Ek Anjana Sa Rhista _Last Part pg178 - Page 41

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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG...if i could fill this whole page with "OMG's" then i would...... 😳 😳
😳 wow...wow..wow 😳 😳 ...yaar you have me all dreamy...hmm my imagination is running wild!
You make their chemsitry feel so alive so real...so nice 😳
I love the passion and intensity....hmm...let me guess what will happen....he'll kiss her....am right? Please say i am right 😆 😆 😳 !!
Yaar so happy that you updated two parts ( only read the second one now...as i only just got home 😳 )...
So when are you planning on updating today....sweetu hopes soon 😆 😆 😳 nahi toh.....blackmailing shuru 😆 😆 😉
ahhhhhhhi can't believe you are making ME wait a week...all i can ask is that reserve me a spot 😳 😉 ( you know what i am talking about!)
I LOVE THIS FF!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃
So...waiting MOST impatiently for the update my sweet friend....so when can i expect it??
PLEASEEEEEE cotinue soon....love this ff!
Luv
Sweetu 😳
P.S. Like this Bani and Jai. 😳
maardala 😆 😆 😉 mujhe haan!
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! when r u updating???? lol plzzzzzzzzzzzz soon!!!! we all r waiting!!! 😊 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG Jai in Bani's aptarment chori chori chupke chupke,😆 i think Raashi let him in
then him inside her bedroom watching her every move 😳 beshram ladka chori chori apni gf ko dhektha yeh 😡 😆 😳
Jai kuch to sharm karo reading a girls diary 😳
halia the last part left me blushing left right and center 😳 what a way to end
Bani don't forget the tea is getting cold
rani i would mind if you update 10 or 15 parts of this fan fiction the more i read it the more my heart wants kya kare yeh dil maang more, i can't never get bored of reading this
when are you going to write your new fan fiction
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
raaniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa,
we all r waitinggggg! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 You know how much I love this ff right? 😳
Well, when can this Sweetu of yours expect an update? 😳
Naah it is ok, take your time. Will be waiting though.
Take your time.
Luv
Sweetu 😳 😉
😆😆 aks about the update and you get it😆😆
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hi Ram...itna bada wait....now im scared what if i dont meet ur guys expectations yaar... 😆 phir bhi koshish karti hu.....

thank you all so much for your lovely words and comments...i love you all 🤗

Part 26

Jai kept looking at her…gosh she was so beautiful..no make up nothing but still…those beautiful innocent eyes looking up at him…

Jai: toh tumne jawaab nahi diya

Bani was really red and she was so uncormfortable…yes she loved this man but this kind of interaction she just wasn't aware of it..kabhi kiya nahi naa..isiliey……she didn't know all this…looking at Jai his hands pinning her down…: meh…mujhe….nothing coming out of her mouth…

Jai looking at her …and than his gaze fixed at her lips……he wanted to kiss her so bad…he wantd to kiss those lips but he knew that Bani was very innocent and unaware of these things and he had to do it right…he didn't want to scare her away from lives beautiful moments….those precious first times…..……

The front door open: B???? Bani…im home…sorry yaar got late magar Ranveer is in town and well his here

Bani pushing Jai out of the way…RAnveer yaha hai..getting up..her bangle entangled on Jai's chain….choro na…..trying ot free it…eventually Jai did…>>>looking at Jai who was very much amused….agar Ranveer ko patah chala toh masi..aur phir Rano aur phir….: u have to hide

Jai: Bani meh..why…crossing his hands….

Bani: nahi all panicky…my bathroom …in my bathroom..jauna….

As a laughing Jai not wanting to further embarrass her going in the bathroom….well I might as well go fresh up….

RAshi walking in the room…: areh BAni u alright…

Bani; ha breathing hard and straigtening her kameez…ha ofcoz…kiu??? Any problem and tension she was talking too much……im fine..straightening her hair….

RAshi: inquisitively her eyes shooting up and looking around: okay if u say so madam…chale Ranveer aya hai…him and the lot are working in London and so he came to visit….but u would know that winking at her…..

Bani going out of the room…closing her room behind…oh God I hope woh nikal kar aye na……: hi Ranveer…

RAnveer was the quiet one but looking at BAni he smiled and said hi and all…….after a few talks RAashi left to drop him downstairs and Bani returned to the room….

Jai in a towel wiping his hair with the other..what a pleasant sight…uff Bani toh gayi kaam se "mar dala"

Bani gasping for breath..: what are you doing??/ her eyes looking at him and than away and than looking again….

Jai: drying my hair…I figured dryer use karuga toh…u know ..hinting to her that they would know he was here

Bani: they have goine down for now …
Jai: good!!
Bani: aap mere bathroom meh
Jai: looking at her….he knew she was really uncormfortable……ha meh thumare bathroom meh…throwing the towel at her (well the one with which he was drying his hair..not the one u think ….)

Bani flushing taking the towel and putting in on her study chair: u have to go

Jai: no Bani I have an early flight to London tomrw….so I am spending the night here

Bani: here>???? Eyes wide open…scared …worried…happy…scared…

Jai: looking at her…here!!!

