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Posted: 18 years ago

I hope its not pushkar or tarun......i hope its Jai.....lol the hum apke hai kaun theme was awesome.......mind-blowing update

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Edited by canadiankudi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG I was laughing and almost falling of my chair, becahara all the guys got caught 😆
Please let the person be Jai but i think its Tarun 😕
plz write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg. its really interesting and everyone is sort of at a different age right now.. haha but good job for an intro. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE I CAN'T WAIT. PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 awesome part poor guys

plzz do continue it soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
CHAPTER 14

-Bani is walking out in the garden when she hears someone call her name, and then she feels someones touch on her back/shoulder. When she turns around she is shocked to see who is there. TARUN!!! (sorry guys its not Jai) But since Jai was on his way to give Bani her gift he sees that she is talking to someone. He stands behind a tree so they cant see him, but so that he can still hear them-

B- YOU!?!?! Aap yahaan kya karrahe hai?!
T- Bani im sorry. I should have beleived you. I am ashamed at everything that i told you. Muejh aaisa nahin kehena chahiyeh tha. Mujhe aapne galti ka ehssas hogaya hai. Bani i want u back. Main tumse shaadi karna chata hoon.
(Jai and Bani are both shocked at what Tarun is saying)
B- Kya?! Aapko paat ke aap kya kehrahe hai?
T- Haan Bani, paata hai mujhe. Jai mera bohot aacha dost hai, aur tum aab uske mangeter ho, lekin i love u. Jai se main baath karunga, usko main samjaunga. Tum baas haan kardo.
B- Main...
T- I know, ke tum Jai se pyaar nahin karti, aur Jai bhi tumse pyaar nahin karta. Chalo abhi chalo, andar saabko batah dehte hai ke tum mujhese shaadi karogi.
(Tarun grabs Bani and pulls her towards the house. Jai gets this stab of rage, jealousy. He dosent know why but he hates the fact that Tarun just laid his hands on Bani. Bani stands her ground. Just as Jai is about to come out Bani pulls her hand free from Tarun.)
B- Nahin...main aaisa nahin karsakti. Mr. Walia ko main dhoka nahin deh sakti.
T- Majar Bani ...i love u!
B- Paata hai ke aap mujhe se kitna pyaar karte. Aap hi teh mere mangater. Lekin jaab mujhe aapka saab se ziyada zarurat thi toh aapne meri saath nahin diya. Aapne kahaan ke main ek characterless ladki hoon. Lekin aap toh kissi ki baath sune ke liye tayaar nahin teh. Jiss haath aapne thama tha uski haath ko aapne chod diya. Agar Mr. Walia nahin hote toh paath nahin aaj main kahaan hoti. Main to barbad hojati. Mere saath saath meri choti behen bhi. Jiss haath aapne chod diya tha, uss haath ko Mr. Walia ne thama hai. Is parivar ne mujhe ek nahin, theen baar bachaya hai. Uss raath agar Mr. Walia nahin hota toh shayad aaj main iss duniyaan mein nahin hoti. (Bani starts to cry)
T- Bani main manta hoon ke main galat tha, lekin mere dil main sirf tum ho aur main janta hoon ke tumhari dil mein bhi sirf main hoon.
B- Jis din aapne mujhe se yeh rishta toda tha uss din mere dil mein jo pyaar tha aap ke liye woh khatam hogaya tha. Haan main manti hoon ki Mr. Walia na mujhese pyaar karte hai aur nahin main unse. Lekin mere dil main sirf Mr. Walia hai. Unke liye jo iszat aur bharosa hai mere dil mein woh kisi aur ke liye nahin hai, aur na kisi ke liye khabi hoga. Kaal meri shaadi hai unse, kaal se woh meri paathi honge. Aur main ek biwi hone ka har ek farz nibhaungi.
T- Tumhari zindagi barbaad hojayegi. Tumhare liye aaj maine aapne dost khoia hai.
B- Meri zindagi barbaad nahin, sawar gayi hai. Aur main janti hoon ki aap aur Mr. Walia bohot purane dost hai. Main unse yeh kehedungi ki aap ne mujhe se maffi mang li hai. Main janti hoon ki woh aap ko maff kardenge.
T- Magar Bani...
B- Nahin, mujhe aur kuch nahin sunna.
(Bani turns around and walks back into the house. Jai is left standing there thinking about what happened. Jai wasnt expecting to hear Bani say all that about him. He felt good. Knowing that Bani felt that way for him. He felt good knowing that he was the only man in her heart. Strange but good. Tarun then leaves, and Jai goes inside too. He looks for Bani but she isnt there. Massi tells him that she went upstaris to get changed.)

