FF:Shh a night to remember(KC)Prt3+4Pg7+8 - Page 2

😳 Hello all,
Will try not to make you all wait...am just glad that you all liked the first part 😳 !
Hey and Aviva...thanks for telling me that my message box was full... 😃 !
BTW...as KS is falling apart, i don't watch the show anymore, i reccomend Banoo meh teri Dulhan...amazing show...watch it!
Vidya reminds me in some SMALL way of Bani's character....!
And hey...lets all not reach conclusions about Jai and Pia getting "Intimate"....as if that occurs...then there will be no chance of the two of them getting back together...
If they do want to show something between Jai and Pia...i suggest that she is all over him...he is not in his senses...bani watches...leaves with tears in her eyes...but after she leaves...Jai pushes Pia away...bursting I LOVE BANI DAMN IT!
ahh...if only that would happen...but one can only hope!
Will post part 2 soon!
Thank you once again!
Luv
Sweetu. 😳

yaar, sweetu!!! i just love reading your fanfics!!! 😳 It makes my day!! I'm glad that you've started two more ffs, really looking forward to the next parts! 😊

Love,
Godess

haye...that was really good...we all know the power of that voice... 😉 😳 ...cant wait for part 2 👏 👏 👏

No matter what happens in KS this week with Jai and Pia at lesst we have your fanfic to imagine what could have been!!!

Thanks - great ff please continue soon just what we need with all the torture we are bing put through in KS right now!!!!

Hi Sweetu,

Great stuff yaar, please carry on. I refuse to do any of my office work until I read the second part......please be quick though, I've got a lot of work to do before tomorrow morning 😆.

Your ff's are amazing...keep up the great work!

Nikita

Hey sweetu!!!
that was awesome dude!! just like your other fanfics!!!!
man i hope you post up part 2 soon!!! 😃

heyyy sweeetu hunn...!!
u rr fanifcc i s mazingg..
a grr888 storrylinee...!!
aww i realy want u to contiuee ...will be waitjngg eagerlii to read wt happeness nexxt....!!!!
aww i hopee the re0unitee ASAP...will be lukin forwardddd t read wht happenss nexxtt....!!
do contiuee soon.......hunii....!!
thnksxx
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Hearing her name, her frame tenses….
Steadying her self now…she says nothing…
His deep voice is still ringing in her ears…killing her… she feels his whispers searing her flesh…robbing her soul…
Why had she called him?

"Bani…(pauses)…why did you call me" Tone is soft and gentle yet still holds an edge of anger.
He is gazing out into the night…trailing his hand through his hair….
So many things are rushing through his mind….
Confusion engulfs him…moments ago he had never wanted to see her…but just now…knowing she was there…talking to him…breathing as if she were right near…near for him to touch…had brought back all that he had willed away… He closes his eyes as an involuntary groan escapes his lips…
How long had he denied himself the right to touch her…her lips come into view….his body tenses…..
Unable to stand the silence he demands now, in a still yet soft whisper…
"Why did you call me Bani (pauses…tone getting aggressive) what is it that you want now…."

Hearing his sudden change in tone…her body shudders…it still holds that same husky voice...but is now more demanding and aggressive…just like when it is just two of them…together…

She suddenly snaps out of her trance as she hears his anger rising. She takes the phone from her ears…observing it for second's straight…with a far away distant look.
She suddenly lets go of her hold…letting it fall…just hearing his voice fade further away…her heartbeat is running….
Her memories are all over the place…his firm masculine hands…his lips….her pulse rate….
Her tears fall…they shake her body…
Why had she phoned…when she …what had she been saying to herself…a new day…a new start….why had she phoned him…when she knew his reaction would be like this…never ready to listen…
All hunger is forgotten…


The phone falls, hitting the hard ground with a numb crashing…the button accidentally hits speaker phone…
She can now hear his voice echoing all around her…not just in her…

"Bani" so husky that it carves deeper into her…
He had heard something crash and fall….
He curses under his breath…holding his head…
Pain engulfs his heart….
He is received by silence…
"Bani" he whispers….

Minutes pass onto hours…both hold on…neither giving in to the test of silence and time.
She sits curled in a corner…tears streaming…why had she called him…to fix all that could not be undone…

Giving in finally…he sighs…whispering softly…his voice holds an edge of pain and exhaustion…
He was tired of playing games. Enough was enough…it was time to end it all…
He had hoped she would offer some small explanation from her games of "hide and seek"…sometimes with him and others just not…
"Why did you call me" Whispers softly… "Why did you call me….it is over Bani….it's over"

She hears the pain in his voice, she wants to reach out…
She covers her mouth as soft sobs stifle all…

"Bani ( is holding his tears back…) Don…don't phone me again…it's over…(pauses…) when I get the papers I'll send them to you….no more games…just enough…."

The defiant sound of a click and the sudden tone of an echoing end call surround her…
A single tear falls…

Minutes pass in silence…the words sink in "Its over".
His whispers echo around her, searing her flesh, going deep within infusing life into her…as if begging her to fight…fight for him…

Her eyes look up in sudden determination…and the moon shines as if in support.
She reaches out and picks up the phone, her ache for water already forgotten…

The conversation between caller and receiver is short brief and to the point.

She gets up now…glowing in determination…griping the phone tight…as if it will soothe all pain.
Going towards her purse she grabs it…and walks out of the house…like a ghost…invisible from all…from the party and decorations that surround…. just set on a path of fire…that will enlighten their soul…

The taxi arrives…
Her eyes are cold…she gets in
"Where to.." the driver asks in a brief curt voice, he notes her apparel and distant look…not wanting to ask further …he waits patiently…while she still holds the dead phone in her hands…as if for comfort…as it was the last place she had heard his deep penetrating voice, which left her at the door of heaven…
Her eyes close…her breathing increases…she feels him near…his touch…his intense eyes…already unfolding all…she gasps back into reality…breathing for air…
He always managed to, just with memories, numb her of air…

Seconds pass she says nothing…like a ghost…sits still…
Her red sari is sequined with gold … the moon shines further…
The driver asks once more…
"Where to ma'am…" Tone is pressed…and starting to get irritated…
Finally he hears a soft voice reply…
"Airport… I have to catch the 21:20 flight to…."

The driver zooms off….she is set on a mission…and altering her steps would truly result in death…namely her own….

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Late in the afternoon….two feet step out of the plane and onto a hard marble floor. Heels echo loudly…

20 minutes later…they near a hotel…
The footsteps are heavy yet determined…
Can sense an air of fatigue…yet determination and will fuels all…

A soft "knock" is heard….and a deep husky voice that could kill and send any woman to heaven is heard….
"Come in"…

The door opens…
Eyes meet and passion erupts…

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Hello all,
Waiting for your responses…
Do leave them!
Hope this part wasn't boring…
Like I said this ff is short!
Thank you for your very sweet comments!
Hope you all like part 2…
Part 3 is on its way…soon…in some time… ( its midnight here...so...??!!)
Luv
Sweetu.

Part three better come soon. PLEASE!!!