Going to Bani's closet…my baggage is in transit so I don't have anything other than the suit I will wear tomrw…and I cant wear that to sleep u know…do u have anything I can borrow

Bani: mere paas …thumare size….ohhhhhh…

Jai was fiddling in her closet…..looking at her clothes when he came across the sari: hmmmm…so tumne nahi laya tha kiu looking at her

Bani bechari turning a bright red moving to the closet…..closing it and opening the one next to it.a naked man in her room…and that who she was crazy about ….samal Bani …samal…!!!….looking thru her home wears…she took out her huge T that she wore to sleep sometimes and handed it to him…this is all I can do…….the hand rubbed against his shoulders and she quickly retraced her steps back…

Jai smiling putting the T on…..Bani starring at him….kya body hai…wow ….hw does he maintain it…samal Jaa….her inside telling her..stop starring like an idiot

Bani: mardala…ohhhh mardala….

Jai smiling at her..he was loving the attention and he knew why Bani was all nerves: this would work…I hav boxers …..taking out the towel…Bani turning around: aap kya kar rahe ho????…oh MY God…yeh kya kar raha hai she thought…

Jai: laughing Bani its okay….i have something on…but if u want

bAni: turning her head eyes closed….opening an eye looking…okay looks good…..phew…a huge sigh…..: smiling good ….theek hai

bani: are you hungry???

Jai: m starving..u know plane foods…..i stopped at the hotel Imperial but had nothing to eat as I was busy calling this girl who left her phone at home…scarcastic he was….getting on the bed…hands on the back of his head…looking totally relaxed……

It was a funny sight..jai in her T and her bed…..kya karu???

Bani: theek hai tum yahi raho meh kuch khane ko lati hu

Just than Rashi returned …areh hun u oky….u look peeved….

Bani: nahi toh …im fine……

Rashi: Ranveer wants to take us out to dinner…lets go….

Bani: nahi tum jao na…happy that she will be gone…..enjoy karo..meh kabaab meh hadi nahi bana chati

Rashi: oh common what will u do alone…lets go..aur yeh kabaab meh hadi..are you sure im not in ur way …and its not the other way around!!

Bnai: gulping air in..nahi I have a assignment due tomrw and I have to prep for the class tomrw…tu ja na…almost shoving her out the door….

Rashi knew dhal meh kuch kala hai …kher baadth meh dheklugi Bani ki bachi….: okay than..kissing Bani..take care n do eat….

Rashi left ….bAni her hands on her forehead…uff ..thank God she wont be back till late night….

Jai holding her from the back…..grabbing her waist…Bani holding the hands taking it out: aap kya kar rahe ho….

Jai: pyar

Bani: blushing ….pyar…

Jai: pyar…coming close to her…

Bani taking the counter inbetween the living room and kitchen as support…meh dinner taiyar karti hu…kya chahiye…

Jai: like I said it's a long process Bani…masi se baath karni padegi…..aur

Bani: looking at him smiling….abhi ke liye kya chahiye….

Jai: lets order take out…

Bani: hmm….what

Jai: pizza…bani made a face…..
Jai: how about Italian…bani made a face
Jai: how about dhal and lamb fried……Bani smiled…she remembered the first ever dinner they had,….magar yaha kaise

Jai: I thought so…smiling back sitting at the counter stool…getting his cell out and calling Ranveer….

Ranveer: ha mamaji….
Jai: tum yaha last year aye the…whats that Indian cusine's place name..the one that delievers…
Ranveer: smiling driving…..India Palate…
Jai: thnks..enjoy ur date…..
Ranveer: u too mamaji…both smiling their girls unaware of their plans

Jai calling India Palate and ordering….dhal lamb and naan's..and gulab jamuns…he loved them………

Bani was relieved she had a long day and didn't want to cook….oh his so sweet and caring…..agar hamari shadi hui toh mujhe roz khane ke baremeh worry nahi karni pade gi

Thinking what she was thinking she smiled…

Jai: care to share??

Bani: kuch nahi….

Jai: so what now…khana will be here in 20 minutes….

Bani: she really didn't want to be close to him…but what to do….aap kaha so ge aaj???

Jai: wherever u want honey??? Cheesy smile on his lips

Bani looking down smiling…woh Rashi ko pata nahi hai…toh aapko mere kamre meh….

Jai: all the better smiling now….

BAni: magar sofe pe

Jai his face dropping…kiu…we have shared my bed before…why not urs????

Bani: kiu ki urs was a king size aur mera queen hai….

Jai: all the better Bani…

Bani: nahi woh…..phone ringing

BAni: hello…jee Masi…ha Masi saab theek hai…jee…ha bus woh khana …jee… oh dhal lamb and naans……...oh hi Rano..yeh ….okay…aaha….yup…..half and hour later ending the conversation…..

Jai sitting restless his cell ringing: jee masi…yup..aaha….yah…wohi khane ja raha hu…kya…oh dhal lamb and naans…aaha…hi champ..yeh did u receive it…okay great..let me know….jee masi..bye..

Bani and Jai burst out laughing….both had been called at the sametime and were laughing hysterically…..Jai on the single seater sofa and Bani on the huge one…thank God they weren't caught…or were they??

