

#384

omg .youre are too good.superb part.really sweet, cute and funny parts.lovin it.too good.cant wait to read more. 😊

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Nina

@shahni4

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Posted: 18 years ago

#385

Raania
Multiple updates in a day !!!
Thanks so much for the treat!!!
Can't wait til JB meet and confess to each other!!!

Fantastic writing...you bring out the emotions so ell the reader feels them!!!

Don't end...Too bad they can't show it this way on KS....The cratives should rally read your ff to get great ideas!!!!

NINA

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debolina

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Posted: 18 years ago

#386

raania u write really well.i can almost visulize Jai.its 2 good.hope to read ur update soon.
debolina

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Raania

@Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#387

Part 25

Bani got in the apartment..well it was a huge one .....more like a house....getting in: Rashi...RAsh....rAsh???? uff yaar where are you...gosh what a day im so tired...maine subha bhi tram miss ki aur abhi bhi..bhouth bhook lagi hai dinner ko kya hai.....

Getting up she was sure Rashi was in the bathtub....going in the main bathroom...nope she wasnt there..areh!!!!maybe she was out

going in her room....not bothering to turn the lights on.....they lived little away from the main city so the city lights gave enough lights......taking off her dupatta and throwing it on the bed and than opening up the zipper of her kameez she felt a slight breeze on her back.....turning to the window...areh open kiu hai ....looking outside thinking of him...kash yahapar hoteh.....taking the remote from the dresser turning the radio on....

and oldie was playing

"meh agar pyar karugi kisisse
it will bhi kasamh se forever and ever and ever..."

Bani singing the song to herself turning to dressing taking her pinned up hair down looking at herself...her cell rang...leaving everything aside to answer it...she had forfotten it on the bathroom counter top

Bani: breathless ...hello...????
Jai: u know its a very bad idea not to answer calls...mobile ka matlaab hota hai....mobile...carrying it everywhere
BAni: sorry meh bhulgai....subha call ke intezar meh before she was going to say bathroom she stopped smilng...sorry
Jai: kaha rhak di thi ...let me guess...bathroom...
Bani her face changing color...tumhe kaise pata??? worried now tryin to pull the zipper
Jai: rhene do ...achi lagti hai....
Bani: now more worried ....walking up to the window to see if he was in the neighbourhood...nope.....turning she looked at her door...nope nothing......suddenly from her back a pair of hands grabbed her waist.....kissing her neck....

Jai: jasmine...inhaling it deep...i always love that smell in ur hair....
Bani: jumping with fright...: aap...barely a whisper...
Jai: meh..smiling and holding her...
Bani: yaha..???
Jai: yaha...still smiling and holding her
Bani: maine aapko dekha tha.....
Jai: really...
Bani was restless he was so close...and he was here....alone with her...in her room..oh God aab kya hoga...it was so much easy to talk over the phone...Bani trying to get away

Jai: dont Bani..maine kitne raateh yeh socha kar bitai hai...let me enjoy holding you ...feeling you......

Bani: taking his hands away slowly...grabbing her dupatta and putting it on her..: aap yaha really shy....

Jai smiling now as Bani lit the lights....looking around....noticing her black book on the dresser followed by a picture frame of his photo....looking at BAni who was a bright red.....looking down biting her lips......

Jai: miss me looking at her
BAni: smiling not saying anything ...to astonished to say or do anything....
Jai: please dont shut away from me now....mujhe mere phone wali chahiye....chaho toh meh call karu...hum aise hi baath karsakte hai

Bani: smiling ...iski koi zarurat nahi...kuch chahiye
Jai: ha masi arrange kar rahi hai...apparently i cant get what i want till all the traditional and formal things happen...his sleazy smile looking at her....

bAnI: going scarlet ...woh....maine khana ko pucha...kuch chahiye...chaye??? she knew he loved tea at anytime of the day...

Jai: yes please....Bani walked up to the kitchen and Jai ...as he walked down the hallway he noticed another pic of him and Rano....hmm he smiled...champ has been updated him on everything...on his way he grabbed her black book too..her diary....settling himself at the counter stool....

As Bani got the tea ready...Jai opened the book and started to read

" dear Diary..aaj meh bhouth hi khush hu....Bani's eyes flying to the book...oh no....what are you doing??? she asked without hesitating and not shy...she had to get it away from him...the diary had too many personal things in them......very personal about him...hey Ram..yeh aise kiu hai....running after Jai who was having a good time teasing her.....

Jai runnin with the book while Bani followed him...: Jai??? Jai/??? do na woh mera hai....following it ...trying to grab it.....Jai???

Jai: aao..??? take it from me.....waise bhi its not the first time im reading it...laughing out loud...damn it was good to see her ...hear her...feel her....

Bani chasing him....both ended up in her room......Jai jumping on the bed with Bani following him suite....soon Jai was on her....holding her hands up.....pinning her to the bed....

Jai: so Miss Dixit i meant to ask you>>>> kya aab bhi meh khadoos hu????

BAni looking at him...not believing it...he knew it......looking at him...ab bhi ka matlaab he read this long time ago...oh no...

Jai: well moving closer to her.....BAni looking up..eyes wide open...not blinking her eyes....Jai held her gaze and it wasnt easy for BAni to not look...she couldnt do anything else........both caught in the heat of the moment...neither letting go

Jai: whispering....Miss Dixit....tumne jawaab nahi diya

Bani 😲

......thanks guys...was online and this scene came up...enjoy 😉 do let me know.....

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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archita

@who am i???

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Posted: 18 years ago

#388

Haila i wz blushing lik hell😳😳😳....just read ur part 24 wz thinking whether it wz jai or not and u updated it....Thanks sweety else my whole day would hav gone thinkin wz it he or not!!!Now i can concentrate on my work peacefully.....

Loved this part.....its first time they both are all alone and bani wz so free!!!!!So is it gonna be their first kiss(paasionate) coming!!!!😉

love archie 😊

Edited by who am i??? - 18 years ago

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swati

@swatinarang

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Posted: 18 years ago

#389

g8 part. thanx for posting this part. u know after reading the last part my mind was on things like jai having affair with someone else in paris and just playing with bani's emotions.

Edited by swatinarang - 18 years ago

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

Rocker

Posted: 18 years ago

#390

😳
god i m still blushing
how can u come up with such excellent scenes 😳

so finally jai is in paris wow really liked their phone convesation

ur fanfic rocks if u post 10 parts aday still we wil be waiting for other 100's 😉 we are addicted to ur fanfic now

so abh plzz like a good girl dont torture as more jaldi se do post the next partS 😃

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