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Posted: 19 years ago
WoooooooooW kya scene tha.
Aur Bani ka naya andaz 😳 😳 😳
Just to good Raania. Can't wait 2 read the next part plz post another part 2night.
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww sooo cute...plz plz continue soon hun..just loved it...damn good part! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
i hope she tells him the whole thing. can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwww subhe subhe hi morning date!!!!
wow!!!

continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part
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Posted: 19 years ago
raania...just caught up with this one...phew...it was like a chase catching up with updates 😛 😉 😆 ...i was sooo behind..this was great....... soooo bani....knows....thank god 😃 😃 😃 ...jai was getting worried for no reason..i wonder how the breakfast will go.....thats if they get there 😆 plz cont yaar...and if roshini does anything....just let me know...we will chuck her off a cliff...(it will look like an accident 😆 )keep it up 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago

Gosh Raania...........just caught up!!

Haila!!.............amazing parts!😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
Thank you all so much for all your lovely comments on this fanfic of mine.... 😳 i really enjoyed doing this fanfic and if u know me...i dont like to drag my story alot and keep coming with more different ideas!!!.....

This is my last part to this fanfic and i wont be doing a conclusion i think i have ended at a good spot😭 .....hope u enjoy it... 😳

Last Part 😭

Bani sat across Jai looking at him…pouring him coffee…..it was certainly a beautiful day…looking outside at the scenery…Jai sat gloomy looking at the same scenery waiting for the verdick like a prioner waiting to be convicted for a crime that was totally out of his hands………Oh God Bani please just say it and lets get over it

Bani: kitna khoobsurat din hai na??
Jai: hmmm
Bani: coffee piyoge??
Jai: hmmm
Bani: looking up…..lagta hai is saal barish nahi hogi kiu??
Jai: hmm in his own thoughts…
Bani: meh pagal hu na Jai…??
Jai: hmm….
Bani: hitting him on this hand….kya meh pagal hu???
Jai: nahi toh..maine kaab kaha…..

Bani laughing ….kya hua Jai????
Jai: kuch nahi Bani…bus thumara intezar kar raha hu…
Bani: kis baath ki???
Jai: u know what Bani

Bani: leaning back..no I don't know….

Jai: oh Bani commong yaar…I know u know that I know….so say it…meh is guilt ke saath aur nahi jee sakta

BAnI: relaxed sipping her coffee…: kaisa sach Jai

Jai: Bani…grunting his teeth…he didn't want to get mad…..that never helped him…..

Bani: hmmmm sach…okay lets start…kaun sa sach Jai…that when u married me u didn't feel anything towards me…..
Jai looking at her…..
Bani: that u married me out of pity and because at that point in time u lusted for me
Jai: looking remorse but looking at her intensly…waiting trying to be patient…letting her say everything….
Bani: putting the coffee down and leaning towards him….yeh sach ke thumara aur Roshni ka ek past tha
Jai: not saying anything and looking ahead to the scene listening to her….his jaw winching….grinding his teeth taking the brutal truth
Bani: yeh ki tumne mujse yeh baath kahbhi kaha nahi …..
Bani: phele tumhe koi farq nahi partah tha….aur jab parah toh tumhe laga ke bhouth der hogai hai

Jai looking at her…she was speaking what he was battling to tell her inside of him
Bani: I lost my memory and that's when it c licked to you huh Jai …bani looking at hm with a deep serious expression on her face…she wanted all this to be cleared this year is going to be a new beginning to their marriage….

Jai: feeling really really sad yet listening and taking in everything she said….

Bani: the fact that us accident meh thumari koi fault nahi thi and it was a mere coincidence what happened when it happened…..and the point of realization for you that what u felt for me….was indeed something u hadn't expected in ur life to happen

Jai just starring at her…..she is going to get up and leave..leave me all alone

Bani: sach yeh hai ki Mr Jai Walia that u had not realized but the past few months before the accident u were neglecting me as ur wife…u had taken for granted that I was ur wife and that I was there with u for u when u returned home from that office of urs…that I would know without u telling me that u care for me……but that's not the truth jai…..because when that accident happened and I had not regained consciousness in the next 2 days…that's when it haunted to you that I mean more to you than u ever imagined…that the first thing u were going to do when I woke up was tell me that u loved me and could not live without me…that Roshni never was nor will be anything to you….and that ..and that you love me…KIu

Jai looking at her…she had said what he yearned to say from his heart….but Bani was so serious it was hard to make out was it for good or for bad what she was saying

Bani continued: but Jai what u didnt know was that I was going to loose my memort…kiu Jai…..

Bani: but I saw what u didn't see ……after that accident happened u were a brand new man….i saw a different side to my Jai Walia that I had not known existed…..he was changed…he had become more caring….soft and humble…he started to take into consideration to what I loved doing ….eating ….thinking….eveyrthing…..he took more care to his work to finish it up on time so that when he comes home to his wife…he really comes to his wife and not see her and off to the study……the man who got so terrified when last night out of the blue I disappeared from our party…

Bani: getting up….Jai looked at her and knew it that was it…she was telling him what he dragged to hear the past few months…she was leaving him…she was telling him it was all over….she was

Bani: getting up and moving to him….bending down taking his face in her hands and looking deep in his eyes: kub tumhe pata chalega that I love you stupid man….i love you more than anything and agar tum mujhe pyar nahi bhi karte phir bhi meh tumhe chor kar kahi nahi janewali….Jai looked up into her eyes tears in his…..dropping unashamedly on his cheeks….

Bani wiping them away looking at him…: you and your family mean the world to me…. Kaam samjho ge tum….when I remembered everything last night I didn't think as to what u did but what u are doing….sabhi se galati hoti hai…mujse bhi hua tha…..so who am I to judge….all I know is that I love you and your happiness means the world to me…….kissing his left cheek and right and than his forehead…..

Jai getting up and hugging her…unaware of the stares on them….he was relieved…she loved him back for who he is ……all that matters was the woman he loved was there in his arms…the world seemed so perfect…

Jai: w ith a groggy voice from all the emotional turmoil inside him …I love you
Bani …..thank you …. for loving me back….i love you and hugged Bani really tight…..really really tight ..never ever to let her go…..!

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🤗 love you all.....thanks R 😳
Edited by Raania - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
thank uuuuuuuuu 😳...raania that was toooooo emotional 😭 ....abb mein kya khahon.....and plus..this is the last update 😭 .....i just wanna say...i luved reading this ff...and waiting for an update everyday....plz think of sumething else soon and start another one.....oooohhhh...and i LUUUUUVVV happy endings 😆 ur da best ...and keep them coming...this might be the end of this one...but i am sure there's gonna be many more.....keep it up 👏 ....(i am going all senti now 😆 😆 )

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Edited by TINK - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Raaniaaaaaaaa amazing job. Your last part is so emotional i just love it. But please, wrote an other ff please i'm just addicted to your ff. The other one "ek anjana sa rishta" is just wondeful.

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