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thanks so much yaar for all your lovely kind words š³ .....Sweetu and Sangita thanks yaar š
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i seemed to have developed a little bit of bronchitis in my chest and congestion in my lungs which isnt making it easy for me to breath and for this cough to go away....so got leave from work and m resting with the stupid medications š¤¢ ....but thank God today of all the days i can breath with atleast one nose..heheheh š š
I am sorry i kept u guys hanging but i know u all understand.... š³
I loved writing this fanfic and i enjoyed each and every comment i got on it..thank you all so very much all of you š¤ ...i was going to end it at Jai and Bani's wedding but due to some of the fans request i kept it going. š Now i am doing the last part....i know i know u all will kill me but yaar this is the story line uptil which i had thought of...and i hav this really crazy one going in my head that i will compile once i am back on track.....and will post that once i finish Kash š³ (and no dont worry that will go on abhi ke liye š )
Once again thank you all so much...i love youš¤š¤....
Last Part
Sabhi log tensed baithe theā¦..Jai kabhi chal raha thaā¦kabhi soch raha thaā¦aur kabhi in real worry would sit by masi
Masi: laughingā¦areh munna tu toh aisa kar raha hai jaise Bani kabhi anewali nahi hai
Adi: laughingā¦.karne doh na masiā¦..phela baarā¦is liye
Jigs: Aditya would u shut upā¦please ā¦..sabhi waqt mazakā¦.
Rano running in: jijs kya huaā¦is Di okayā¦doc ne kya kahaā¦.kya hua
Sahil hugging his wife of 2 monthsā¦.: would you relax honeyā¦sabhi theek haiā¦ā¦its not like teri Di ko kuch ghambhir hua hai
Rano punching in his tummyā¦would u just shut upā¦kabhi toh serious hoā¦
Sahil: holding his tummy kya yaar meh toh mazak kar raha thaā¦..abhi toh sirf do mahine huye haiā¦.aage kya hoga na jane..!!!
RAnveer and rashi laughing with their 18 months old boy chuckling in Ranveers armsā¦.
Rashi: hotah hotah hai Ranoā¦.teri bari ayegi toh sAhil ki bhi aisi hi halath hogiā¦.unlike some people who didn't have the time to be hereā¦indicating to RAnveer and giving him an evil side lookā¦.
Poor Ranveer shrugging his shouldersā¦: aab maine kya kiya??? A confused Ranveer looking as everyone laughed yet Jai set tensedā¦
Jai: getting upā¦I need to know how she isā¦.they have kept her there for the past 2 hours Masiā¦
Masi: areh beta hotah haiā¦.
Rashi: yes jiju hotah hai..i was there for 6 hrs before I went into laborā¦
The doc coming out smilingā¦: we are taking Mrs Walia into labor now if Mr walia would like he can join his wifeā¦
Jai: sweating and rubbing his templeā¦: mehā¦?? Looking at masi
Doc: its normal Mr Waliaā¦sabhi pati apne wife ke saath jateh hai underā¦ā¦but if u would rather waitā¦..
Jai: nahi nahi im comingā¦.loosening his tie and coat and giving it to adiā¦.
Adi: all the best buddy
Rano: yeah all the best buddy
Rashi: relax jijuā¦im fine nah..toh she will be too
A worried Jai stepped in with the doc into the operating roomā¦ā¦As his eyes met Bani's he managed to smile yet he wanted to hold something to steady himselfā¦..her hair all wet from sweat and her breathing was hardā¦.yet she was smiling at him
Jai: how u doing baby?? Softly he askedā¦as a contracting pain ran thru her
Bani shouted : doingā¦what do u think im doingā¦.holding his collar and pulling him to herselfā¦..ouuuuuuhhhh shouting againā¦..Mr Waliaā¦this is the one and only baby u are getting do u understandā¦ā¦
Poor Jai stood there as the nurses around him smilng: its okay Mr Waliaā¦.all the mother to be say this yet we keep seeing them again and againā¦bechara Jai rubbing his forehead and the other hand holding Bani's ā¦as she gribbed it so hard that Jai was having difficulty to breathe himselfā¦.ā¦.
