Power of a Child-prt 10 pg 21-THE END:) - Page 15

Originally posted by: umz2k3

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Originally posted by: tiffany93

p.s- thanks for the applause!!😳

na na !! ... uhh hoo ! .. hgun u should know by noww !! . i dont takee taht evil smirkk !!.. u reallyy doo neeedd to udpateee soooonnn !! .. andd sooo n meaning SOON in capss!! ... 😆 ...ek to alreadyy u havee me in tearss na ...cozzz u ending the ff... which i reallyy dont want u to ! .. maybee u shoukdd contiueeee ! .. and if u arent doing that 1! .*sob sob* ..... this then meansss ... that u neeedd to providee mee with a updatee superrr quickkk !! .... 😉...nahii to .mee will be ...😭

Tofu ji (😉) I'm glad you listened to something I said atleast!!

Hmm, first bit was cuuuuuute!!😳......they both have a one track mind - Bani for food and Jai for...😉

Maybe he should bring out the strawberries again - both of their needs filled at the same time!!😆

Loved the whole emotional bit at the end!!.....it's great to see them finally communicating with each other properly!!👏👏👏

But why are you ending this?!😡

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

na na !! ... uhh hoo ! .. hgun u should know by noww !! . i dont takee taht evil smirkk !!.. u reallyy doo neeedd to udpateee soooonnn !! .. andd sooo n meaning SOON in capss!! ... 😆 ...ek to alreadyy u havee me in tearss na ...cozzz u ending the ff... which i reallyy dont want u to ! .. maybee u shoukdd contiueeee ! .. and if u arent doing that 1! .*sob sob* ..... this then meansss ... that u neeedd to providee mee with a updatee superrr quickkk !! .... 😉...nahii to .mee will be ...😭

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

wow.. 😳 😳 u r a rele talented writer. thank youuu!!!!!!! 😳😳
can't w8 for the next part... i'm writing it right now! LOL
hopefuli bani will have a baby now..yep 😆 am i right? you got that right!😉😆
waiting for the update. 😊 you might get it just now! LOL

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

woowww ! lovely part 😳 ! thankss!!!!!!! how can u say u have lost the touch of writring, u wrote such a beautiful part !awwwww i'm blushing like a fool here! thank you sooo much!!!!😳😳 👏
Please continue ASAP ! 😉will do!! i'm almost done with the ending!!