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black current

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

sweetu waiting for ur update really pls post it ant wait anylonger 😭

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Divya Harji

@divya_123

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

haila how come i didnt read this fanfic 😡
just read both parts
wow sweetu u did really made my day after that horried update which i read 😭
plzz sweetu plzz do post the nxt part soon atleast ur fanfic makes as stick to ks and jai and bani 😳

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Anam

@salmansgirl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

sweetu, i love ur ff. its so well written. i can't wait till the next part.

update soon!

anam

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Divya Bharti RIP

@ScarredLife

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

That was really very good... keep it up.. 👏

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

sweet jaanu please continue soon 😃

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sweetu144

@sweetu144

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

Part three….forever with you…

He sees her frail body standing in the doorway….his comb drops…falling aimlessly towards the carpeted ground.
His body is immersed in shock…
His eyes continue to gaze at her expressionless…after minutes of torture…he allows his sight to…. travel the length of her trembling body…drinking all ….they come to rest, stopping at her lips…
His want grows…yet self control is used to soften all urges…
But then all hits him…confusion burns inside his mind…
His hand curls into a fist….anger blearing in his eyes…

A hundred questions unfurl themselves inside him…but he continues staring…waiting…waiting for her to speak….for her voice to make his wants grow…

Her hair is flying (the window is open)….the chill bites through her flesh…yet to her all feels warm….
She stands, breathlessly, at his doorway…leaning a little on the wall for support. Fatigue flows through her; will power is all that keeps her alive…
She continues to stare at him…eyes never moving….
She notes his still muscular masculine frame, hands…so strong that looking at them set her alive burning with passion…his eyes…they hold her weakness…so intense so penetrating….she feels herself falling deeper…unable to speak…lost…

Minutes pass in silence…
His eyes are burning in a wild intensity of anger…questions flowing through them…
He breaks the silence with a soft whisper …
"Baneee"

A wave of shock engulfs her….his voice…penetrates through her…filtering her every movement…
Her eyes close…..body beating to the flow of his voice…
He is meters apart…but she feels he is right there…near her…whispering…his hands moving…so masculine…

He speaks again…in a low husky growl…
"Why did you come here" Tone is angry and annoyed…but holds a hidden want….
His eyes narrow, he folds his strong arms across his broad chest…leaning against the wall…waiting….
He gets no reply…she is still lost in a void of her own…
"Bani why the hell did you come here?!" His tone is now thunderous and exhausted…
His eyes burn in a flame of their own…

His thunderous voice booms into her ears…she shudders…shivering remembering his much softer one…whispered softly into her ears…when alone…in a bedroom.
"Baneeeeeeeee" His voice is soft and gentle hitting her ears...
Hold so tight…arms…lips…
She suddenly gasps out of the past…to face a very irritated man…meters apart.
Her cheeks are flaming…but her body is swaying…

"Have you come here just to gaze (pauses) or to play more games… it's over bani…(pauses) …are you even going to say anything" clear irritation is visible, his voice holds a slight touch of emotion and pain…
Her heart thuds at his words…worry burns inside…but then she smiles softly…at his impatience and demanding-ness…he was still the same…

Moments pass…her eyes study him further…
Finally she is able to find her voice…she whispers softly…finding her self unable so speak louder…
"Jai (Pauses…breathing fast….) I…I…came here for you" Her heartbeats are uneven…
The room spins around her…but still she holds on… her breathing getting laboured…
She looks up once more to stare at his confused yet still angered frame…
"Jai (stepping towards him…wind still blowing…)….." The sentence trails off…her eyes close….

A sudden pang erupts within her…and she falls with her very step, to the welcoming floor….

He sees her body waver...notes the fatigue and will power leave her…
For the first time since her entry into his room…he noticed how fragile she actually was…
Worry erupts inside him…
He changes his posture…opening his mouth to ask…but then he sees her fall…

His heart leaves him…thudding softly…
He strides towards her…
Taking her in his arms…whispering softly…
"Baneee…baneee".
She does not reply…
He cups her face in his hands….
"Bani please…please…" his tone is etched with worry...all the love fuses back…rushing through him like an unleashed river…
Her body is numb and still…
He still feels her faint pulse rate…
His eyes suddenly look up and out to the window…and it all hits him…
The moon…oh how it glows (The country he is in…it is night now…)
Pure passion of love overrides all emotions…
His breaths are deep and raspy…

Taking her now in his arms…making her warm body curl towards his…
It felt so good to have her close to him…
His eyes glow in a burning fire of intensity…his fingers dig protectively into her flesh…

"Baneeeee"
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Part three hope you liked!
Am waiting for your comments…hope this part was not boring!
KS today…what can be said…but that its going down the drain!
Ah well leave comments…am waiting!
Part four will be posted soon…
Luv
Sweetu.

Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago

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Mamta Singh

@Piku_S

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

👏
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so 😭 but good, i was imaging everything in front of my eyes
i wish with his own hands jai puts water in her mouth
plz write soon