Some 45 min later!!
As Bani sat in her bed with a nurse dropping the bundle of joy in her armsā¦.Bani had never seen anything as adorableā¦she started to cry as she touched the little hands and the headā¦.and the soft cheeksā¦one look at her and Bani knew that this little angel was going to be the apple of her fathers eyeā¦..
jai was standing on the side of the bed too mesmerized to say anythingā¦he couldn't believe the sight he saw ā¦the woman who had given him this happiness sat their with their baby in her armsā¦..his babyā¦..their new family ā¦their little joyā¦ā¦.watching it as if it was the most precious joy in the whole worldā¦ā¦ā¦.a single tear ran down his cheek as he smiledā¦..could anything ever be so beautiful in the whole world
Bani looked up at the exact moment as the same thoughts ran through her own mindā¦openly crying with happinessā¦ā¦.finished with feeding the baby the nurses taking the baby from Bani wrapped her up in the soft little pink shawl and handed it to the fatherā¦..
As Jai took the little bundle in his arms he began to openly cry aswelā¦and laughing at the sametimeā¦: my baby girl he whisperedā¦.my little princessā¦watching Bani and kissing her tiny foreheadā¦ā¦.as the baby made a soundā¦..making the two nurses and the doctors laughā¦.
Doc: its okay Mr Waliaā¦.u can hold her ..she wont breakā¦.she is just tender and softā¦ā¦in time she will grow to be strong ā¦.
Jai: barely a whisper ā¦doc my wife???
Doc: smiling and looking at Baniā¦..she is absolutely fineā¦..and will be on her feet in no timeā¦ā¦
Jai moving to Bani and sitting on the bed next to herā¦..kissing her foreheadā¦.: thank you!! ā¦.his voice cracking up from the emotional turmoil going inside of himā¦God, how does a man express his happiness ā¦..he was so happyā¦..
Bani smiling and looking at their angelā¦holding her hubby sidewaysā¦.: wont u let her meet the rest of the family..she whispered
Jai: standing upā¦.oh yeahā¦handing the baby to Baniā¦wiping his eyesā¦I almost forgotā¦smiling to go outside
As the whole crowd entered the roomā¦laughing with happinessā¦.. with balloonsā¦gifts for the new member of the family and flowers..beautiful bouquets for the mother and daughterā¦.
Masi: holding the baby in her armsā¦..areh Jai ..ladki hokar bhi teri jhalak hai
Everyone laughingā¦
Jai: masi meri shehzadi meri hai jaisi hogi right>???
Masi: ha ha patha haiā¦magar malum hai ā¦isme hamari Bani ki jhalak haiā¦..hamari pyari si choti si BAni
Jai: smilig and looking at his beautiful young wifeā¦.who had never looked as pretty as she did right nowā¦.ha masiā¦meri little princess!!
Everyone laughing and crying at the sametimeā¦Rano holding her little nieceā¦: Di iska naam kya hoga
Bani looking up at her husband with a questioning look..:
Everyone looking at Jai with eager eyesā¦.as Jai just looked back at his wifeā¦.
Jai: kiu ki isko aise raise karna hai jaise ki kisiki pooja aur kiu ki yeh hamari ghar ki rani hogiā¦ā¦Pooja Rani Waliaā¦ā¦
Masi: smilingā¦.yeh hui na baathā¦aab hamri rani bitya mummy ke tarah achi beti banegi aur na ki apne papa ki tarah badmashā¦
eVeryone laughingā¦..as they turn by turn played with the newest member of the houseā¦ā¦.before she started to cry and make her beautiful baby soundsā¦..in the end the nurses having to chase everyone out!
&&
As Jai walked into his room to find Bani fast asleep with his little angel in the middle of their huge bedā¦..smiling to himselfā¦.how can life get so beautifulā¦..getting into the bed he put his hand on her little body looking at her and than her motherā¦..oh God never take this happiness away from meā¦I had waited for a longtime after papa's death to find this inner pieceā¦and now that I have it I don't want to loose itā¦..
As he smiledā¦ā¦: I promise I will always keep u both happyā¦..