(Jai goes upstairs to give Bani his gift. He stops at the door and knocks expecting to get a moment with Bani alone. The door opens but its not Bani, its Rano)
R- Aare jiju aap, koi kaam tha kya?
J- Haan....nahin...woh...(Jai peeks in to see if Bani is there. All he sees is Anu and Jigyasa huddled around something, doing something. Then Anu turns around and sees Jai looking for something. She pokes Jigyasa and they know what to do.)
Jig- Jai bhaia aap, yahaan itni raat ko.
A- Jiju saab tik toh hai na.
J- haan...woh....mujhe...woh...Bani...
Jig- Bani toh change kar rahi hai, hum toh baas uski jewelary rak rahe teh.
J- Oh...he looks upset that he may not get a chance to talk to Bani alone. (just then the bathroom door opens and out comes Bani. All her jewelary is off, her face is washed so no make up and her hair is down again. She is still in her garga. Jai cant help but stare. She looks beautiful. Even with out anything to enhance it. The three girls just look at him and decide to leave.)
A- Jiju aap Bani ko todasa company dijiyeh na, hum abhi aate hai. (they all leave giggling like 4 year olds)
B- Mr. Walia aap, koi kaam tha.
(Jai is just staring)
B- Mr Walia...Mr. Walia...
J- Oh haan ...woh....(take out the gift box) yeh tumhari liye.
B- Isski kay zarurat thi. (She opens it to find the most beautiful set of pyaals she has ever seen. She loves them) Mr. Walia they are beautiful. I love them. Thank You.
J- Tumse kaam sundar (he thinks he was thinking in his head but he said it out loud)
B- Ji...(just then u hear giggles from outside)
J- Woh...nahin kuch nahin...main chata hoon ki tum yeh kaal shaadi mein peheno.
B- Ji...of course.
(Jai turns out to leave but bani stops him)
B- Mujhe aap se kuch kehena tha. (She tells him about Tarun coming and apologizing. She conveniently leaves out the part about him saying i love u and blah blah blah.... Jai says thank you for keepin his friendship in mind. Jai would call and talk to Tarun tonight)

(That night the girls all spent the night togther in Banis room. Like a sleep over. They had tons of fun. The guys were too tired so they went to their own rooms. Jai and Aditya are already asleep but Sahil is too restless so hes watching TV. He is watching music videos when a gril comes on the screen wearing a nice baby blue,halter sari. She dosent have the body structure for it, so sahil is commenting on it)
S- Why do girls wear things they shouldnt wear. To wear that halter you should be slim, and fit and that color isnt for everyone. Anu would look good in that, it would high light her eyes and her bo....WHAT?!?! why am i thinking about Anu? How did she get into my mind. She is just Jigyasa and Bani bhabis friend. Whats wrong with me...Sahil bete u r just too tired. Get some sleep. Unknow to him, even in his sleep he only saw Anu.)

...Chapter 15...the wedding...see if there are any problems...and what will happen to sahil when he sees Anu....wait and see...
Piku_S thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwwwww so sweet of Jai of buying payals for Bani has their wedding gift
i hope slowly they fall in love with one another
anu and shail😆 i hope sahil falls in love with rano
plz write soon
stonex thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part
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Posted: 18 years ago
I think Tarun is going to cause a prob in the wedding.

-Rimpy

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