Masi and Rano looking at each other puzzled….

Rano: Masi aapko lagta nahi ke dono ek hi dinner kar rahe hai
Masi smiling…ha Rano dhal meh kuch kala toh hai…
Rano: smiling….Di bhi na…badi hi smart nikli

Masi dialed Bani's home number…….

Bani: jee masi...saab theek toh hai……?? Worried that she called agan….
Masi: ha beta zara munna ko phone dena

Bani: jee masi…and than handing the phone to Jai and looking at him….oh no….reality struck her on what she just did…Masi and Rano giggling on the other side….

Jai looking at her..; oh no….taking the phone…BAni going pale…masi kya sochegi….

Masi: hmmmm toh yeh horaha hai mere na honese….tum waha kya kar rahe ho??? Bani ke paas hmmm???

Jai: masi woh …smiling scratching his head….meh…woh…u know masi…

Masi: ha ha I know….par meri bachi ko pareshan maath karna woh tere jaisi nahi hai……masi meant her words precise…

Jai: yes Masi I know……

Masi: jaldhi aa…mujeh chenai ki awaaz sunai de rahi hai…aab din bhouth door nahi

Laughing hanging up the phone…I love you masi….Jai was beaming

Bani looking at Jai…biting her nails….while Jai set the food on the coffee table …taking it out and setting it on his plate…relaxing on the sofa…..

Bani: kya hua?? Kaho na…???

Jai: wahi jo hona tha???

Bani: kya…scared now..???

Jai: masi ko saab pata chalgeya???

Bani: kya >???? Kya pata chalgeya???

Jai: wahi joh jan na tha…

Bani getting mad now..g.etting up taking his plate and putting it on the table and standing tall infront of him..: kya hua …mujhe daar lagraha hai

Jai taking hold of her hands n pullign her in his lap…..: Masi ko yeh pata chalgeya hai ke uske munna ne uske liye bahu khoj li hai….aur

Bani: realy red looking down…..Jai tilting her chin up….Bani continuing…aur?? Shyly

Jai: aur yeh ke meh us se bhouth hi pyar karta hu aur

Bani: turning deep shade of red smiling and blushing and looking elsewhere but him

Jai: aur yeh ke taking his hands and holding her waist hugging her…..aur yeh ke

Bani finding it difficult to breath..>jai's hold was really tight…she was almost lying on his lap now…..him sitting and her lying on the sofa on top of him….like he was carrying her sitting down….

Jai: that I love you Miss dixit and I want to marry you……..

Bani looking at Jai …her eyes not leaving his……she couldn't believe what she heard…what her ears yearned to hear ….the past few months finally making sense…..Jai starring deep into her eyes ……again he said….yes I love you Miss Bani Dixit……I love you very much…

BAni….. 😳

Dil Haay Dil Mera Dil Hai Dil
Kab Banjayega Tere Kaabil
Mera Dil Haay Dil Mera Dil Haay Dil)..(2)

Door Baje Shehnaai Shehnaai Shehnaai
Maine Dekhe Sapno Mein Doli
Banoo Main Teri Dulhan Haan Dulhan Haan Dulhan
Cham Cham Karti Paayaliya Bole
Har Kadam Kahe Humraahi Tu Main Hoon Teri Manzil
Mera Dil Haay Dil Mera Dil Haay Dil
Kab Banjayega …Haay Dil 😳 😳 😳

Tujhe Hameshaa chahoon Bas chahoon Main Kahoon
Tera Deewana Bangaya Jaaneman
Tujhe Bataaon Kaise Haan Kaise Main Kaise
Tere Liye Hai Pagal Har Dhadkan
Mere Haseen Sanam Aasaan Kar De Ab To Meri Mushkil
Haay Dil Haay Dil Mera Dil Hai Dil
Kab Banjayega … Haay Di

hope u like it....dheke age hota hai kya?? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG😆😆. HE FINALLY SAID IT😃
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG...
There i go again...😳
Was just thinking about your update....and got it😆😆😳 How nice...😃
Loved this part...nice and indirectly intense😆😆
Can i expect more parts like this....as like you said...you are very happy today😉😆😆.
hmmm so my prediciton was wrong but no completly off...no kiss?
so sweet Jai i a true gentleman...can't wait to know what will happen next...
😆😆 aur yeh Massi bhi naa...she figured it out...aur Bnai bhi...kithni innocent hai!
LOVE THIS FF😆😆 ( i think you have got tired of me saiyng this😳...magar meh kya karun?)
So uh when are you updating next?😆😆😳
This Bani and Jai's ff make my computer screen burn😆😉
Will be wiating for the update!😳
Luv
Sweetu
P.S. One week...how sad😆😉...but will still wait!😉
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
**sorry posted by mistake"
Really love your ff yaar😆😳
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
***sorry posted by mistake***
Love your ff yaar😉😳
Edited by sweetu144 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 😳 😳 haila finally jai said it he said it 😉 😃

wow abh armm as usual do i have to say it ok let me say it one more part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳
plzzzzz ek aur part ajj ke liye
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