Slowly bani's hands covered his and he looked up to find her starring and smilingā¦..: I love you tooā¦.slowly softy she saidā¦..
AS Jai enclosed the distance between the mother and child and placed BAni in his arms givng space to the bundle in the middleā¦..holding herā¦: so Mrs Walia when do we start work again
A confused Bani starred backā¦.: huh??
Jai giving her his wicked smileā¦..: my dear innocent wifeā¦aab toh yeh innocence ko janedoā¦
Bani still not understanding : kaamā¦.but u went to the office today and Rashi is looking after the restaurant till pooja thori ā¦.
Before she completed her statement Jai just kissed herā¦.slow soft ā¦.very passionately ā¦..letting go of a dazed Bani who didn't know what got herā¦...
Jai: laughing at her reactionā¦.my dear Baniā¦.aab kaam par nahi laguga toh phir hum pooja ke liye Gaurav kaha se laye ge???
Bani: Gaurav??
Jai: Gaurav Jai Walia my loveā¦.
Bani smilingā¦: Jai ā¦hitting himā¦and pushing him backā¦sojaoā¦
Jai smiling: what kya galath kahaā¦.that was the name u had in mind rightā¦..
Bani: smiling yes that was the nameā¦ā¦aab sojaoā¦.smiling and getting ready to feed her demanding baby
Bani: bilkul appne baap par gai haiā¦.taking her baby and feeding herā¦bilkul ziddi aur stubborn
Jai: his hands at the back of his headā¦: ofcozā¦beti kiski haiā¦.
Bani: ha haā¦magar beta bilkul maa par jayega dheklenaā¦
Jai: on his elbowā¦.well well so beta ka chance haiā¦.laughing nowā¦.
Bani laughing nowā¦.as she looked at her husband in the most adoring mannerā¦.. š³
Some minutes later as Bani lay in her husbands armsā¦.: gdnight Jaiā¦ā¦. I love you
Jai: gdnight loveā¦..not as much as I do!
hope you enjoyed reading this as much as i loved writing it...this was todate teh best of my work that i myself liked...... š³
thanks so much yaar for all your lovely kind words š³ .....Sweetu and Sangita thanks yaar š
....
i seemed to have developed a little bit of bronchitis in my chest and congestion in my lungs which isnt making it easy for me to breath and for this cough to go away....so got leave from work and m resting with the stupid medications š¤¢ ....but thank God today of all the days i can breath with atleast one nose..heheheh š š
I am sorry i kept u guys hanging but i know u all understand.... š³
I loved writing this fanfic and i enjoyed each and every comment i got on it..thank you all so very much all of you š¤ ...i was going to end it at Jai and Bani's wedding but due to some of the fans request i kept it going. š Now i am doing the last part....i know i know u all will kill me but yaar this is the story line uptil which i had thought of...and i hav this really crazy one going in my head that i will compile once i am back on track.....and will post that once i finish Kash š³ (and no dont worry that will go on abhi ke liye š )
Once again thank you all so much...i love youš¤š¤....
Last Part
Sabhi log tensed baithe theā¦..Jai kabhi chal raha thaā¦kabhi soch raha thaā¦aur kabhi in real worry would sit by masi
Masi: laughingā¦areh munna tu toh aisa kar raha hai jaise Bani kabhi anewali nahi hai
Adi: laughingā¦.karne doh na masiā¦..phela baarā¦is liye
Jigs: Aditya would u shut upā¦please ā¦..sabhi waqt mazakā¦.
Rano running in: jijs kya huaā¦is Di okayā¦doc ne kya kahaā¦.kya hua
Sahil hugging his wife of 2 monthsā¦.: would you relax honeyā¦sabhi theek haiā¦ā¦its not like teri Di ko kuch ghambhir hua hai
Rano punching in his tummyā¦would u just shut upā¦kabhi toh serious hoā¦
Sahil: holding his tummy kya yaar meh toh mazak kar raha thaā¦..abhi toh sirf do mahine huye haiā¦.aage kya hoga na jane..!!!
RAnveer and rashi laughing with their 18 months old boy chuckling in Ranveers armsā¦.
Rashi: hotah hotah hai Ranoā¦.teri bari ayegi toh sAhil ki bhi aisi hi halath hogiā¦.unlike some people who didn't have the time to be hereā¦indicating to RAnveer and giving him an evil side lookā¦.
Poor Ranveer shrugging his shouldersā¦: aab maine kya kiya??? A confused Ranveer looking as everyone laughed yet Jai set tensedā¦
Jai: getting upā¦I need to know how she isā¦.they have kept her there for the past 2 hours Masiā¦
Masi: areh beta hotah haiā¦.
Rashi: yes jiju hotah hai..i was there for 6 hrs before I went into laborā¦
The doc coming out smilingā¦: we are taking Mrs Walia into labor now if Mr walia would like he can join his wifeā¦
Jai: sweating and rubbing his templeā¦: mehā¦?? Looking at masi
Doc: its normal Mr Waliaā¦sabhi pati apne wife ke saath jateh hai underā¦ā¦but if u would rather waitā¦..
Jai: nahi nahi im comingā¦.loosening his tie and coat and giving it to adiā¦.
Adi: all the best buddy
Rano: yeah all the best buddy
Rashi: relax jijuā¦im fine nah..toh she will be too
A worried Jai stepped in with the doc into the operating roomā¦ā¦As his eyes met Bani's he managed to smile yet he wanted to hold something to steady himselfā¦..her hair all wet from sweat and her breathing was hardā¦.yet she was smiling at him
Jai: how u doing baby?? Softly he askedā¦as a contracting pain ran thru her
Bani shouted : doingā¦what do u think im doingā¦.holding his collar and pulling him to herselfā¦..ouuuuuuhhhh shouting againā¦..Mr Waliaā¦this is the one and only baby u are getting do u understandā¦ā¦
Poor Jai stood there as the nurses around him smilng: its okay Mr Waliaā¦.all the mother to be say this yet we keep seeing them again and againā¦bechara Jai rubbing his forehead and the other hand holding Bani's ā¦as she gribbed it so hard that Jai was having difficulty to breathe himselfā¦.ā¦.
Some 45 min later!!
As Bani sat in her bed with a nurse dropping the bundle of joy in her armsā¦.Bani had never seen anything as adorableā¦she started to cry as she touched the little hands and the headā¦.and the soft cheeksā¦one look at her and Bani knew that this little angel was going to be the apple of her fathers eyeā¦..
jai was standing on the side of the bed too mesmerized to say anythingā¦he couldn't believe the sight he saw ā¦the woman who had given him this happiness sat their with their baby in her armsā¦..his babyā¦..their new family ā¦their little joyā¦ā¦.watching it as if it was the most precious joy in the whole worldā¦ā¦ā¦.a single tear ran down his cheek as he smiledā¦..could anything ever be so beautiful in the whole world
Bani looked up at the exact moment as the same thoughts ran through her own mindā¦openly crying with happinessā¦ā¦.finished with feeding the baby the nurses taking the baby from Bani wrapped her up in the soft little pink shawl and handed it to the fatherā¦..
As Jai took the little bundle in his arms he began to openly cry aswelā¦and laughing at the sametimeā¦: my baby girl he whisperedā¦.my little princessā¦watching Bani and kissing her tiny foreheadā¦ā¦.as the baby made a soundā¦..making the two nurses and the doctors laughā¦.
Doc: its okay Mr Waliaā¦.u can hold her ..she wont breakā¦.she is just tender and softā¦ā¦in time she will grow to be strong ā¦.
Jai: barely a whisper ā¦doc my wife???
Doc: smiling and looking at Baniā¦..she is absolutely fineā¦..and will be on her feet in no timeā¦ā¦
Jai moving to Bani and sitting on the bed next to herā¦..kissing her foreheadā¦.: thank you!! ā¦.his voice cracking up from the emotional turmoil going inside of himā¦God, how does a man express his happiness ā¦..he was so happyā¦..
Bani smiling and looking at their angelā¦holding her hubby sidewaysā¦.: wont u let her meet the rest of the family..she whispered
Jai: standing upā¦.oh yeahā¦handing the baby to Baniā¦wiping his eyesā¦I almost forgotā¦smiling to go outside
As the whole crowd entered the roomā¦laughing with happinessā¦.. with balloonsā¦gifts for the new member of the family and flowers..beautiful bouquets for the mother and daughterā¦.
Masi: holding the baby in her armsā¦..areh Jai ..ladki hokar bhi teri jhalak hai
Everyone laughingā¦
Jai: masi meri shehzadi meri hai jaisi hogi right>???
Masi: ha ha patha haiā¦magar malum hai ā¦isme hamari Bani ki jhalak haiā¦..hamari pyari si choti si BAni
Jai: smilig and looking at his beautiful young wifeā¦.who had never looked as pretty as she did right nowā¦.ha masiā¦meri little princess!!
Everyone laughing and crying at the sametimeā¦Rano holding her little nieceā¦: Di iska naam kya hoga
Bani looking up at her husband with a questioning look..:
Everyone looking at Jai with eager eyesā¦.as Jai just looked back at his wifeā¦.
Jai: kiu ki isko aise raise karna hai jaise ki kisiki pooja aur kiu ki yeh hamari ghar ki rani hogiā¦ā¦Pooja Rani Waliaā¦ā¦
Masi: smilingā¦.yeh hui na baathā¦aab hamri rani bitya mummy ke tarah achi beti banegi aur na ki apne papa ki tarah badmashā¦
eVeryone laughingā¦..as they turn by turn played with the newest member of the houseā¦ā¦.before she started to cry and make her beautiful baby soundsā¦..in the end the nurses having to chase everyone out!
&&
As Jai walked into his room to find Bani fast asleep with his little angel in the middle of their huge bedā¦..smiling to himselfā¦.how can life get so beautifulā¦..getting into the bed he put his hand on her little body looking at her and than her motherā¦..oh God never take this happiness away from meā¦I had waited for a longtime after papa's death to find this inner pieceā¦and now that I have it I don't want to loose itā¦..
As he smiledā¦ā¦: I promise I will always keep u both happyā¦..
Slowly bani's hands covered his and he looked up to find her starring and smilingā¦..: I love you tooā¦.slowly softy she saidā¦..
AS Jai enclosed the distance between the mother and child and placed BAni in his arms givng space to the bundle in the middleā¦..holding herā¦: so Mrs Walia when do we start work again
A confused Bani starred backā¦.: huh??
Jai giving her his wicked smileā¦..: my dear innocent wifeā¦aab toh yeh innocence ko janedoā¦
Bani still not understanding : kaamā¦.but u went to the office today and Rashi is looking after the restaurant till pooja thori ā¦.
Before she completed her statement Jai just kissed herā¦.slow soft ā¦.very passionately ā¦..letting go of a dazed Bani who didn't know what got herā¦...
Jai: laughing at her reactionā¦.my dear Baniā¦.aab kaam par nahi laguga toh phir hum pooja ke liye Gaurav kaha se laye ge???
Bani: Gaurav??
Jai: Gaurav Jai Walia my loveā¦.
Bani smilingā¦: Jai ā¦hitting himā¦and pushing him backā¦sojaoā¦
Jai smiling: what kya galath kahaā¦.that was the name u had in mind rightā¦..
Bani: smiling yes that was the nameā¦ā¦aab sojaoā¦.smiling and getting ready to feed her demanding baby
Bani: bilkul appne baap par gai haiā¦.taking her baby and feeding herā¦bilkul ziddi aur stubborn
Jai: his hands at the back of his headā¦: ofcozā¦beti kiski haiā¦.
Bani: ha haā¦magar beta bilkul maa par jayega dheklenaā¦
Jai: on his elbowā¦.well well so beta ka chance haiā¦.laughing nowā¦.
Bani laughing nowā¦.as she looked at her husband in the most adoring mannerā¦.. š³
Some minutes later as Bani lay in her husbands armsā¦.: gdnight Jaiā¦ā¦. I love you
Jai: gdnight loveā¦..not as much as I do!
hope you enjoyed reading this as much as i loved writing it...this was todate teh best of my work that i myself liked...... š³
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